Different

[Chip]

People unite thru their differences,
but with me the difference is a little more diverse,
demanding other's understanding,
my problems make up my personality,
the reality of life is that nothing matters except its finality,
when she left, my whole world was stunted,
siblings would get made fun of bcuz they government funded,
life isn't truly as it seems,
and there's a fine line btween reality and simply havin a dream,
but i wanna change that,
life is takin' its toll and i want my change back,
tame that beast, my world's spinnin like a Maytag,
just want the same stacks as those sellin that lame crap,
people think they runnin my life don't cut me no slack,
thought they saw my future well i guess they needin contacts,
life is nice but kept in focus by my rhymes facts,
that aren't limited by a contract.
-Chip

[Prince Escobar]

Niiice piece i enjoyed it, it had a little less of a poetic voice, more like a content driven rap but who am i to tell u what is and what is not poetry? A few of your lines made me think and this line in particular "life is takin' its toll and i want my change back" i found especially dope, that one line made the poem in my opinion, you have very good ideas and are very clever, thanks for the good read, stay up, 1luv.

[Chip]

good lookin on the reply. thanks for your opinion.