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    Ain't sunshine

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    pretty new at this stuff
    don't really got a real mic

    any help wit recording appreciated

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    Re: Ain't sunshine

    nice beat...

    invest in a decent mic...

    work on cleaning up your flow, adding more emotion and feeling to ur delivery
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    Re: Ain't sunshine

    Agree with IME, if ur serious about doin this shit it's really important to invest in some good quality equipment, mic, interface, etc. Beat is fuckin sick flow n tone need work for sure. Jus keep at it homie.

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    Re: Ain't sunshine

    Def need to work on your delivery/flow. sounds like your reading off a notebook or somethin. The beat was good. But def invest in a decent mic, read up on mixing maybe. Also memorize your verse before you record it, tends to make the delivery more natural and genuine. Read, Read, Read...thats the biggest advice anybody could ever give you

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    Re: Ain't sunshine

    lyrics and flow are pretty good. quality is poor but u just need a better mic. shit will improve.

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    Re: Ain't sunshine

    thanks

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    Re: Ain't sunshine

    too many remakes of this sample been done no hate to you man. yeah the quality of the mic and energy ur coming with sounds liked ur bored with it man. lyrically was there just gotta be more intense my dude.

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    Re: Ain't sunshine

    shit kk
    gotta grip a mic asap looks like

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    Re: Ain't sunshine

    ok, you got flow and lyrics, you gotta come with more emotion and clearer announciation. open your mouth more when you rhyme. like someone said above, invest in a better mic or pay to go to a decent studio with a solid engineer.

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    kk thanks man
    good lookin out

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    Re: Ain't sunshine

    Mic quality could be better... Voice is ugh to me im not gone lie but your flow is cool and the beat is also good... Wish I could say more but this is a very short track, ill be looking for some longer from you in near future.

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