LLL SEASON 16 - WEEK 3
10-20 lines
check ins due by Tuesday Night 9:00pm PST (Pics due at check in)
verses due FRIDAY 12:00 Midnight PST
MUST VOTE ON AT LEAST 4 BATTLES PER WEEK
Every vote missing will result in -1 vote in your match.
Every No-Show will result in a loss and auto-sign out.
Don't forget 1st place prize goes to Verse of The Week.
Good luck @Untold.
Check.
and we meet again.
lets make it memorable...
About Untold.
Age: 25
Crew: MT/SPAU
Biography: :-)
Location:At home
Interests: SMOKIN BLUNTZ, DRINKIN 40'z N PIMP BITCHEZ
Occupation: thug
Custom Username Color: White
Aka: Untold
bro.. we seen your pic. I don't even know what to say to this.Originally Posted by Untold.
as alwayz.. shout out to my nugz SOBE aka MC VC DA GAWD aka SPAU aka GORILLAZ aka ALL MY MT BRETHREN AND FALLEN SOULJAZ!
you're not just a wigga.. you grew the fucking hair they made it with.
you don't want to whip out the camera again, with your posing & fagness.
picture this: snapping your neck in a flash & overexposing your wackness.
should be named Untrue. w/ punches saying kids get battered.
fertilize for someone with no growth that never won when shit mattered.
soldier life? pfft.. bitch better run you can't hold a fight.
I'll have you taking cover so much your boyfriend'll get cold at night.
zero skills. you're never hot. that's why I doubted you dog.
besides I'ma boss, if you brought the fire you'd just be out of a job.
fake thug, net banger, homo just stop with the silly threats.
making threads about rapisalive dying BRO YOU'RE THE ONE KILLING TEXT
you're always fighting with your bitch too, that skank is trashy.
the makeup sex is probably decent but without it her face is nasty.
I know you look up to me.. but what is it you're wanting Spit to say?
sometimes I wonder about you.. then there's other times I'm sure your gay.
maybe if you're style wasn't so stupid, I wouldn't call it homo.
but hey your mindframe is so small I finally have a place for my wallet photos.
we already got bitches crying, leaving the League all dramatic.
so why don't you follow suit.. with coffin & burial while you're at it.
my christmas wish list is more like a hit list. i'm glad it's Spits death
not only will we find Spit under a tree.. he'll be hangin from a branch snappin his neck
tis the season to be merry. sharing is caring. learn from ya skank now
so we'll bring the Holiday Inn.. wit ur credit card so i have to place to fuck her brains out
lol nah. i aint playin no Hunger Games wit her like a fuckin rookie
cuz i'd be 'Catching Fire' just from rubbin my dick on that bitches busted pussy
plus i'm a huge fan of jordan. the jumpman's chosen to order
but Spit already knows how to 'jumpman'.. cuz it's what he was told to get over the border
today i finished wit finals. bein out'a class is a thrill itself
if u plan on takin me to school, i hope its in Centennial, CO n ur the kid that kills himself
crazy how RB mimics ya life. always on here wit e-beefs, ur the gayest jerk
funny u got Dadi issues.. n so does ur daughter askin u to get off here n play wit her
ur a fuckin spic. i don't fuck wit Spit. go back to ya day job
but u've done great cleaning this place up, i guess havin a work visa's paid off
i'm on that good kush n alcohol drinkin my brew today
if Spits on good cushion, alcohol.. its drunk n passed out on a mattress someone threw away
cuz ya homeless prick, i'll expose this bitch. think i give a care?
we can fight n take it outside.. well, i can.. your already living there
broke fuck wit no bucks. December's too cold to be livin ur way
but u might benefit from Mayweather.. cuz at least u can pawn whatever he's given away
bro.. we seen your pic. I don't even know what to say to this.
you're not just a wigga.. you grew the fucking hair they made it with.
you don't want to whip out the camera again, with your posing & fagness.
picture this: snapping your neck in a flash & overexposing your wackness.
should be named Untrue. w/ punches saying kids get battered.
fertilize for someone with no growth that never won when shit mattered.
soldier life? pfft.. bitch better run you can't hold a fight.
