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    The Log

    violent storms upset the waters with force
    halting our tour unless we alter our course
    give the order offcourse, obey the time frame
    can't arrive late, this vessel shall find haste
    no blind faith, diagram marked with a viable line
    -sir, we're heading where the mystic triangle aligns
    an unrelibale sign? quit the supersticious babble
    right after the radar made a suspicious crackle
    distance traveled, the uneasy sea finally relieved
    anxiety feeled, treacherous waters quietly decieves
    time will reveal, feeling our ship slightly vibrate
    objects appears over the horizon, lighting vibrant
    brightly shining, flying in a synchronic sequence
    coming in seeking as we're greeted by a sonic beacon
    no frequencies, coms are down, radar's gone zapped
    it's all black, we been detached from the whole map
    old scrap of ancient shipwrecks surfacing to be spotted
    beneath us a monstrous shadow emerging from the bottom
    the darkened surface trembles as colossal spheres appears
    illuminating the eclipsed ocean, we just stare with fear
    I pray in tears, dear God, save me from the unknown
    all I hear is horrendous tones drilling through my bones
    gruesome groans, deriving from a deep-sea titan arising
    frightened, no use fighting this leviathan arriving
    striving, paralysed by despair, I simply panic instead
    an organic creature equipped with a mechanical head?
    synthetic vertebraes protracted as far as eyes can see
    what kind of breed? fuck this shit.. bout time we flee
    maximize speed I screamed, the plead seems to be futile
    the colussus sucks us in.. this beast fiercely brutal
    to be truthful, I was being stupid to ignore the warning
    anyone reading, don't cross a triangle when it's storming

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    Re: The Log

    Upped.
    Will get to it.
    Have Skimmed once.
    Have full read ONCE.
    Initial feed is first half is completly 100% dope story-setup. JUst a little bit better than SECOND half...which is STILL good. Just not quite as sick man.
    Thanks for being active ... Will edit or SPAM2ndpost more detail if I get to it.

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