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    Wk 15 MV 6-8 Vs Robocop 6-7 - MV wins


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    Re: Wk 15 MV 6-8 Vs Robocop 6-7

    left beyond recognition in a liquid condition so when viewing the victim
    ^you can tell it was all a build-up for the Plot to thicken
    .................................................. .......into a mass that looks like I'm brewing penicillin
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    Re: Wk 15 MV 6-8 Vs Robocop 6-7

    No one fears this toy, or will care when MVs destroyed
    But his real life fam will all be crying their eyes out..
    Tears of joy.
    Plottin your demise.

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    Re: Wk 15 MV 6-8 Vs Robocop 6-7 - Open For Votes

    MV- Interesting concept with more of your classic swagger type text. I unfortunately am not a huge fan of your style as I think it hurts the punch a lot when you word it this way. That being said, I see the concept and I don't hate it, but this was a pretty bad miss as far as a punch for a text battle goes.

    Robo- This concept has been done 100 times but in ways much more complex than this. This was just pure statement and there was no twist that made it good. It's almost like you simply told him his family doesn't care about him and that was it. Just way too simple and it's a hard miss here.

    I'm sure both of you gentlemen have done much better than this, and being brutally honest, I did not enjoy either bar, but MV is gonna get it here for a better attempt and more creativity. I kinda like the swagger he brings even if it doesn't end in a super crazy hard hitting punch.

    Vote: MV da KiD

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    Re: Wk 15 MV 6-8 Vs Robocop 6-7 - Open For Votes

    I got MV taking this one. I liked the liquid/plot thickens concept. Robos bar was a little underwhelming because I’ve seen him drop nicer stuff, just felt like there wasn’t a major impact in this bar. V/MV

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    Re: Wk 15 MV 6-8 Vs Robocop 6-7 - Open For Votes

    V.Robo,simple punch; nothing special but enough to take it.

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    Re: Wk 15 MV 6-8 Vs Robocop 6-7 - Open For Votes

    Both had simple redirects but mv is wayyy over worded. Rococo was more direct

    v/robocop

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    Re: Wk 15 MV 6-8 Vs Robocop 6-7 - Open For Votes

    MV went flex and perhaps did way too much with unnecessary emphasis on flow, and the ending threw me off because I never heard of brewing penicillin. Like, is that shit brewed, really? Like distilled penicillin? I struggled with myself over this, and that's not how you want the very end of your punch to hit. Robocop had a window to total this fag but it just didn't play out. I like the tears of joy theme, but thought it could have been flipped in a more creative manner and a bit harsher.

    vote mv

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    Re: Wk 15 MV 6-8 Vs Robocop 6-7 - Open For Votes

    Christ, mvs bar was wordy and later out horrendously, the bar was okay with the plot thickens tie up but fuck me it read bad. I want to vote against him so much for asthetics alone however robo came very simple, statementish and I love a turn of phrase flip but this wasn’t done with any attempt to be creative.
    V/mv

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    Re: Wk 15 MV 6-8 Vs Robocop 6-7 - Open For Votes

    MVs bar is terrible .. there were so many bad setup multis this week lol

    Robos was kindve funny in a misdirection bar from 2004 kindve way

    Robo wins
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    Re: Wk 15 MV 6-8 Vs Robocop 6-7 - Open For Votes

    4-3 MV let’s get a few more

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    Re: Wk 15 MV 6-8 Vs Robocop 6-7 - Open For Votes

    Not crazy about either bar.

    MV this one is just over done. The idea is decent, build up t/ plot to thicken/ brewing, but the multis hurt your wording. To do something like that u need to rhyme like 3 or 4 syllables and keep extra wording to a minimum.

    Robo, wording isn't bad at all but there's just not enough to this for me. Very straightforward for a misdirection, I want to vote against MVs wording, but I think the more creative attempt is winning me over.

    Close battle but vote MV

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    Re: Wk 15 MV 6-8 Vs Robocop 6-7 - Open For Votes

    MV wins 5-3

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