I'll have you taking cover so much your boyfriend'll get cold at night.
you're always fighting with your bitch too, that skank is trashy.
the makeup sex is probably decent but without it her face is nasty.
we already got bitches crying, leaving the League all dramatic.
so why don't you follow suit.. with coffin & burial while you're at it.
vs.
my christmas wish list is more like a hit list. i'm glad it's Spits death
not only will we find Spit under a tree.. he'll be hangin from a branch snappin his neck
crazy how RB mimics ya life. always on here wit e-beefs, ur the gayest jerk
funny u got Dadi issues.. n so does ur daughter askin u to get off here n play wit her
ur a fuckin spic. i don't fuck wit Spit. go back to ya day job
but u've done great cleaning this place up, i guess havin a work visa's paid off
cuz ya homeless prick, i'll expose this bitch. think i give a care?
we can fight n take it outside.. well, i can.. your already living there
broke fuck wit no bucks. December's too cold to be livin ur way
but u might benefit from Mayweather.. cuz at least u can pawn whatever he's given away
LOL i know i said the Dadiator punchlines are played now but that was funny. work visa line was funny too. but spit's verse was fukin dope and just lost a little steam near the end but he closed it out nicely. dope battle
v/ spit
She said I could sleep on the couch
By 2 am, I was diggin her out
TRS
bro.. we seen your pic. I don't even know what to say to this.
you're not just a wigga.. you grew the fucking hair they made it with. - a wigger punch with relation to wigs. Crafty. And you took a jab at his appearance. .8
you don't want to whip out the camera again, with your posing & fagness.
picture this: snapping your neck in a flash & overexposing your wackness. - this had potential with the first line, but second fell a bit flat. .3
should be named Untrue. w/ punches saying kids get battered.
fertilize for someone with no growth that never won when shit mattered. - another good concept with a funny name rewording, but the second line again... eh. .5
soldier life? pfft.. bitch better run you can't hold a fight.
I'll have you taking cover so much your boyfriend'll get cold at night. - carried it through and through. This one provided a laugh. 1
zero skills. you're never hot. that's why I doubted you dog.
besides I'ma boss, if you brought the fire you'd just be out of a job.- the concepts are here, but the delivery isn't as much. .5
fake thug, net banger, homo just stop with the silly threats.
making threads about rapisalive dying BRO YOU'RE THE ONE KILLING TEXT - nicely played about current events here. 1
you're always fighting with your bitch too, that skank is trashy.
the makeup sex is probably decent but without it her face is nasty. - makeup play and a word about the woman. ok. .7
I know you look up to me.. but what is it you're wanting Spit to say?
sometimes I wonder about you.. then there's other times I'm sure your gay. funny, but that's about it. .6
maybe if you're style wasn't so stupid, I wouldn't call it homo.
but hey your mindframe is so small I finally have a place for my wallet photos. - nifty on the frame play. .85
we already got bitches crying, leaving the League all dramatic.
so why don't you follow suit.. with coffin & burial while you're at it. suitable closer .8
Rating- 7.05/10
------------------------
Untold
my christmas wish list is more like a hit list. i'm glad it's Spits death
not only will we find Spit under a tree.. he'll be hangin from a branch snappin his neck - sharp opener. 1
tis the season to be merry. sharing is caring. learn from ya skank now
so we'll bring the Holiday Inn.. wit ur credit card so i have to place to fuck her brains out- played concept .15
lol nah. i aint playin no Hunger Games wit her like a fuckin rookie
cuz i'd be 'Catching Fire' just from rubbin my dick on that bitches busted pussy- carrying on with that same concept... .1
plus i'm a huge fan of jordan. the jumpman's chosen to order
but Spit already knows how to 'jumpman'.. cuz it's what he was told to get over the border - heh. .6
today i finished wit finals. bein out'a class is a thrill itself
if u plan on takin me to school, i hope its in Centennial, CO n ur the kid that kills himself - current events wordplay. .6
crazy how RB mimics ya life. always on here wit e-beefs, ur the gayest jerk
funny u got Dadi issues.. n so does ur daughter askin u to get off here n play wit her - low blow. .75
ur a fuckin spic. i don't fuck wit Spit. go back to ya day job
but u've done great cleaning this place up, i guess havin a work visa's paid off- still on a tired concept, but good wording saves it .6
i'm on that good kush n alcohol drinkin my brew today
if Spits on good cushion, alcohol.. its drunk n passed out on a mattress someone threw away - nice wordplay .75
cuz ya homeless prick, i'll expose this bitch. think i give a care?
we can fight n take it outside.. well, i can.. your already living there- I laughed. .8
broke fuck wit no bucks. December's too cold to be livin ur way
but u might benefit from Mayweather.. cuz at least u can pawn whatever he's given away- decent closer .7
Rating- 6.05/10
____________________
Verdict-
Untold could have taken this, but threw in two very weak bars in there. After his opener, I had high hopes... dude almost took it save for those two bars. TRS had more consistency in regards to not falling victim to stale concepts.
