WineO
Yoda
...like the way he thinks he was born from the womb of a mother
But we know ha when she pee'd, he crumbled to earth like that one 9/11 tower
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nothin
weak battle.. both had some played lines and a bunch of misses. 9/11 line from wine wa sthe only decent line and it still wasnt very hard. both need to word on word play and coming more creative.
vote - wineo
lyricalz finest
9/11 was mine not wines @Blanco.
my bad i read it wrong vote - yoda not wine
lyricalz finest
Yoda's sheltered, stuck under his parents roof and can't do anything like men
I ask his mom to suck my cock, he still asks if he can 'play with his friends'
cool, opening humor filled liking ya style
Call me Darth, I brought your girls dark side out, she loves my cock in her face
You'd think her pussy was mine the way I in-Vader private space
average borderline played starwars ref though given his name its usage is fine
I'm baffling this dude, look at his face, he's been confused since birth
I'll leave Yoda so Spaced out, he'll never come back 'down to earth'
Filler ok punch cant say much here
I'm a jerk but i'll be friendly and tell him he's the fucking best in faggotry
He's mastered the art of it, and so has everyone else in his family tree
fine jab here
I think we all agree when I say Fuck Yoda's yada yada bullshit verses
That shit leaves me so bored you'll find me stiff, in a coffin in a hearse
na man kinda soft an the wording fucked with my soul
I'll leave this kid startled and confused with multiple 'shots'
Cuz he pukes 'wine' when bullets penetrate his visible thoughts
ummm I missed it
Now he's abated,constipated, he wantsta shit but the liquids less in his neuro receptors gate uh
So look its time to leave dis dick decapitated like a dick'less' masturbator
I didn't feel it man ok at best
Scared of the force? Yeah all this jerk does is run and hide
Nail his coffin just to know that hes fuckin stuck inside...
good punch best line I liked from you
...like the way he thinks he was born from the womb of a mother
But we know ha when she pee'd, he crumbled to earth like that one 9/11 tower
ok but nothing hard here
Yoda'll light cigarettes with his farts and burn you to ashes
I think we all know how you'll be sniffin n waitin to b the last f de 'matches'
no, hate lines where the intent doesn't jump off and out at you if you are he making your readers try and find the punch in your bars then wtf? na-sayin?
all around cool battle it wasn't weak like others say, I think both battlers gave fine showings though for me
Wineo had the more enjoyable verse, due to his attempts at humor filled punches, which at times where huh ok at best though still worst reading none the less
uppin thanks for the feed guys lets please get some more votes
3-0.....uppin
uppin
uppin...can we get some votes please?
Call me Darth, I brought your girls dark side out, she loves my cock in her face
You'd think her pussy was mine the way I in-Vader private space
Had the right idea, but didn't connect the ang;es properly, gotta work on that
I'm baffling this dude, look at his face, he's been confused since birth
I'll leave Yoda so Spaced out, he'll never come back 'down to earth'
I get wat ur going for, but u worded this awkwardly..
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nothing
Yoday you aren't really writing punches... There was no misdirection no real wordplay (I know matches was meant to be but it fell flat). You've got some work to do before you start winning battles it seems. Go look at older battles and see how a good verse with punches is written and get some ideas flowing..
v/Wine
ayo yoda where you at son haven't seen you in a minute...
Been busy yo,fixin my shuttle
can somebody please hit this up its been open forever
Two inexperienced battlers here again, wine for the third battle in a row I've read came with punches. Nothing really stood out to me cock punches and mom punches rarely work unless they're extremely funny but yours weren't yoga you had a cool flow but some ancient concepts lol it's 2014 and you had a September 2001 punch. You guys need to have more name plays record punches read Eachothers old battles etc. cool battle but wine had the better battle verse
Vote wine o
5-1. Can mods close this? thanks
You'd think her pussy was mine the way I in-Vader private space
I'm baffling this dude, look at his face, he's been confused since birth
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Nothing
Vote WINO for one decent line that was poorly executed, and decent flow. Sorry Yoda
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