oatmeal vs. Mic-Destroyer

[oatmeal]

10 lines, due in an hour, house rules

[Mic-Destroyer]

checking in, ill drop after you

[Mic-Destroyer]

I Wonder If This-Is A Real-Battle.. U-Already-Lost-The-War
So-Done So-Gone- Now That I Shot A Load On UR Face-Like-A-Pornstar

I'll Kill-You-Quick Like ya Gurl Taken Pill's-To-Be-Sick
I'll Egnite-Ya-Lighter As This Kid Get's Sonned By A White-Prick

Face It Man, Your On My Dick More Than My Gurls Crotch
Can Ya Not "Face-Ma-Lyrics" As 3-0 Mean's U Lost?

Your a Back-Stabbing-Coward But "HEY" That's How ya Crew-Ride
And I'll Strangle Ya Neck With "Wind" So that Ya Face-Is Blew-A-side

I'll Consider Getting Beat, But hey This Guy's Just Gay-And-Happy
And He Says "He's-The-Shit" Because It Plays-In-His-Nappy

[oatmeal]

I'm rich, kid just witness the shit that Oats can do
if I had a nickel for every time you spit nice, I'd be as broke as you
ya lyrics are shit, so let me make myself clear on this
everyone's stoked you're the Mic Destroyer, so no one has to hear you spit
you're not on the same level as me, why can't you understand it
Oats got a grip on this battle, but you'll come up MD-handed
its hard to think of punches for someone thats so lame
I got nothing on Mic, this faggot fucker's a no name
I finished you, don't ever think that you might be nice, aite
when it comes to rhymes, not even Bow Wow wants to be Like Mic

[oatmeal]

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[Mic-Destroyer]

yeah alrite.. uppin votes

[MV]

Mic-Destroyer ---HEY YOU NEED TO PUT UR LINKS UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!---

I Wonder If This-Is A Real-Battle.. U-Already-Lost-The-War
So-Done So-Gone- Now That I Shot A Load On UR Face-Like-A-Pornstar
wasnt feeling this one..these arent really multies so why are they strung together?
I'll Kill-You-Quick Like ya Gurl Taken Pill's-To-Be-Sick
I'll Egnite-Ya-Lighter As This Kid Get's Sonned By A White-Prick
this was more of a light diss
Face It Man, Your On My Dick More Than My Gurls Crotch
Can Ya Not "Face-Ma-Lyrics" As 3-0 Mean's U Lost?
nope
Your a Back-Stabbing-Coward But "HEY" That's How ya Crew-Ride
And I'll Strangle Ya Neck With "Wind" So that Ya Face-Is Blew-A-side
ok this is getting somewhere. i see the wordplay here you could worded this better tho
I'll Consider Getting Beat, But hey This Guy's Just Gay-And-Happy
And He Says "He's-The-Shit" Because It Plays-In-His-Nappy
rofl

vs

oatmeal

I'm rich, kid just witness the shit that Oats can do
if I had a nickel for every time you spit nice, I'd be as broke as you
eehh not feeling the opener
ya lyrics are shit, so let me make myself clear on this
everyone's stoked you're the Mic Destroyer, so no one has to hear you spit
rofl nice
you're not on the same level as me, why can't you understand it
Oats got a grip on this battle, but you'll come up MD-handed
this was pretty cool
its hard to think of punches for someone thats so lame
I got nothing on Mic, this faggot fucker's a no name
wasnt feeling this one
I finished you, don't ever think that you might be nice, aite
when it comes to rhymes, not even Bow Wow wants to be Like Mic
so so closer


MD you are missing on alot of your bars because you are lacking punches. if you are going to string words together to show multies...please make sure they are actually multies. you came a little basic but you had a good flow. you last punch was definately your best. Oats u had a few missing but connected alot more than MD and even your misses were actual punches directed toward MD. more consistent and harder hitting punches from Oats

v/ oatmeal

[Orc]

oatmeal's mic destroyer line was the only decent line in the battle. mic ya attempts at punches are played so far. dont focus so much on multies & try hit ya opponent a little more. try be a little more creative. oat, ya shit was a little basic. more bland than anything, try be a little more harsh with ur wording. make ppl go 'oh shit, i didnt see that coming!'. as you are now, the wording makes it a little predictable. so yea

v/ oatmeal

[oatmeal]

upp

[YungDosia]

I'm rich, kid just witness the shit that Oats can do
if I had a nickel for every time you spit nice, I'd be as broke as you
ya lyrics are shit, so let me make myself clear on this
everyone's stoked you're the Mic Destroyer, so no one has to hear you spit
this was pretty dope.

vs

nothing


pretty 1 sided battle here imo. oatmeal came with 2 solid punches that took this battle for me. mic u need to work on ya punches, ur structure and flow is coo along with the multies, now u just need to make the punches connect. no hate to either.

v-oats

[Mic-Destroyer]

alright thanks for the votes, no battle oats

[Signified]

I'm rich, kid just witness the shit that Oats can do
if I had a nickel for every time you spit nice, I'd be as broke as you
ya lyrics are shit, so let me make myself clear on this
everyone's stoked you're the Mic Destroyer, so no one has to hear you spit

vs


Face It Man, Your On My Dick More Than My Gurls Crotch
Can Ya Not "Face-Ma-Lyrics" As 3-0 Mean's U Lost?

Uhm overall not a bad battle.. I think Oats oviously took it... but with that being said mic you came alright man.... you just gotta be more creative, with the punches.
Oats was just alot more creative...

Vote Oats.

[oatmeal]

no battle oats

good advice


just playing, up

[Mic-Destroyer]

hahaha meant nice battle oats

["THE MESSIAH"]

I say this is a much of a muchness...oats gets my votes.