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Thread: ..::Broken Wings::..

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    ..::Broken Wings::..

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...57#post1284957
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...73#post1284973


    just listen...



    she was a passifist, glad and rich, in spirit and soul
    a mirror of hope, eternal, my dearest through growth
    apperance alone, the type to light a room with a smile
    pearly whites in earthly fights with the moon for a while
    as to who can be the best, the eternal, inferno of love
    blazing through hearts, grace just a part of the service of doves
    words were her drugs, soothing each soul with her voice
    meant for the heavenly chorus, a bell tolled in rejoice
    when she spoke, of the proverbial words of wisdom
    with prescision, the vision, her cradling, an infant
    black skin, deep as the midnight sky's ebony
    heaven's plea, to shut down such a wonder, it can't compete
    to her, a laugh of spunk, a voice of independence
    a touch of fragility, deposed to hold those prescious
    the message, she's stressing, freedom for change
    no power necessary, no greed in her ways
    but as decency slaves, a block will fall in the road
    it a world of deceit, that needs to be honed
    and she did it, but every perfection is imperfect
    with pursed lips, she took the pain, of treatment, though worthless
    it murdered, the cancer spread, last sands were spent
    a world of tears, when fears gained truth, her hand fell dead
    i can't tell you what its like, the tourment and fright
    i'd drown in tears in day, then cry more in the night
    if scorn isn't nice, then i musta met its older brother
    a hopeless sputter, no more way to go home and love her
    she was gone, this world had completed its infection
    looking back, i figure God musta needed some perfection
    but why her? my life hurts, the loss is still in rainbows
    and now she sits in heaven, broken wings, yet mom is still my angel


    the end....

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    sum feed bac plz and leave a link so i can reply 2 yours holla this is a true story im really hurt by this

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    ....Dag. That was...deep. I guess i'd call it that. It was good, though. Did you already write that or what? It was tight, can'y deny that. Good job...

    And I feel sorry for ya.

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