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It took u till 2023 to champ shit. I’ve been killing it for awhile
Emulate on everything……….Especially my fucking style
Ill rush your place n bust that face. prepare for defeat clown
Punches leave him ulterior just flat out crying, there’s no hidden motive for this beatdown
Ur on my shit list. n these fist will ruin ya whole existence
I’m throwing punches that’ll shut your lights off like hiding from jehovah witness
The bitches see a thug like me n get wet. u ain’t slaying none
Ya wife’s quick to effigy like me while u dry hump a paper mache one
You don’t think I’ll trash you? Bitch I’m bringing down the house
If your sleeping on me i probably didn’t get up yet after fucking your spouse
Last edited by miracle; April 28th, 2024 at 09:20 PM
all season been building to this, the peak of hyper tensions im at your chest with a grip
cuz the type of pressure ur bringing Blud comes with a stroke that luck can not fix
down the sites when i aim, hot bullets leave holes in lard ass thats tallow glazed
put yourself in juxtaposition to go from skimming the surface to a shallow grave
beating u this time starts a cycle of you getting slapped from now to infinity
so you are firsthand witnessing the moment that repetition becomes muscle memory
ur kicks lean to the side and u start fires with just friction from thighs
he'll say this match is no-sweat, no shit-all those functions stop when you unalive
tell him to diet, he'll die it will have him feet up, dude'll break like a flintstone
even tho you are no longer a-round they'll still be able to see that you're big boned
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MV had some quite weighty concepts (no pun intended) which were smart but didn’t necessarily translate into heavy battle bars this time around. There was a lot going on, perhaps so much that it might’ve actually reduced the impact.
Miracle was cleaner with it. I liked a lot of the wordplay elements. I think it’s a shame that they’re integrated more like scheming rather than double-entendres as the sentences tend to only make sense one way (ie. “Punches leave him all tearier” makes sense but “punches leave him ulterior” doesn’t make sense as a sentence). Obviously that’s fine as a stylistic choice, but not my favourite.
Hard to call this one, but on balance I preferred Miracle’s.
Vote- Miracle.
It took u till 2023 to champ shit. I’ve been killing it for awhile
Emulate on everything……….Especially my fucking style
The bitches see a thug like me n get wet. u ain’t slaying none
Ya wife’s quick to effigy like me while u dry hump a paper mache one
Vs
all season been building to this, the peak of hyper tensions im at your chest with a grip
cuz the type of pressure ur bringing Blud comes with a stroke that luck can not fix
tell him to diet, he'll die it will have him feet up, dude'll break like a flintstone
even tho you are no longer a-round they'll still be able to see that you're big boned
Overall good battle but I think the two bars I quoted from mir went harder than the two I quoted from mvs and mirs non hitters were better
V/mir
Originally Posted by miracle
Vote - Miracle
Cool battle dudes, good workin.
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