Essen (0-0) vs. God 0f War (1-1) GOW WINS

[Token]

LLL Season 15, Week 3

Due Times
Check in due Thursday 11.59pm PST.
- if you don't check in by this time, you WILL be DQed
Verses due by Friday 11.59pm PST.
- 2 hour grace period, if used -3 votes
-Max. Extension = 24 hours, to be granted by your opponent.
Voting Ends Sunday 11.59pm EST.

Line Limits
10 min and 20 max…If no line limit agreed, second battler to post must match first battler. But ultimately, first battler gets to set the line number by how much he posts.

Links
Must Leave 5 links to the battles you voted on in this thread somewhere.

Negative 1 vote per missing link in next person's battle, INCLUDING THE LOSER

[Essen]

Here. 10-12, Good Luck

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

hahahah


poor you

[Essen]

Welcome Back, aka you must have lost recently on your other site.. But I'll happily continue the trend.


We battled before, I got the first vote from Hexzen, but lost 5-2 cause you twitched
30min after Hex voted, you wrote paragraphs about it like a whinny bitch.
You just beef with people that don’t Bayou as a Big League slugger,
Don’t worry, you won’t have to lose to Blue again to reveal your true colors.
Your lines are hideous, you can’t win and I bet you have one of the ugliest faces
And me? My verse'll leave voters stayin on a smile like I’m braces.
When Token said ‘here goes nothing’ he paired us up, avoiding a no-show problem
After this, Token’ll say ‘here, goes nothing’ when updating your win column.
All this correct spelling/grammar have you confused? Look, now you can comprehend,
‘lllolo Yuoo Suckk naw dickks tabellss blendsers lollls’, there you go, just like your PMs!
Hens is takin over, so when you lose, bitch about your rank to that writer.
Like a first time smoker, you’ll constantly hit the ‘J’ and complain you’re not higher.

Good Luck

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

uve asked me to help get ur swag back, but ur styles to old n sore
i mean the only way ull ever be in the top ten section, is cuz thats where they go to war
and ive fucked a few moms, but i think thats known when
they've been accusing me of hittin up essens, every since my first battle opened
u never had ur hand near a pussy, and this is facts dawg
if ur fingers ever brought you closer to a bitch, its just how u zoom on ur laptop
you try to act ruthless, like you dont care how the beefs go
but we all know thats such a cold front, your prolly the reason its rainin on the east coast
plus your sig is a joke, you should be so upset bitch
since the only reason nothing else matters, is cuz all you have is this text shit
and i been car shopping, copped a mini cooper using all cash dude
the only time ull ever push an S coupe, is when u take your dog out to the bathroom

[Lethargic]

When Token said ‘here goes nothing’ he paired us up, avoiding a no-show problem
After this, Token’ll say ‘here, goes nothing’ when updating your win column.

vs

u never had ur hand near a pussy, and this is facts dawg
if ur fingers ever brought you closer to a bitch, its just how u zoom on ur laptop
plus your sig is a joke, you should be so upset bitch
since the only reason nothing else matters, is cuz all you have is this text shit(although that dude on the piano is sick with it, lol)

V - God of War

War won this pretty hands down, but not due to quotables by any means. I was struggling to find quotables, and those were the best lines of your verses I could use. Essens misses were REALLY missing though, whereas GOW's were just weak punches. No hate guys, I just didn't like this battle all that much.

[The Gwapfather]

When Token said ‘here goes nothing’ he paired us up, avoiding a no-show problem
After this, Token’ll say ‘here, goes nothing’ when updating your win column.

vs

u never had ur hand near a pussy, and this is facts dawg
if ur fingers ever brought you closer to a bitch, its just how u zoom on ur laptop


Even though both only had one quote from me, GOW took the battle with a slightly more consistant verse, I've seen GOW drop way better then this, haven't really seen anything from essen before, but he just didn't really hit hard with the personals, I like how he went with the personal attacks, but they weren't clever or hard hitting enough to really have the impact they needed, if they both spit bars like the one I quoted from each of them, this could have been a much better battle and really could have gone either way..


