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Last edited by Its Illytizzle!™; July 29th, 2004 at 10:47 AM
<table style=filter:GLOW(color=black)>IJL & DWI</table>
title`s down to a `t` cos he really "is that simple".. an lost with it
checks were writing lines.. yes TR.. tho the thought leaves you confounded
so i`ll literally blow ya mind all the way to my finishing bar
give u a head start cos realistically.. ya name will only take you so far
just a wack never-has-been.. realist is always hit an miss
an no track record makes it gospel.. that ya exodus follows genesis
you aint tested in text cos you`ve yet to battle.. scared?
like any fake cat he fears the vets.. cos of the pussy that`s bared
rb`s only admin-wannabe yet to dominate.. text, topical or audio
you have no strength in rep.. in any facet of this rapboard yo!..
nigga`s a barrel of laughs.. so many jokes revolve around him
fl tourney? jnr? no wonder genesis let you do anything but battling
this an easy win but TR`ll get sicker in time.. like terminal patients
finna building a text reputation?
i`ll have it laid to waste.. before you can lay the foundations.
<table style=filter:GLOW(color=black)>IJL & DWI</table>
While reading your verse, I don’t care what people think
Not even little kids are scared of what this monster inks
Imagine if I was safari Gab, id still leave this bitch crying
1 shot in the dark'll kill 1 boa, 2 cheetah n' three lions
Ill shit on you with some rhymes, and kill you this time,
How you expect to win, when skid marks are your illest lines?
Fag of frontlines, when I sit with all the vets n' laugh,
This boy turned more bitches away then my better half...
I cant call you have a man, you are barley at my eyes
Never have my name, even if I shift you’d never capitalize
And he'll say he's half as nice,
But don't let me utter the fact that this is the kid who lost to Young P twice.
Despite these disses, I'm afraid of this kid’s talent
But ill calm my fears, give you a few years
......................................then ill takeover STILLtallic
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illtalic
title`s down to a `t` cos he really "is that simple".. an lost with it
checks were writing lines.. yes TR.. tho the thought leaves you confounded
nice
so i`ll literally blow ya mind all the way to my finishing bar
give u a head start cos realistically.. ya name will only take you so far
good, solid
just a wack never-has-been.. realist is always hit an miss
an no track record makes it gospel.. that ya exodus follows genesis
lol, nice
you aint tested in text cos you`ve yet to battle.. scared?
like any fake cat he fears the vets.. cos of the pussy that`s bared
ok, not the best
rb`s only admin-wannabe yet to dominate.. text, topical or audio
you have no strength in rep.. in any facet of this rapboard yo!..
lol, good
nigga`s a barrel of laughs.. so many jokes revolve around him
fl tourney? jnr? no wonder genesis let you do anything but battling
lmfao, nice
this an easy win but TR`ll get sicker in time.. like terminal patients
finna building a text reputation?
i`ll have it laid to waste.. before you can lay the foundations.
nice closer
nice verse.
the realist
While reading your verse, I don’t care what people think
Not even little kids are scared of what this monster inks
lmao, nice
Imagine if I was safari Gab, id still leave this bitch crying
1 shot in the dark'll kill 1 boa, 2 cheetah n' three lions
ok
Ill shit on you with some rhymes, and kill you this time,
How you expect to win, when skid marks are your illest lines?
lol, ok, not the best
Fag of frontlines, when I sit with all the vets n' laugh,
This boy turned more bitches away then my better half...
ok
I cant call you have a man, you are barley at my eyes
Never have my name, even if I shift you’d never capitalize
lmao, nice
And he'll say he's half as nice,
But don't let me utter the fact that this is the kid who lost to Young P twice.
not the best
Despite these disses, I'm afraid of this kid’s talent
But ill calm my fears, give you a few years
......................................then ill takeover STILLtallic
ok
surprised me with that verse.
vote-illtalic
hard battle to choose, but i thought he just edged it.
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Nice battle...
But TR killed this with better directed shots...
Harder, meaner hits and some nice personals.
Ill had that too, just softer. Too many statements instead of insults.
There's a difference.
Best line Ill had was...
nigga`s a barrel of laughs.. so many jokes revolve around him
fl tourney? jnr? no wonder genesis let you do anything but battling
And, seriously...
I did it better
Against Judge two weeks ago...
With my closer.
His was a forced rhyme as well.
