It aint all about image

[Spit_the_lyrics]

This game aint about the colour of ur skin, or where u start from
Its about the love and understandin of this lyrical artform
Cause theres nothin like creatin a rhyme or, settin a standard
Or manipulatin the english language, to ur own advantage
You dont need a beat, or an instrumental
Just be free and let ur soul flow out thru that pencil
Cause some people write ryhmes down but meanwhile,
Other kids are on street corners bustin out freestyles
And its these kids that get stereotypically attacked,
Juts for wearin evisu jeans, hoodies and flat caps
Its only clothes why cant u just let us choose it?
We only wear it cause its related to our music
Lets say it was country music that brought us kids together
You wouldnt feel threatened if we wore cowboy hats and leather!
And u get sad when u hear about kids with depression tales,
So let them push the boundaries, break loose and express themselves
Now i hoped u paid attention, werent rude and did listen
cause wat u just read involved unparralleled composition
And dont say were ignorant, it does upset us
HELL i just used 2 words with 21 letters
But as i say thats that, and i hope u heard
Cause u just cause a glimpse of my soul, through spoken word

[Spit_the_lyrics]

need feedbak never dun this b4 lol peeeeace

[Mistral]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

[80ProofNME]

This game aint about the colour of ur skin, or where u start from
Its about the love and understandin of this lyrical artform
Cause theres nothin like creatin a rhyme or, settin a standard
Or manipulatin the english language, to ur own advantage
You dont need a beat, or an instrumental
Just be free and let ur soul flow out thru that pencil
Cause some people write ryhmes down but meanwhile,
Other kids are on street corners bustin out freestyles
And its these kids that get stereotypically attacked,
Juts for wearin evisu jeans, hoodies and flat caps
Its only clothes why cant u just let us choose it?
We only wear it cause its related to our music
Lets say it was country music that brought us kids together
You wouldnt feel threatened if we wore cowboy hats and leather!
And u get sad when u hear about kids with depression tales,
So let them push the boundaries, break loose and express themselves
Now i hoped u paid attention, werent rude and did listen
cause wat u just read involved unparralleled composition
And dont say were ignorant, it does upset us
HELL i just used 2 words with 21 letters
But as i say thats that, and i hope u heard
Cause u just cause a glimpse of my soul, through spoken word

To me,your opener punchline sounded forced,then the following was likewise.

This game aint about the colour of ur skin, or where u start from
Its about the love and understandin of this lyrical artform

Cause theres nothin like creatin a rhyme or, settin a standard
Or manipulatin the english language, to ur own advantage

There was even some bars that didn't rhyme...

And dont say were ignorant, it does upset us
HELL i just used 2 words with 21 letters

Your flow was decent...but not good enough that pulls the reader into it and won't let them go.Your punchlines wasn't anything amazing and needed alot of improvement.No wordplay,nor did I find any multi's. 4.5/10

You've got potential,you just need pratice,keep practing and you will see yourself slightly elevating along the way.