~RhymeSwift~ vs. NYisBack

[Axe.]

Ny..you came good wit da punches..nice personals also...
alright vocab some part could have used work............
but it was decent..not bad multies..or mettas...good strucure
also...overall good drop

vs

Rhyme..your shit was okay...Kiddy flow...nice vocab tho
your mettas could have used work but you had some of them
in there..alright multies.....overall..decent verse

v.NyisBack{For a Better Verse}

[keywerd]

kid i dont frreze cats, but i'll make u choke like u was smokin'
and ur punchlines neva connect like ur membranes were brokin'

vs

Statements

Weak battle really. NY, I can tell that you keyed this verse easily, all you needed really. But still you should alwasy drop your best to elavate. I dunno `bout you RS, maybe text just isn't your thing but most of those lines were statements.

v. NY

[Agony.]

rhymeswift ur soft, prolly made it to my level but fell
and last time we battled, u bit ur whole verse from big L
Rofl.. owned. Best bar here


I have to say this was really one sided here. ny i see your getting more effective with punches & somewhat more direct. you had some ok concepts here & some ok wording. rhyme swift your verse was forced & played. i say ny came alot more creative here.

v/Ny.