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    This is for tha Haters

    Alias: Tomkat


    I dont really care about other rappers today all they've done is paved the way,
    Just set the stage for tomkat the great, Ill put you out like a cigarette ina ashtray,
    I will go nonstop till its Tomkat not 2pac who everyone will wanna watch,
    Put it in the air, release it and cough, have all your shit fucked and botched,
    No disrespect to the man his rhymes was grand, But im takin this land,
    Smokin weed till i cant stand, you better believe this shit was planned,
    Get offa tupac hez old news somethin to listen to when ya got the blues,
    IM makin sure you pay your dues, no brains in ya head, all 20 of ya got no clues,
    I keep it fresh all day cuz i flow like the rain, I can bring ya Love or pain,
    Either way ma shit go strait to ya brain, till it make you go insane,
    Yes i have the desire to breath fire, work real hard till i start to perspire,
    Ill make you stand up as if i was singin in a choir, the need for me is dire,
    Your gonna be skared when i come out cause when i start rhymin,
    you try to keep up but the matter of the fact is you denyin,

    Thats old shit when i first came out, Heres one of ma verses from now,

    Someone once told me words are the strongest weapons,
    Gods son boldly taught us a valuable lesson,
    Stand up for what you believe in even if its wrong,
    soon youll be seein life is not very long,
    You might be in a gang, or you might go to church,
    You might have a car, but remember money dosent hold its worth,
    I learnt how to write a verse and make it good,
    Nas's music helped me do it, Im stormin outa ma hood,
    Just like that tomkats on tha rap scene,
    Believe tha White kid I used to be a feign,
    Smokin Marijuana drippen sweat like a sauna whenever i played ball,
    after awhile I got calmer, got taller, whether Im good or not you make the call,
    Ima hardcore, major weight mover, not some loser,
    Come to me when in need life underground is like havin a tumor,
    Not much humor all hardwork to death from birth,
    Learinin how to hustle, not a hard lesson to learn,

    And thats some of ma shit

    Ladie streetz
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...74#post3320474

    Quarter
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...83#post3320483

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    aight this was a pretty good first OM for you man....I don't know hwy you got my link in the bottom bu I dont really care, solid rhyming and creativity from you...ill give you an 8/10 cause its not tha hottest but still good.......

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    uppin for more feed back, i put those two links in cause thats what it said to do in tha rules homie

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    Leave longer feedback. 2 lines isnt long enough. I think in the rules it says like atleast 4.

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