WK20: (0-0) Slashe vs. (1-4) DaveDILLY (Dave Wins)

[Wuxia]

Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES

Rebuttal Option

both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

You have 24hrs from when battle was set to agree on rebuttal battle


You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.

@slecht
@daveDILLY

[daveDILLY]

good luck

[Spree]

@Slashe

[Slashe]

Check In

[Slashe]

Centella lot about the process. n you haven't been exposed to that yet
Dill's trapped in ajar so tight his breathin window will close on him next

[daveDILLY]

if u running ya mouf u done b4 the battle begun..
I dont tolerate talking backslash - & a punch will leave you leaning like one

[Phalanx]

Vote - Dilly

Both were solid. I think Slash had a solid bar, but I feel like the Centella part felt thrown in/sloppily tied in. Dave's execution was a bit more concise & impactful.

[Slayerr.]

Good battle was a fan of both punches I think dilly’s was a little bit tighter and delivered with a stronger impact. Good read tho lads
V/dilly

[Exalted.]

Vote dilly
Liked both concepts, dillys was cleaner and cohesive.
Dill/ajar was cool though.. prob had more potential here.

[Lady Poet]

Slash Punchlines isn't bad, it could have been better
Dave Punchlines had great ending, rhyme well done

Vote-Dave

[Spree]

Dave wins