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    Soule
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    A Diamond Sky Over Castle Towers

    She was hard to approach, so he'd blow it every time,
    he always gave her a rose, but didn't know any lines.
    His vibe had an odd flow, though he moves just fine,
    her eyes were mountains in the snow that he must climb.


    Quote Originally Posted by Mat Kearney

    All I had was just a vision,
    All I had was my ambition
    Your love without condition
    Kept me swinging when I'm missing
    He was deprived of life, blind to the world outside his house,
    she always had to fight for the right just to put food in mouth.
    His family put no one before Christ, so he lived in doubt,
    how is there room in the sky for someone who can't get out?
    Her parents paid for their addiction, in a new home everyday,
    while he'd pray for the devil's bidding, and hope for heavy rain.
    He’s always ready for pain, but she saves a place in his brain,
    and he’s the only reason that the demons haven’t made her insane.

    School is their safe zone, where bone and flesh never tear,
    together they skip stones, and take breaths to forever share.
    A teenage love affair, forbidden by the laws under their roofs,
    a game of truth or dare, where they break all of the rules.


    Quote Originally Posted by Mat Kearney

    Remember when we used to flow together back in the park
    You would slang guitar licks under the stars in the dark
    You'd say let's grow together as this world falls apart
    I was holding on to hope but hardly holding a spark
    Two people with the same logic, dreaming for a balance,
    when they are living the dream, it'll be together in a palace.
    A king and queen, woke up and it never happened...
    When love was lost, they didn't bow heads in sadness;
    instead, they kept their heads up high and gazed at the stars.
    For that is where the doctor sent their broken hearts.

    The childish schemes are over, they know there's no magic,
    they're a couple years older, and their lives aren't so tragic.
    He finally escaped, even became a successful business man,
    she changed her name and does whatever she can.
    His wife is beautiful, a wealthy Dutch model for his company,
    her husband's funeral was held in a building just down the street.


    Quote Originally Posted by Mat Kearney

    From the beginning we've been building much more than this art
    Remember bearing scars in your car to impart your heart
    You cared enough to call my bluff through the junk from the start
    That's why you're holding onto half of my heart
    Every night, they both think about the other's life,
    while they cry, staring at the stars in a diamond sky.

    From their castle towers...
    Last edited by Soule; May 13th, 2010 at 12:03 PM

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    Last edited by Soule; May 13th, 2010 at 12:01 PM

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    Re: A Diamond Sky Over Castle Towers

    bump.

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    Re: A Diamond Sky Over Castle Towers

    I liked this piece...was deep. Every line painted a picture..
    well put together..woldplay and shceme was nice..enjoyed reading..overall. 7/10.

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    Re: A Diamond Sky Over Castle Towers

    always count on bagel never to switch up his shit lmfao anyway, this was, again, solid...ish, for what you do...your shit is crazy cliche and requires little to no thought to put down cuz shits almost like jackin another niggaz shit (i mean look at that last line...how much shit has been said similar to that when describing the sky?) you only get away with shit because on here, lets face it, niggaz intellectual capacity is lacking...again very poetic, not saying thats a problem, but the fact its the only way you can write is a problem...anyway, everytime you do a "topical" it wont ever be whack, but it wont ever be dope...thats just my opinion on it, you lack originality

    i know you wont take shit on board for various reasons, but its no hate, take it how you want #1

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    Re: A Diamond Sky Over Castle Towers

    quick word of advice with which your ever recpetive ass might want to consider and look over your drop again with;

    you've confused your tenses several times.

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    Re: A Diamond Sky Over Castle Towers

    AMAZING JUST AMAZING, u just painted life that was brilliant
    my mic, my right, my life and you can’t take this from me, callie ,maddie, janey, laney, holly , fuck this folly I’m alone , mcee you see sick as hell, names SCK stone cold killer

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    Re: A Diamond Sky Over Castle Towers

    Funny how the two faggots before this dude^ talk shit. When I beat Brandon Cee with this piece and everyone in SS liked it. Fuck off.


    Continue to feed, please.

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    Re: A Diamond Sky Over Castle Towers

    Lmfao I give a fuck who you beat dukie...you define one word bagel...bitch

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    Re: A Diamond Sky Over Castle Towers

    Says the guy who's name is worse than his shitty work.

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    Re: A Diamond Sky Over Castle Towers

    i see your fraudulence bagel...i body your work easily, you epitomize a gassed muhfuka to the fullest...plus you ride dick lmfao #1

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    Re: A Diamond Sky Over Castle Towers

    Stfu before I have your worthless ass banned.

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    Re: A Diamond Sky Over Castle Towers

    spoken like a true bitch...smh...you make me sick lmmfao talentless rat bastard, on the real, talk your shit...my last drop bodies this no fuckin questions, any real head would agree...

    you gassed bagel, tell hendo i says wdup lmfao puss

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    Re: A Diamond Sky Over Castle Towers

    im get this later.. just lettin you know

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    Re: A Diamond Sky Over Castle Towers

    Would you consider making this into a song?

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    You write some real shit, you get her. Do something...

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