TR didn't knock my socks off, but his opener and his...
Fag of frontlines, when I sit with all the vets n' laugh,
This boy turned more bitches away then my better half...
Were enough to take this in my eyes.
Winner, TR
Vote-TR
His punches were more direct. Shorter more effective bars besides the Young P line.
nigga`s a barrel of laughs.. so many jokes revolve around him
fl tourney? jnr? no wonder genesis let you do anything but battling
Straight, I think that was your most direct hit. THe lay the foundation and suck I've seen before. TR I like the monster ink/capitalize/and better half lines. Decent battle though.
title`s down to a `t` cos he really "is that simple".. an lost with it
checks were writing lines.. yes TR.. tho the thought leaves you confounded
too stretched..punch really didnt hit hard
so i`ll literally blow ya mind all the way to my finishing bar
give u a head start cos realistically.. ya name will only take you so far
nah, still really didnt hit
just a wack never-has-been.. realist is always hit an miss
an no track record makes it gospel.. that ya exodus follows genesis
seemed a little forced to get a personal here
nothing special..
you aint tested in text cos you`ve yet to battle.. scared?
like any fake cat he fears the vets.. cos of the pussy that`s bared
i think wording hurt u here...verse has been blah so far
rb`s only admin-wannabe yet to dominate.. text, topical or audio
you have no strength in rep.. in any facet of this rapboard yo!..
no...forced the rhyme scheme..
nigga`s a barrel of laughs.. so many jokes revolve around him
fl tourney? jnr? no wonder genesis let you do anything but battling
this was your best line, wording hurt u again, but this was better
this an easy win but TR`ll get sicker in time.. like terminal patients
finna building a text reputation?
i`ll have it laid to waste.. before you can lay the foundations.
seemed like filler to me...didnt come off as a punch
most of your punches didnt hit hard to me...
had some filler lines, only one decent punch..
work on your wording, thats what hurt your verse
TR..
While reading your verse, I don’t care what people think
Not even little kids are scared of what this monster inks
coulda been better, seemed forced to me, so it didnt
hit hard
Imagine if I was safari Gab, id still leave this bitch crying
1 shot in the dark'll kill 1 boa, 2 cheetah n' three lions
no..lost me here man sorry
Ill shit on you with some rhymes, and kill you this time,
How you expect to win, when skid marks are your illest lines?
played, the skid mark shit lines are played
Fag of frontlines, when I sit with all the vets n' laugh,
This boy turned more bitches away then my better half...
got a chuckle..best line so far, still coulda been better
I cant call you have a man, you are barley at my eyes
Never have my name, even if I shift you’d never capitalize
not bad, nothing special either
And he'll say he's half as nice,
But don't let me utter the fact that this is the kid who lost to Young P twice.
the gettin beat by young P line is gettin played...
plus P has gotten a lot better, so the punch doesnt have the same
effect
Despite these disses, I'm afraid of this kid’s talent
But ill calm my fears, give you a few years
......................................then ill takeover STILLtallic
no, i see you tried to wordplay and name diss but
i wasnt really feelin it
Ok TR had a one more line that i liked than Illatic
so he gets my vote..
but overall neither verses were very impressive
i expected more from illtalic,
he's been doing text more that TR...
both should keep trying, u can only improve over time
v/The Realist
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I don't have enough time to break this down line for line, sorry...
Illtalic-
ur flow was all kinds of off, and most of the punches seemed weak to me...I felt part of it, but the rest was just too difficult to read...
"finna building a text reputation?
i`ll have it laid to waste.. before you can lay the foundations."
^ best line in ur verse in my opinion....
The Realist-
Flow was much better...first 4 lines were weak as hell though...I liked the skidmarks thing, but it looks familiar, so I think it's a little played....better half line was cool....the capitilize line was the best in ur verse I think..."stilltalic" was kinda funny...
Both coulda done much better...but I give this to The Realist...he just had more good punchlines, and his flow was solid...
peace
I.J.L.
Since when do Born an W.Rite vote in Jnr?
Told you TR.
Good job.
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^^^ I feel you on that, but I still have to agree with them...
I thought that TR just came a little bit harder witht he punches. I liked the Better half one the most cause I know what he's talking about.....lol. Anyway
Vote - TR
Be glad...The Realist won 1-0, which isnt a KO, I suggest give links next time, Closed.
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