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    High as fuck freestyle (a tired 8 bars)i thrive in

    im high as fuclllllklk..............................

    okaay, the fact is, im spittin saliva lava in my matress
    to relapse myself, and not collapse like a c list actress
    im the fastest rap scalion to run around the atlas
    with fashions ranging from having black and white matching
    i fascinate even myself with lyrics while im high
    you better fear it like when your passing elm street by
    grinning with red teeth, positioned to hunt and eat
    and defeat any antalope with a mic between the hooves on their feet
    im killing this beat while being recorded for poughkeepsie tapes
    im the guy whos chasing that chick in the kitchen, its great
    its fate, so dont debate its nothing, its not a compromise
    im the most bloodthirsting villian who cant be killed and never dies
    I thrive in the hate that breeds between your heart and soul
    fueled by coal, my fiery mind can burn a whole in your core
    my tongues the sword, slicing up and down like a bungee cord
    and ill finish up the rap with a, "fuck you whore!!!!!!!!!!"

    im going to slep.............................................. ..........sl[e[e[p

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    Re: High as fuck freestyle (a tired 8 bars)i thriv

    my feedback raps:

    twilight zone
    call of duty

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    Re: High as fuck freestyle (a tired 8 bars)i thriv

    weak, no concept to this, just very random. You had a decent flow going for the most part, but besides that this was pretty bad. Try coming up with a topic that you want to write about and stay on track with it or else people are just going to rip you everytime you drop something. Stay up.

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    Re: High as fuck freestyle (a tired 8 bars)i thriv

    lol i was high as fuck man so relax

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