Don’t worry this foes a joke, while I’m gory n go for broke
Cuz ya history has NO BODIES turnin up, like the story of Roanoke
I'm savage with bars..hazardous bars.. the damager czar..
SINNING WITH THE SHOTS..and I'll put RYNO IN A BOX..MADACASCAR..
Sinacogs bar was actually surprising decent for him. That said, that Roanoke bar was fire. Ryno takes this, but props to Andrew for not doing some weird repetitive demon bar.
Vote - Ryno
Ech bar was cool I liked it, but roanoke was executed niceee
Vote - Ryno
Liked what Ech was going for, felt the wording was a little awkward but the punch as a whole was cool. Ryno with the historical reference and nice delivery is what takes this one for me. Good battle. V/Ryno
Lol,
The difference between text&audio is displayed here folks...
U read both verses as PURE words/text on a page...V/Ryno certainly takes this with better writing (tight wording), less repetitiveness, more creativity with the closing flip...
Thought the capped two words were the right ones to choose, and the caps helped...smooth flow...
Arguably Punch o.t.w. SO FAR in my humble opinion after reading eight 1-2s so far, including my own.
It's close w/ one other I voted for (but won't say that1 here to avoid influence/sway on other links)...
To my point earlier, it gets a "little bit" closer when I spit Echelon's audio fire. lol...just an AWESOME closer, esp. if this is Sinacog...but the opener was patented sinacog: a little too simple/similar words/bit trite&repetitive...
AND that is the difference here in my vote folks, Rhyno's short&sweet but solid
BOTH (but particularly Ech's) way better "delivered" than actual word-analysis on a page.
GL next week 2 both
I feel like Ech had something going there but needs to work on wording. The flow felt forced and wordplay wasn't delivered in an appealing way. Rhyming by itself isn't enough to get the edge, you have to think more creatively on how you plan to deliver the hits. Rynos was a bit cleaner. I wasn't a big fan of his setup though as it seemed to not have much to do with the rest of the bar, felt like filler so it didn't connect as much. Voting Ryno for having the better bar though
v/Ryno
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i honestly cant believe Ech put together a bar that kind of slapped. honestly, i wish you would do this consistently. this battle was good. but I'm going to have to go with Ryno because of the cleaner wording and i liked his punch a bit more.
v/Ryno
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Ryno’s was fresh, not seen that done before, Echelon caught me off guard with the genuine attempt here but I felt Ry has the better punch overall, conceptually and in how he chose to execute his.
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Ryno wins
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