VOTE: GOW

[Fatal.]

u never had ur hand near a pussy, and this is facts dawg
if ur fingers ever brought you closer to a bitch, its just how u zoom on ur laptop
and i been car shopping, copped a mini cooper using all cash dude
the only time ull ever push an S coupe, is when u take your dog out to the bathroom

vs

When Token said ‘here goes nothing’ he paired us up, avoiding a no-show problem
After this, Token’ll say ‘here, goes nothing’ when updating your win column.

Essen was throwing some punches but i felt there was some misses in there. the one bar quoted above i thought was the highlight of your verse. nothing really had that sting.
GOW- you were throwing punches and came more consistant. i was really feeling the laptop line, that was cool. opener was ehh. but u picked it up and finished ur verse strong imo.

overall cool battle but GOW got this
v/GOW

[Knux]

uve asked me to help get ur swag back, but ur styles to old n sore
i mean the only way ull ever be in the top ten section, is cuz thats where they go to war
Aight
and ive fucked a few moms, but i think thats known when
they've been accusing me of hittin up essens, every since my first battle opened
Ok
u never had ur hand near a pussy, and this is facts dawg
if ur fingers ever brought you closer to a bitch, its just how u zoom on ur laptop
Lol aight
you try to act ruthless, like you dont care how the beefs go
but we all know thats such a cold front, your prolly the reason its rainin on the east coast
Meh aight
plus your sig is a joke, you should be so upset bitch
since the only reason nothing else matters, is cuz all you have is this text shit
Lol cool
and i been car shopping, copped a mini cooper using all cash dude
the only time ull ever push an S coupe, is when u take your dog out to the bathroom
[Lol aight

Welcome Back, aka you must have lost recently on your other site.. But I'll happily continue the trend.


We battled before, I got the first vote from Hexzen, but lost 5-2 cause you twitched
30min after Hex voted, you wrote paragraphs about it like a whinny bitch.
Lol nice personal
You just beef with people that don’t Bayou as a Big League slugger,
Don’t worry, you won’t have to lose to Blue again to reveal your true colors.
Ok
Your lines are hideous, you can’t win and I bet you have one of the ugliest faces
And me? My verse'll leave voters stayin on a smile like I’m braces.
Nah
When Token said ‘here goes nothing’ he paired us up, avoiding a no-show problem
After this, Token’ll say ‘here, goes nothing’ when updating your win column.
Nice
All this correct spelling/grammar have you confused? Look, now you can comprehend,
‘lllolo Yuoo Suckk naw dickks tabellss blendsers lollls’, there you go, just like your PMs!
Played concept on GOW
Hens is takin over, so when you lose, bitch about your rank to that writer.
Like a first time smoker, you’ll constantly hit the ‘J’ and complain you’re not higher.
Irrelevent Hens concept IMO

Good Luck

Aight I dont got him by THAT much but GOW did take this. He didnt really have any misses, nothing crazy spectacular but just steady consistancy thruout his verse... I think Ess's verse was hit and miss and def wasnt as consitant as gow's.. LOTB was gow's closer i guess, or the zoom in on bitches line

V-Gow

[Alphabet]

uve asked me to help get ur swag back, but ur styles to old n sore
i mean the only way ull ever be in the top ten section, is cuz thats where they go to war
u never had ur hand near a pussy, and this is facts dawg
if ur fingers ever brought you closer to a bitch, its just how u zoom on ur laptop
and i been car shopping, copped a mini cooper using all cash dude
the only time ull ever push an S coupe, is when u take your dog out to the bathroom


v


When Token said ‘here goes nothing’ he paired us up, avoiding a no-show problem
After this, Token’ll say ‘here, goes nothing’ when updating your win column.


decent battle, but i have gow taking this. alot of essens bars were just a bit to statementish

[R!canTheoryz]

When Token said ‘here goes nothing’ he paired us up, avoiding a no-show problem
After this, Token’ll say ‘here, goes nothing’ when updating your win column.

vs

u never had ur hand near a pussy, and this is facts dawg
if ur fingers ever brought you closer to a bitch, its just how u zoom on ur laptop

Overall Vote - GOW, due to having better consistency, he was overall just more witty with his lines then essen, essen did have some good concepts but was ruined with too much wording. just get str8 to the point feel me?

