Jmin - Tempted Sins

[J-min]

[SC]http://soundcloud.com/teknishunz-jmin/jmin-tempted-sins[/SC]

guitar was written and composed by me ..
and the track was produced by me

ive gone for an inspirational chilled vibe with an up tempo drum pattern enabling this song to easily flow for either singers or rappers or even both ...

well hope y'all like it

links
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...019/index.html
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...463/index.html

[KillaKei]

The guitar riff at the beginning seemed a bit off to me and I started doubting at first but this really came together full circle.. Very nice chill vibe and I love the high guitar that comes in towards the middle.. awesome track man.
Respect

rtf http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...060/index.html

[Fre]

It sounds like the loop doesn't quite fit without drums over the top of it at the beginning, however when it's drops it's business as usual, fucking amazing.

[J-min]

yh the reason why i wanted the into slightly off was cuz i was getting that sample feel going and as all i done was null the effects on the verse strings so it wudnt sound much different so i edited it slightly lol should of left it now but still the element of surprise is always a good factor i guess lmfao ...

[Coexist]

No real feed besides props, I can vibe to this man. Came in damn nice.. I could spit to it, fresh as fuck!

[corporatethief]

nice track bro. if you want that sample feel here are some tricks. tune your guitar down have a step
or a full step.then record your chord pattern and chop up the sample and play with your midi keybord. the drums need much more punch try and find some vynal drums and have the bass a little louder and more dominant in the track. the guitar lead is class really like that.

thanks for your feed. Man im a part of a lots of site its hard to be part of every site on the net.i come here form time to time

[The Gwapfather]

yeah this was nice, def something either a singer or rapper (or both) could get on, its got a nice vibe to it overall, good stuff homie..

[Dope Antelope]

the xylophone in the background is kinda offputitng/out of tune.

but other than that the guitars nice for the verse, the hook bits dope too but i dont like the drums that go with the hook

but the quality of this is really good so props

This is like a B.O.B type track, can imagine him on it.

[Dope Antelope]

the xylophone in the background is kinda offputitng/out of tune.

but other than that the guitars nice for the verse, the hook bits dope too but i dont like the drums that go with the hook

but the quality of this is really good so props

This is like a B.O.B type track, can imagine him on it.

[DeathChamberz]

Didn't like the intro was not impressed by it but liked when the beat came in could be a bit slor and when the chorus comes in pretty good melody

[J-min]

upping for feed!

[Mr. Write]

intro was a bit different i liked the guitar on the verses. good riff for spittin over. wasnt feelin the chorus, seemed a bit off to me. Everything else was pretty dope though. Good job on this man.

[Blackflags]

It sounds like you revised the drums to go with the riff. This sounds amazing as fuck dude. I am digging this all around. This is very inspiring. Loving this beat. I can't say anything else about it but I love it.