Good Bye

[DieseL]

First Topical Battle Verse

She ended with a good bye, but is bye for good?
is it Lost in Translation, is It misunderstood?
What once was Perfect turned into sure Destruction
Love and Kindness quickly Turned into Pure Seduction
questioning my motives, asking am I wrong or right?
how could something some beautiful develope to an awful sight
those were the worst two words.. spoke thus far
not even super glue could fix this broken heart
she was my everything.. colour to my eyes hair to my skull
beat in my heart, air to my lungs
I miss her.. but I know it's my fault she left here
could've read the signs, but her cries fell on deaf ears
too self absorbed to even notice her stress
and yes, i wanted the best but found it hard to express
what I was feeling..so now i lack sobriety
bottle of Cognac to Combat Anxiety
to the point I completely shut out Society
waiting for her to kiss me,hold me, lie on me
while i gaze into her eyes like the stars above
hoping one day to realize this was all a buzz
or just a nightmare and when I wake up shes right there
but i woke up rolled over, and it became quite clear
that i ruined a good thing and im a good guy
hurt me and i bet it even hurt her to say good bye
but the pain is a monster in the cells of my blood
in the marrow of my bones tastebuds on my on tongue
just a nasty fire spittin scaly flesh creature
grotesque features using my ear drums as speakers
I had enough of this pain death is ever near
pistol to my chin screaming THIS IS THE LAST GOOD BYE I WILL EVER HEAR

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uppz

[ArcherPriest]

raw emotion homie... thought you did a pretty good job of puttin it to words.. flowed pretty well for the most part, a couple lines stretched tho, like the last one.. that shit woulda came off hard but it needed less words to flow right.. overall this wudnt 2 bad tho, content was real 'n held my interest,, peace