[Cody Nash]

We battled before, I got the first vote from Hexzen, but lost 5-2 cause you twitched
30min after Hex voted, you wrote paragraphs about it like a whinny bitch.
kinda statement-ish... diss him, don't tell me stories...
You just beef with people that don’t Bayou as a Big League slugger,
Don’t worry, you won’t have to lose to Blue again to reveal your true colors.
aiight...
Your lines are hideous, you can’t win and I bet you have one of the ugliest faces
And me? My verse'll leave voters stayin on a smile like I’m braces.
ummm.. where's the diss??
When Token said ‘here goes nothing’ he paired us up, avoiding a no-show problem
After this, Token’ll say ‘here, goes nothing’ when updating your win column.
okay
All this correct spelling/grammar have you confused? Look, now you can comprehend,
‘lllolo Yuoo Suckk naw dickks tabellss blendsers lollls’, there you go, just like your PMs!
not feelin' it..
Hens is takin over, so when you lose, bitch about your rank to that writer.
Like a first time smoker, you’ll constantly hit the ‘J’ and complain you’re not higher.
creative.. not really relevant to you though lol

vs

uve asked me to help get ur swag back, but ur styles to old n sore
i mean the only way ull ever be in the top ten section, is cuz thats where they go to war
eh, okay
and ive fucked a few moms, but i think thats known when
they've been accusing me of hittin up essens, every since my first battle opened
Lol.. ok
u never had ur hand near a pussy, and this is facts dawg
if ur fingers ever brought you closer to a bitch, its just how u zoom on ur laptop
hah...
you try to act ruthless, like you dont care how the beefs go
but we all know thats such a cold front, your prolly the reason its rainin on the east coast
corny, but okay lol
plus your sig is a joke, you should be so upset bitch
since the only reason nothing else matters, is cuz all you have is this text shit
eh.. simple
and i been car shopping, copped a mini cooper using all cash dude
the only time ull ever push an S coupe, is when u take your dog out to the bathroom
okay


I think GoW pretty much took this comfortably.. Essen had a couple okay attempts/concepts... GoW had the execution that connected though.


vote God Of War

[The Archetype]

We battled before, I got the first vote from Hexzen, but lost 5-2 cause you twitched
30min after Hex voted, you wrote paragraphs about it like a whinny bitch.
Too straight forward... good concept though...
You just beef with people that don’t Bayou as a Big League slugger,
Don’t worry, you won’t have to lose to Blue again to reveal your true colors.
not bad...
Your lines are hideous, you can’t win and I bet you have one of the ugliest faces
And me? My verse'll leave voters stayin on a smile like I’m braces.
nah...
When Token said ‘here goes nothing’ he paired us up, avoiding a no-show problem
After this, Token’ll say ‘here, goes nothing’ when updating your win column.
made me chuckle...
All this correct spelling/grammar have you confused? Look, now you can comprehend,
‘lllolo Yuoo Suckk naw dickks tabellss blendsers lollls’, there you go, just like your PMs!
he's gotten a lot of these
Hens is takin over, so when you lose, bitch about your rank to that writer.
Like a first time smoker, you’ll constantly hit the ‘J’ and complain you’re not higher.
eh... kind of irrelevant, but i get what you were doing...

VS

uve asked me to help get ur swag back, but ur styles to old n sore
i mean the only way ull ever be in the top ten section, is cuz thats where they go to war
ok...
and ive fucked a few moms, but i think thats known when
they've been accusing me of hittin up essens, every since my first battle opened
ok...
u never had ur hand near a pussy, and this is facts dawg
if ur fingers ever brought you closer to a bitch, its just how u zoom on ur laptop
lol...
you try to act ruthless, like you dont care how the beefs go
but we all know thats such a cold front, your prolly the reason its rainin on the east coast
okish...
plus your sig is a joke, you should be so upset bitch
since the only reason nothing else matters, is cuz all you have is this text shit
eh...
and i been car shopping, copped a mini cooper using all cash dude
the only time ull ever push an S coupe, is when u take your dog out to the bathroom
eh...

