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  1. #1
    Bro0klyn
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    LetteR 2 The LorD

    You Gave Me Everything I will Ever Need……
    But I still Sin …Even After Jesus Hands Bleed../
    Why is it That I Have To Live On This Earth….
    Where People Only Care About What A Penny is Worth..//
    I like To Laugh At Death, And Cry at Birth..
    Cause of All the Wrath.. Here On Earth..//
    I Know I Aint Perfect…But I Always Try to Win,..
    Even If I leave Behide a Little Bit Of skin..//
    It’s The Strength I have Within…. That Doesn’t Let you Down…
    And It’s My Physical Strength That Makes Clowns..…Bowdown…//
    But I Cant Help That Shit….I’m Only Human…Well For Now..
    Cause What Goes Around Comes Around.. And I’m Be Taken Out..//
    That only Means that I don’t have to Struggle, Don’t Need to Hustle..
    I Will Have The Love, So I Don’t Need The Muscle..//
    Why Do I Have To Be A Thug….In the Eyes Of My Peers…
    Why Don’t they Welcome Me with Hugs…And wipe Away My Tears..//
    When will I hear the Cheers…And Feel the Change…
    Please Help Me…Cause All I FeeL Is Rain..
    Last edited by Bro0klyn; March 17th, 2005 at 01:38 AM

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    Nicey Written, I Really Cant Criticize The Verse @ All.........
    Its A Religious Piece, & I Believe In That Stuff, So Good Drop Nicely Done...

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