-SpankY- VS. Gifted Signs

[Animated Speech]

yo vote fo night ryda against gifted signs yo

^^^ a classic example of sum1 who doesnt read rules... ur freepostin kid.. now fuck off

Gifted Signs
Spanky i guess you wanted to call for your end/
I'm going to write it down and then press send/
and once it hit the page i make all your homies say we aint friends/
you on these mic I will defeat you like Tyson/
cause i get more votes then Andrew Jackson/
i leave you on the floor with no leg, arm, chest/
then i'll send a hollow tip throw vest/
look at you and say you just been hit/
on your last breath have you say you and your rhyme ain't shit/
in theis battle you lost and it really doesn't matter what you spit

^basic.. try n concentrate on usin better words and elevate ya technique - try n play on words and maybe throw in metas... elevate ya punches...



-SpankY-
u call urself gifted signs, but u aint gifted at shit
that became very clear after seeing u spit
were both rookies here, but im the veteran of us kid
im bout to tear you up in this battle like night ryda did
i saw ur last battle u had no ryme, rythem, or game
i wuld have to admit that this 1 was the same
ur free sucked so bad that it shuld have been hosted by bob saget
u need to get off this website cuz u cant rap worth shit faggot
u need to work on your rymes, and lay off that bacardi
i just landed a punch to your head and knocked you out of this battle like a pinyata at a mexican party
this is so easy that beating you that this culd become my obsession
if thats all u got, then u need to log off and go fidn another profession

^weak verse aswell... exactly the same advice for you...

both of ya shud check out experienced emcees texts and see wat they doin that your not... peace

[Laced Up]

Spanky i guess you wanted to call for your end/
I'm going to write it down and then press send/
and once it hit the page i make all your homies say we aint friends/
you on these mic I will defeat you like Tyson/
cause i get more votes then Andrew Jackson/
i leave you on the floor with no leg, arm, chest/
then i'll send a hollow tip throw vest/
look at you and say you just been hit/
on your last breath have you say you and your rhyme ain't shit/
in theis battle you lost and it really doesn't matter what you spit

ya shit flowed but u need to make your punches stronger no hate but good shit i liked ya structure and how u didnt use self glory stuck to him

u call urself gifted signs, but u aint gifted gifted at shit
that became very clear to me right after seeing u spit


were both rookies but im the veteran here kid
im bout to tear u up in this battle like night ryda did

i saw ur last battle, u had no ryme, rythem, or game
i wuld have to admit that this battle was the same

ur free sucked so bad that it was funny, it shuld be hosted by bob saget
u need to get off this website cuz u cant rap worth shit faggot

u need to work on your rymes and lay off all that bacardi
i just landed a punch to your head and knocked you out of this battle like a pinyata at a mexican

this is so fuckin easy that beating u culd become my obsession
if thats all u got, then u need to log off an dgo find anothe profession

ya first line and last line is all i liked but u are new so get ya structure strait but no hate u did coo but i have to vote for gifted for better flow and more consistant punches

[IwIlLmErKyOu]

gifted signs-
Spanky i guess you wanted to call for your end/
I'm going to write it down and then press send/
...ok opener...
and once it hit the page i make all your homies say we aint friends/
you on these mic I will defeat you like Tyson/
cause i get more votes then Andrew Jackson/
....ok......
i leave you on the floor with no leg, arm, chest/
then i'll send a hollow tip throw vest/
....eh played.....
look at you and say you just been hit/
on your last breath have you say you and your rhyme ain't shit/
in theis battle you lost and it really doesn't matter what you spit
...nice closer...
overall-7/10
alright not a bad verse, you had aight structure and you had some decent punches and perosnals, just try to be a little more creative.

spanky-
u call urself gifted signs, but u aint gifted at shit
that became very clear after seeing u spit
...nice opener......
were both rookies here, but im the veteran of us kid
im bout to tear you up in this battle like night ryda did
....no......
i saw ur last battle u had no ryme, rythem, or game
i wuld have to admit that this 1 was the same
....eh ok......
ur free sucked so bad that it shuld have been hosted by bob saget
u need to get off this website cuz u cant rap worth shit faggot
...decent.....
u need to work on your rymes, and lay off that bacardi
i just landed a punch to your head and knocked you out of this battle like a pinyata at a mexican party
....played.......
this is so easy that beating you that this culd become my obsession
if thats all u got, then u need to log off and go fidn another profession
...ok closer...
overall-5/10
alright, this verse was very basic with some played rhymes. come harder wit hpunches that are more direct.

v/gifted signs