Originally Posted by
boston
True story, for those that don't know me, I was hung over, had a final, & walked in stressed…
It was a one question essay, “What is Bravery” I wrote, THIS IS BRAVERY, and handed in the test.
This is not a punchline to me atleast. You're stating that you're preforming an act of bravery after questioning the readers on what bravery is. You have to actually diss your opponent. This is just way too broad to make a dent in my eyes.
Point is, it’s pointless, like double zero matches, to match us, because I am just too clever,
You keep pushing gun bars, like you’re promoting NRA lounges, that’s outdated like foreign tender.
Eh, a lot of "likes" downgrades this a bit. You need to work on how you word your lines. This was much better than your opener. You actually threw what I consider a punch.
This is for the folks at home to poke some holes in floors they don’t fully understand
But if I ex-plain, like sesame, I said… I walk-tall, & KP is the floor, because he is always under stand.
Never repeat the same word to rhyme, its very uncreative. You clearly have some cunning. This is choppy as ever, No one speaks in this kind of manner lol. I get it you're trying to do the conceited "slow it down im clever" stuff. But it is really hurting you here.
He went from battling with pop to a pop battler, and by finding that security, we see
An ex-baller gone commercial and that insurance policy is killing spree!
pop to a pop battler huh? Pop as in soft radio friendly? I don't like this bar at all. You are all over with your schemes lol.
Assuming your recovery was sim pill, you will get better, but suffer from side effects
So that verse you compose? preludes you being decomposed, because you will, die next.