Based on the ratings, The Great Father votes for-
The Real Spit.
Untold, do vote in the ComeoutoftheCloset Bowl. It's the season.
bro.. we seen your pic. I don't even know what to say to this.
you're not just a wigga.. you grew the fucking hair they made it with.
you don't want to whip out the camera again, with your posing & fagness.
picture this: snapping your neck in a flash & overexposing your wackness.
soldier life? pfft.. bitch better run you can't hold a fight.
I'll have you taking cover so much your boyfriend'll get cold at night.
^^lols
you're always fighting with your bitch too, that skank is trashy.
the makeup sex is probably decent but without it her face is nasty.
we already got bitches crying, leaving the League all dramatic.
so why don't you follow suit.. with coffin & burial while you're at it.
Vs
plus i'm a huge fan of jordan. the jumpman's chosen to order
but Spit already knows how to 'jumpman'.. cuz it's what he was told to get over the border
ur a fuckin spic. i don't fuck wit Spit. go back to ya day job
but u've done great cleaning this place up, i guess havin a work visa's paid off
i'm on that good kush n alcohol drinkin my brew today
if Spits on good cushion, alcohol.. its drunk n passed out on a mattress someone threw away
^^loved the wordplay, funny too lol
cuz ya homeless prick, i'll expose this bitch. think i give a care?
we can fight n take it outside.. well, i can.. your already living there
This was a real cool and funny battle lol some disrespectful lines too which all adds to the entertainment. Spit edges this though I found his verse more enjoyable and his quotable hit a little harder. Untold could've been a bit more consistent but still came hard I feel with some cool wordplay and funny hits too. Unfortunately it was just overpowered by a very good verse from spit.
Fave battle so far this week I think. Good job
V. Spit
"you don't want to whip out the camera again, with your posing & fagness.
picture this: snapping your neck in a flash & overexposing your wackness."
I think this took the entire battle hands down. Untold seemed a little weak here or he just wasn't up for the catch-weight I don't know much about the battles and all so he may just be off either way if my vote counts it's 100%
v/spit
bro.. we seen your pic. I don't even know what to say to this.
you're not just a wigga.. you grew the fucking hair they made it with.
you don't want to whip out the camera again, with your posing & fagness.
picture this: snapping your neck in a flash & overexposing your wackness.
zero skills. you're never hot. that's why I doubted you dog.
besides I'ma boss, if you brought the fire you'd just be out of a job.
you're always fighting with your bitch too, that skank is trashy.
the makeup sex is probably decent but without it her face is nasty.\
vs
my christmas wish list is more like a hit list. i'm glad it's Spits death
not only will we find Spit under a tree.. he'll be hangin from a branch snappin his neck
crazy how RB mimics ya life. always on here wit e-beefs, ur the gayest jerk
funny u got Dadi issues.. n so does ur daughter askin u to get off here n play wit her
tis the season to be merry. sharing is caring. learn from ya skank now
so we'll bring the Holiday Inn.. wit ur credit card so i have to place to fuck her brains out
lol nah. i aint playin no Hunger Games wit her like a fuckin rookie
cuz i'd be 'Catching Fire' just from rubbin my dick on that bitches busted pussy
fuck this battle was so close i had to read it a few times and decided to put fof the voting for it until today. I think the wigga line was lotb, i always think the holiday inn and catching fore bars was next to it. but my fav bar was the boss bar that was clever as fuck. i always feel im voting against untold but truth is when he loses its barely and could go either way...the boss bar was my fav bar but both had consistency and tore this match up.
v/spit
Spit had wigga, fertilize, brought the fire and makeup sex.. wigga 'n fertilize being his best. Couple other almosts but not quites. Cool verse, not his best but cool verse.
Same thing with Untold. Not his best but he had some hits as well. Holiday Inn, taking me to school, Dadi issues and take it outside all hit.
Comes down to preference IMO, pretty close but I preferred Spit's 4 standouts overall, leading with the strong opener.
V.Spit
I win (3-0)
Untold. Loses (2-1)
Posting Rules
