User Tag List

Showing results 1 to 5 of 5

Thread: streetz been waiting

  1. #1
    tjb
    Guest

    streetz been waiting

    yes yes yall im not the person ya want.
    let's call a draw im not a saint.
    people walk in the woods.
    welcome to the hood.
    petersburg,va man.
    niggaz come out smoke ya like a gun pratice lane.
    it'z the 1 2 3 4 5 let's get high.
    to all my gangstaz thats down to ride.
    im about to give yall a tablet.
    go to sleep don't wake up under feet.
    man i saw people get shot up.
    body get drop off.
    niggaz rattle ya trunk like criscross.
    man can't you see im hte boss.
    look at how the way i floss.
    man claim me to be the boss.

    tha streets been waiting
    tha streets benn waiting
    for some one to put'em in their places.

    you just found out my name just speaks out.
    niggaz kill lil boys and girl scouts.
    let's see what his talking about.
    im black not white.
    we can get on the city's trice.
    man this a bumrush.
    when niggaz bones crush.
    it give you that rush in ya veins.
    to open up a niggaz brains.
    im trying to talk to the darkness.
    not walk in the darkness.
    my life iz raw.
    all we do iz just break laws.
    i hear noking at the door like it's a beast.
    but niggaz know it'a that police.
    they come in watch me take some lifes in.
    my pistol is critical.
    alot of damage man work the package man.

    the streets been waiting
    the streets been waiting
    for some body to put'em in their places.

    let's get it (hustler's motivation)
    niggaz can't really live in a mansion.
    ho's and car'z.
    man i need a certificate to a rap superstar.
    just do what a man gotta do.
    don't leave my life chopped and screwed.
    of all the interludes i had witness.
    gangsta of the fitness.
    look man im not wasting this.
    i listen to ludacris.
    and skip to a remix.
    like eating twix.
    yall gotta hear this shit.
    the streets been waiting.
    and im about to tell them.
    don't cause ya life wrong turns.
    sometimes ya might feel burn.
    life is beautiful just look at it.
    past the gunz, clipz, and shit.
    man ya gotta skip trough this shit.
    it's tjb rocking this song.
    niggaz still be smocking on that bong.
    tjb and im out!

    the streets been waiting
    the streets been waiting
    for some body to put'em in their places

    jailhouse, jailhouse, jailhouse

    Next song comming october the 5th

    2005 nigga !!!!!

    VOTEZ
    Last edited by tjb; October 3rd, 2005 at 02:05 PM

  2. #2
    LISTEN
    Guest
    look man, i see da message u tryin to get across, and u have potential, but u need to work on ur structure and, jus need to make more things ryhme.i aint hattin on u do.

  3. #3
    tjb
    Guest

    got you man ( to listen)

    i read your statement i do know what your talking about thanks!

  4. #4
    NONCENTZ AKA WORD~PERFECT noncentz's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2003
    Location
    j-ville florida
    Age
    43
    Posts
    5,352
    Battle Record
    7-14
    Hey Its Constructive Critiquing You Aint Bad Just Needs Some Elivating.if You Thoought Harder And Reread Youd See Spots That Needed Improving
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

  5. #5
    mcbadboy
    Guest
    keep putting in them post when yo get 100 we will battle

Similar Threads

  1. Waiting
    By Bump Cap in forum Poetic Scriptures
    Replies: 6
    Last Post: October 12th, 2009, 11:54 AM
  2. If You're Waiting for a PC From Me!!!
    By Opie M. in forum The Studio
    Replies: 11
    Last Post: October 9th, 2006, 12:07 PM
  3. waiting...
    By k.i.s.s. in forum Open Mic
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: July 24th, 2004, 05:12 PM

Posting Rules

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •