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  1. #1

    PlayWryte - Perfect

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    Song "Perfect" Link - https://soundcloud.com/playwryte/perfect
    This isn't my normal style, but I'm always switching it up to reach different people. Would appreciate the listen & feedback!

    Lyrics:

    Hook
    Perfect
    Perfect
    Just know that you are
    Perfect
    Just know that you are
    Perfect
    Just know that you are
    x2


    Bridge 1
    You say that your flawed
    And I say that your wrong
    You tell me ya problems,
    you say its too much
    But that’s all the shit I…

    Verse 1
    How do I start,
    to explain who you are
    You shine like a star,
    that just came from afar
    You brighten my days,
    you lighten my weight
    My heart was so heavy,
    and I was afraid
    Cause I was so different,
    so I kept my distance
    Afraid of this image,
    then came to my senses
    Cause you came to me,
    so alone, no I wasn’t
    And I was in love,
    so, all of a sudden

    Bridge 2
    Nobodies perfect
    But you’re perfect to me
    Cause nobodies you
    I want the world to see

    Hook
    Perfect
    Perfect
    Just know that you are
    Perfect
    Just know that you are
    Perfect
    Just know that you are
    x2

    Bridge 1
    You say that your flawed
    And I say that your wrong
    You tell me ya problems,
    you say its too much
    But that’s all the shit I…

    Verse 2
    I’ma continue,
    so I can defend you
    There is so much of you,
    that I’ve been into
    I just keep looking,
    its more than the pussy
    The more that I find,
    the more that you push me
    You are my weakness,
    and you are my strength
    Shit is just meaningless,
    when your away
    I want you with me,
    so come to me sprinting
    Forever is here,
    so let us start living

    Bridge 2
    Nobodies perfect
    But you’re perfect to me
    Cause nobodies you
    I want the world to see

    Hook
    Perfect
    Perfect
    Just know that you are
    Perfect
    Just know that you are
    Perfect
    Just know that you are
    x2

    Bridge 1
    You say that your flawed
    And I say that your wrong
    You tell me ya problems,
    you say its too much
    But that’s all the shit I…

    Verse 3
    How do I finish,
    so I do you justice
    Its been a privilege,
    and I know what love is
    I thank you for that,
    as I make it my last, but
    I told you I love you,
    I can’t take it back
    So pardon my manners,
    I don’t understand ya
    You know who you are,
    you know that I can’t, but
    So what were ya flaws,
    I think you were wrong
    Cause you are so perfect,
    and I am in awe

    Bridge 2
    Nobodies perfect
    But you’re perfect to me
    Cause nobodies you
    I want the world to see

    Hook
    Perfect
    Perfect
    Just know that you are
    Perfect
    Just know that you are
    Perfect
    Just know that you are
    x2

  2. #2

    Re: PlayWryte - Perfect

    Would appreciate feedback on this as well!
    Last edited by ItsPwizz; December 1st, 2015 at 06:46 AM

  3. #3

    Re: PlayWryte - Perfect

    Would love feedback!

  4. #4

    Re: PlayWryte - Perfect

    I'm feeeeeeling the production, extra dope!!!!

    THis is dope, good job, very good self expression. I could take this record and make it super fire i promise!! lol. Some pitch correction goes a long way. Get the beat tracked out if you could, if not the 2 track would still work.

    Very good song writing, i could see me listening to this.

    8/10. I definitely want to hear more from you.
    @ItsPwizz

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