A Poet's Prayer

[Devyne_Wordz]

On this day, I cannot create
I cannot write
I've drawn a blank and,
There is nothing there, but-
Empty spaces
Where my words should be


Oh, the reality of the things that is
And, what could be?


Those things, which are inscribed
Upon the tables of my heart:
Yet, inexpressive of my thoughts
To of which and when,
My Writers' Block departs
Seated at my desk, is where I shall be
To create again


Relieve me of this hollowness,
This absence, this emptiness and void
Dub thee begetter of words
Persuade my inventiveness
To Produce & Cultivate
That I may give birth to a poem

[Shi]

i thought of this as a poem at first..and then i reread the title and the piece.....and this is best as a prayer...prolly one i will tape to my desk....but as a poem im sick of the topic 'writers block' no matter the approach...its been a while since ive seen anyone do it right....but this was a beautiful prayer......in fact i wil print it and put it on my desk.....respect..-shi-

[Spoken]

i agree, a poem topic over written too much, but yet a beautiful prayer. i know we all think around those lines in our dried up times, and i feel you did a great job with this. and it passes as a poem too with the good lines and rhythm to it and all that jazz. but i love it as a prayer, i never really thought about praying for poetic inspiration and help before so this was a new idea.

T
True Love

[Mesmerize]

When I first started reading this I thought of it as very simplistic but then when i read on, you had some deep emotion in this and it was worded beautifully. I agree with what the others said about it being a prayer. Overall nice job. Keep it up..hope to read more from you.

peace,
Mez

[Devyne_Wordz]

big ups for the feedback...holla

[ChitownRican]

when i was first reading it I wasnt really into it but as I kept on I felt you and what you were trying to say nice keep it up

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