16 bars due within 24 hours of check-in
*this post is my check*
16 bars due within 24 hours of check-in
*this post is my check*
this nigga gonna no show like a pussy
had shit to do. check
I beat your bitch's ass, so it proves I fought a trick
Now when the fuck will I battle somebody who's got a dick?
ill leave this pussy so speechless, it'll be like nothin's said
Cuz to me you're a necrophiliac: you're fuckin' dead
Wise is 20, but it's like he's 22 when i start to 'bust' him
You ain't a Wise Infidel, you're a retarted Muslim
Fuck the cred you say you rep, I dont even need the street
Im fired up like home openers, and you cant beat the Heat*
Shit, you think that those are lyrics that you got spittin hot?
I got a better chance of sayin the N word, and not gettin shot
Now lemme shock you so bad, your hair will go up in strands
You cant make bullemic cannibals throw up their hands
Even your wardrobe is whack, I know you rock them gay Reeboks
In-the closet fag who wont come out, like Dr. Dre's Detox
So this shit is over like Drake's single, you'll have a diminished verse
I came in your bitch before you did, proves that vs you, i finish first
* He is from Orlando. In the Miami Heat's first home game of their season, the Miami Heat defeated the Orlando Magic by 26 points.
whoooh let the games begin. and you're a dickhead for that Magics punchline. this might be closer than i anticipated. nonetheless, you're gonna lose like your keys went missing ya heard me? i float like a butterfly sting like a bee, no i'm not ali but golly i'm hyped like jordans first game. <<<<senseless shit talkin ftw
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...225/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...154/index.html
I'm AMPED for this battle, like i'm bumpin the base
Now i'm SHOOTIN YOU UP like i'm PUMPIN THE BASE
How you gonna act when i'm UP IN YA FACE? COCKSUCKA!
Last time I ran up in your place you got CUT UP!
i'm THAT GUTTA, yo girls a COCK LOVER
now i'm bustin' that shit open just call me the "BOX" CUTTER *box=pussy(slang)*
apply PRESSURE till i'm contorting your spine
while you take bumps to the nose like you SNORTIN A LINE
In the bed I be sportin' ya dime....and when she nut
she runs back to you for the pork and some wine
E don't equal an MC man this guy is a zero
You not SICK you just PRETEND, i'll prescribe you PLACEBOS(whoah)
this is my~time to "flow" you a hide~tide evasion
i'm Einstein so you're name is my life~time equation
you a dope and for coke you a fiend, hope is a dream
you only an "E"-MC when you ROLLIN ON BEANS
good battle ey lets get to votin.
Originally Posted by EMC
I liked these 2 lines that's a good twist on an old line
and i liked ur detox concept, lol he needds to come out with that already
You need to get better concepts man, you need to make sure, ur setup has something to do with ur punch, and u just need better punches all around man
V EMC had more worth quotiing
Keep elevating both of you
Vote on this - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...842/index.html
up 1. and it pained me to write the magics punchline,im a lakers fan lol. i wanted orlando to win.
Fuck the cred you say you rep, I dont even need the street
Im fired up like home openers, and you cant beat the Heat*
Shit, you think that those are lyrics that you got spittin hot?
I got a better chance of sayin the N word, and not gettin shot
vs
this is my~time to "flow" you a hide~tide evasion
i'm Einstein so you're name is my life~time equation
^FIRE!
both of you had some weak concepts and punches went the same way. like rhyming box cutter and cock sucka and cocker lover aint gon work. gay lines are mad played and WI talked about dick too much. and you dont have to use all the upper cases, quptes and adlibs in text battles. that distracts from the punch. EMC had the better concepts. they landed but wasn too hard. Wise had the LOTB but thats all he had in 8 bars.
v. EMC
damn..this was one of the best battles i've seen around here. Now...
I beat your bitch's ass, so it proves I fought a trick
Now when the fuck will I battle somebody who's got a dick?
general opener..not thrown at him, but not bad..
ill leave this pussy so speechless, it'll be like nothin's said
Cuz to me you're a necrophiliac: you're fuckin' dead
decent..
Wise is 20, but it's like he's 22 when i start to 'bust' him
You ain't a Wise Infidel, you're a retarted Muslim
liked that one
Fuck the cred you say you rep, I dont even need the street
Im fired up like home openers, and you cant beat the Heat*
good...original
Shit, you think that those are lyrics that you got spittin hot?
I got a better chance of sayin the N word, and not gettin shot
solid, another like
Now lemme shock you so bad, your hair will go up in strands
You cant make bullemic cannibals throw up their hands
no punch..decent..
Even your wardrobe is whack, I know you rock them gay Reeboks
In-the closet fag who wont come out, like Dr. Dre's Detox
haha good one
So this shit is over like Drake's single, you'll have a diminished verse
I came in your bitch before you did, proves that vs you, i finish first
strong closer
I'm AMPED for this battle, like i'm bumpin the base
Now i'm SHOOTIN YOU UP like i'm PUMPIN THE BASE
same rhyme..didn't feel..not a good opener
How you gonna act when i'm UP IN YA FACE? COCKSUCKA!
Last time I ran up in your place you got CUT UP!
not bad..
i'm THAT GUTTA, yo girls a COCK LOVER
now i'm bustin' that shit open just call me the "BOX" CUTTER *box=pussy(slang)*
what's up with the talkin about dicks? too played..
apply PRESSURE till i'm contorting your spine
while you take bumps to the nose like you SNORTIN A LINE
didn't feel..
In the bed I be sportin' ya dime....and when she nut
she runs back to you for the pork and some wine
wha??
E don't equal an MC man this guy is a zero
You not SICK you just PRETEND, i'll prescribe you PLACEBOS(whoah)
second line - forced idea, like the placebo thang tho..first line is good
this is my~time to "flow" you a hide~tide evasion
i'm Einstein so you're name is my life~time equation
haha wow..that was flipped outta nowhere!
you a dope and for coke you a fiend, hope is a dream
you only an "E"-MC when you ROLLIN ON BEANS
good closer..was hopin for a stronger punch but that was good
aiight that was a very good battle..solid verses from both..but I have to go with EMC for more punches..W/I had stronger punches but had less of them..plus some of his concepts were kinda weak or played out..tho his verse was very good..no hate on either..
bumper cars
Fuck the cred you say you rep, I dont even need the street
Im fired up like home openers, and you cant beat the Heat*
Very nice, good flow, and punch hit
Even your wardrobe is whack, I know you rock them gay Reeboks
In-the closet fag who wont come out, like Dr. Dre's Detox
lols, good line here
V
In the bed I be sportin' ya dime....and when she nut
she runs back to you for the pork and some wine
E don't equal an MC man this guy is a zero
You not SICK you just PRETEND, i'll prescribe you PLACEBOS(whoah)
this is my~time to "flow" you a hide~tide evasion
i'm Einstein so you're name is my life~time equation
You go from decent on the first 2 bars to pretty nice on the middle bars to fire on the last 2 bars, very nice
Overall both had some nice concepts and a few punches, but I felt Wise came with 6 straight lines that were the most consistent and hard hitting of the entire battle. Everything else was pretty even, so with those 6 I have to give it to Wise
"A Poem can curve
Like the bell of a tulip
Or a pistol grip"
-Joel Dias-Porter
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