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    ~THA SAINT~
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    "Thin line between love and obsession" MUST PEEP THIS REALLY

    For better or worst, we’ll weather the weathers forever together
    Never alone, together me and you, we’ll get through whatever
    Whether it be sickness or health, even poverty or wealth
    Quote “I wouldn’t let u hit the ground if I was falling myself”
    I felt her hand, knees trembling, it’s tough to stand
    Priest began “we’ve come to form a holy union of woman and man”
    “Place the band, do you take this woman to have and to hold”
    And instead of saying “I do”, I respond with “hello”

    ~it was only a dream~

    I saw my future in her eyes before she could even say hi
    Her smile outshined the sky, with her name she replied
    I told her mine, we spoke of times when we were passer bys
    Contact with eyes, yet speechless, seems that we both were shy
    I had realized this girl was special, before I had met her
    But respectful to MY lady, I wasn’t able to sweat her
    Still I kept her in my life, my feelings growing deeper within
    But when my relationship ended, she felt me as only a friend

    Does art imitate life, or does life imitate art
    The answer is neither; either that or someone’s not playing their part
    I’ve seen romantic comedies, movies of drama and action
    And in the end all of them always finish in passion
    It’s tough graspin the truth, when your influences are false
    Of course love aides in masking most of life’s flaws

    Days passed, we still kicked it, the feelings she not feeling
    My heart’s hole has me illing, but somehow I’m dealing
    It’s killing me slowly, not healing, I’m dying inside
    Alone I occasionally cried, but with her I swallowed my pride
    Tried changing her heart and mind, many a times
    But I was at her side, while various guys were feeding her lines
    They’re telling you lies, I pleaded to her, they’d never treat you like me
    And you’ll never even know it, unless you try it and see
    But she really wasn’t hearing me, she stuck to her ways
    And I moved on to another, but my love never phased
    Days went away, we chilled less, things weren’t the same
    But heart has always raced when I’m hearing her name

    Me in tuxedo, she was looking great in gown
    We smiled at each as if the only one around
    Vows were read, hands grasped, priest asked if there was any objection
    And I sat there in the crowd, bit my tongue while, thinking, reflectin

    hook(2x)
    u make me wanna cross the line between love and obsesion
    the way u not feelimg me im fallin into a deep depression
    i wanna just hold ya body and keep u in my possesion
    thas why u make me wanna cross from love and obsession



    My heart bears her impression, in my mind lays no question
    That the temptress I'm tempted by is the face of perfection
    So I stay by her side, tryna grin through depression
    Forced to cross that thin line between love and obsession
    We've kindled a friendship, I've garnered her trust
    But it isn't enough, I'm still harnessed by lust
    And I've tried to express this without being aggressive
    But each time that I mention it... I just wind up rejected...
    I've tried flowers and poetry, sonnets and je.welery
    Still, it ain't worked... She wants nothing to do with me...
    For every poem I write, every cent that I spend
    She'll still never be mine, except as a friend...
    My soul burns as I yearn for her, my blood churns, my world turns for her
    Still I've learned it's absurd, my love isn't returned from her...

    Years have passed, things ain't changed, I'm still head over heels
    And my lonliness persuades me to forget how she feels
    I'm a desperate fool for this delicate je.wel
    And my patheticness grew as her rhetoric cooled
    She'd grown tired of my endless declarations of adoration
    Demonstrations of patience, she knew I'd be waiting
    Forever to get her, interfering with her pleasure
    Like beating cats up who'd hooked up when they met her
    I'd stalk her at parties, I'd blow up her cell
    Till pigs flew and igloos were present in Hell
    Her father would threaten... "STAY AWAY FROM MY DAUGHTER"
    But I couldn't ignore her... Not even with a restraining order...
    My soul burns as I yearn for her, my blood churns, my world turns for her
    Still, my words didn't work, my love wasn't returned from her...

    We'd grown up, gone to college, different coasts by design
    I met people, but her sketch was still etched in my mind
    Couldn't concentrate, eat, sleep or breathe at such a distance
    So I packed up my bags and I paid her a visit...

    The plane ride from L.A to New York was a breeze
    As I planned out the scene, I would drop to my knees
    And she'd finally realize the sacrifices that I'd made for her
    The pain that I'd been through by being away from her
    She'd embrace me and kiss me, and hold me forever
    And from that moment on, we'd always be together...
    So I got off the plane, hopped a cab to her dorm
    But she sounded afraid as I knocked on her door...
    "Just a minute" she said, "I'm improperly dressed, SHIT!"
    Then two minutes went by... I was promptly arrested...
    Spent a day in a holding cell, and by now I was pissed
    I'd gone through all this hell, and I'm still getting dissed
    My soul burned as I yearned for her, my blood churned, my world turned for her
    And since my words didn't work, I went beserk and I murdered her...

    HOOK 2x

    Rb This ones fo history im a rb legend let it be known im a lover 2

    Pretty deep topic drop some input

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    uppin fo input

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    ~THA SAINT~
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    come on yall i put all my feelings into this and thats all u give me nothin at all

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    I really like it its str8

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    mr.iceman
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    i liked that shit it looks like you put some serious time into that piece good flow

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    ~THA SAINT~
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    thanks yo can i get more input

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    so here the question...do i love this or am i obbsessed...

    like they said..it had good flow and looked like u spent mad time on it...

    the ending had me like this close to tears...cause i think at 1 time i was obsessed with my ex...cause trust me it wasnt love.. back to topic

    vocab was great, flow just as good...
    multis were lacking a few

    good drop but, sorry to be mean, this might not make Legends...but if you put this much effort into all you drop you will def get 1 in...

    *Its That Simple*

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    ~THA SAINT~
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    THANKS UPPIN

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    need more input yall

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