I originally did this in a battle let me know what you think....... It was under my Papa Smurf name
Shattered mind with a violent Statement
So silent, but viciously it Settles
tonight we will see the harsh reality
of what the true cold, fogs up
Men surrendered in war wit a gat and a busted knuckle
Quietly abused as rain pours cryin as their kneees buckle
Shattered state of mind, with contiplating emotions
as men sit wit compulsive compulsions they erode with erosions
no protection with trojans, but dramatically woken
Breathless thoughts in the mind, but no words spoken
Vomitin and chokin, but ur sickness is not a disease
its wut builds up inside, and has u drop to your knees
As you cautiously move, nerves bust with confusion
in the movement of insanity as the cost of intrusion
its not fatility u seek but memories you embrace
thoughts inraged, but its ur Pasts that you trace
breathless thoughts that u seek but with no supervision
futures existing, but u only feel the fatal incision
not only a mission, but an infliction that u have to persist
if u wish to inlist then its ur thoughts that just twist
What has your insanity turned into a crude posture
its not only a loss of care, but the mind that u foster
as ur cold hands grasp ur head, and u start to sufficate
but not on ur breath, on ur breathless thoughts that inferiorate
crossin the line between life and death with ur mind
as ur thoughts re-bind, ur prosecutions fatal and unkind
locked up in ur own corner as u seek for appreciation
but ur Breathless Thoughts had u lose ur Attempt for Alieviation