Week 11 - Mimic (5-3) vs Fresh (6-3) Fresh wins by NS

[Phalanx]

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Friday and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16 (unless higher limit agreed upon)
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.


Check ins are mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ.

FAILURE TO VOTE ON OTHER BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON OTHER BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!


@Mimic @Fresh

[Fresh]

Mimic on fire im scared

[Fresh]

a real heavy hitter, right.. the end isn't how mimi was picturin
"but fresh we'll have to call in the SWAT!".. nah one smack'll completely disfigure him
u hyping ya past.. he'll for sure get his ass kicked
how is it u'd rob in hoods when you've always been in poor demographics
you've got nothing and nobody, so what u got going for u now
yeah he stands out from the crowd.. even his momma don't want him around
heard u were a tweaker, tell me it isn't the case
that means my problems are ones you'd be itching to face
when i cut it runs deep, I don't just dismembers when i rap
prepare to meet ur maker. just kidding ur fathers never coming back

10

[Mimic]

need that EXT if thats cool

[Fresh]

need that EXT if thats cool

Of course

[Phalanx]

a real heavy hitter, right.. the end isn't how mimi was picturin
"but fresh we'll have to call in the SWAT!".. nah one smack'll completely disfigure him
I like this. Good shit, Fresh.
u hyping ya past.. he'll for sure get his ass kicked
how is it u'd rob in hoods when you've always been in poor demographics
Seen a lot of spins on robin hood. This was pretty mild.
you've got nothing and nobody, so what u got going for u now
yeah he stands out from the crowd.. even his momma don't want him around
I like the concept, not sure its how I would have executed it though.
heard u were a tweaker, tell me it isn't the case
that means my problems are ones you'd be itching to face
Lol. Simple, but funny. I dig it.
when i cut it runs deep, I don't just dismembers when i rap
prepare to meet ur maker. just kidding ur fathers never coming back
This was a funny jab.

10

Overall,solid verse. Bars 2 & 3 were the low spots for me, but they were wrapped by funny punches that landed.

[Dominate]

a real heavy hitter, right.. the end isn't how mimi was picturin
"but fresh we'll have to call in the SWAT!".. nah one smack'll completely disfigure him
I don't think I get this but it sounds cool
u hyping ya past.. he'll for sure get his ass kicked
how is it u'd rob in hoods when you've always been in poor demographics
OK. Seen this wp before
you've got nothing and nobody, so what u got going for u now
yeah he stands out from the crowd.. even his momma don't want him around
Heh cool. Good punch
heard u were a tweaker, tell me it isn't the case
that means my problems are ones you'd be itching to face
Funny jab
when i cut it runs deep, I don't just dismembers when i rap
prepare to meet ur maker. just kidding ur fathers never coming back
LOL good punch

10

Good shit Freshman