Essen did better than I thought, but he had a shitty draw lol...

vote GoW

[kontro]

We battled before, I got the first vote from Hexzen, but lost 5-2 cause you twitched
30min after Hex voted, you wrote paragraphs about it like a whinny bitch.
meh
You just beef with people that don’t Bayou as a Big League slugger,
Don’t worry, you won’t have to lose to Blue again to reveal your true colors.
nicee
Your lines are hideous, you can’t win and I bet you have one of the ugliest faces
And me? My verse'll leave voters stayin on a smile like I’m braces.
meh, ..no
When Token said ‘here goes nothing’ he paired us up, avoiding a no-show problem
After this, Token’ll say ‘here, goes nothing’ when updating your win column.
no
All this correct spelling/grammar have you confused? Look, now you can comprehend,
‘lllolo Yuoo Suckk naw dickks tabellss blendsers lollls’, there you go, just like your PMs!
......no
Hens is takin over, so when you lose, bitch about your rank to that writer.
Like a first time smoker, you’ll constantly hit the ‘J’ and complain you’re not higher.
nooo

vs

uve asked me to help get ur swag back, but ur styles to old n sore
i mean the only way ull ever be in the top ten section, is cuz thats where they go to war
huhh
and ive fucked a few moms, but i think thats known when
they've been accusing me of hittin up essens, every since my first battle opened
huhh
u never had ur hand near a pussy, and this is facts dawg
if ur fingers ever brought you closer to a bitch, its just how u zoom on ur laptop
mehh
you try to act ruthless, like you dont care how the beefs go
but we all know thats such a cold front, your prolly the reason its rainin on the east coast
mehh
plus your sig is a joke, you should be so upset bitch
since the only reason nothing else matters, is cuz all you have is this text shit
noo
and i been car shopping, copped a mini cooper using all cash dude
the only time ull ever push an S coupe, is when u take your dog out to the bathroom
noo

this was a weaker battle, and i actually don't even know who to vote for, both had alot of misses in their verses, but i'm going to have to go with essens for the blue line, that was the only decent line in this battle. IMO,

[kontro]

We battled before, I got the first vote from Hexzen, but lost 5-2 cause you twitched
30min after Hex voted, you wrote paragraphs about it like a whinny bitch.
meh
You just beef with people that don’t Bayou as a Big League slugger,
Don’t worry, you won’t have to lose to Blue again to reveal your true colors.
nicee
Your lines are hideous, you can’t win and I bet you have one of the ugliest faces
And me? My verse'll leave voters stayin on a smile like I’m braces.
meh, ..no
When Token said ‘here goes nothing’ he paired us up, avoiding a no-show problem
After this, Token’ll say ‘here, goes nothing’ when updating your win column.
no
All this correct spelling/grammar have you confused? Look, now you can comprehend,
‘lllolo Yuoo Suckk naw dickks tabellss blendsers lollls’, there you go, just like your PMs!
......no
Hens is takin over, so when you lose, bitch about your rank to that writer.
Like a first time smoker, you’ll constantly hit the ‘J’ and complain you’re not higher.
nooo

vs

uve asked me to help get ur swag back, but ur styles to old n sore
i mean the only way ull ever be in the top ten section, is cuz thats where they go to war
huhh
and ive fucked a few moms, but i think thats known when
they've been accusing me of hittin up essens, every since my first battle opened
huhh
u never had ur hand near a pussy, and this is facts dawg
if ur fingers ever brought you closer to a bitch, its just how u zoom on ur laptop
mehh
you try to act ruthless, like you dont care how the beefs go
but we all know thats such a cold front, your prolly the reason its rainin on the east coast
mehh
plus your sig is a joke, you should be so upset bitch
since the only reason nothing else matters, is cuz all you have is this text shit
noo
and i been car shopping, copped a mini cooper using all cash dude
the only time ull ever push an S coupe, is when u take your dog out to the bathroom
noo

this was a weaker battle, and i actually don't even know who to vote for, both had alot of misses in their verses, but i'm going to have to go with essens for the blue line, that was the only decent line in this battle. IMO,