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  • Point5 the Felon

    0 0%
  • Thomas

    5 100.00%
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Thread: Thomas vs Point5 the Felon

  1. #16
    Legend.
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    uppin....4.....
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  2. #17
    bann'd from text STAY-Z's Avatar
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    thomas

    Our emotions are ready to blow...You cannot hide affection..
    Why is she worried...She'll have my love and protection..

    I have all to gain...But she has all to lose..
    She will...But i won't..Care about people's views..

    Forbidden or not i love her...that sweet tender voice..
    When we are together...You'll hear me sing the worlds rejoice..


    stand out lines^
    nice read on thomas's behalf, good structure, and flow was nice
    on topic and consistent 8/10

    point5 the felon

    poor verse, not really much it in
    bit hard to follow, you should work on tryna get your verse flow a bit nicer
    not feelin it 3/10

    vote- thomas much nicer verse overall

  3. #18
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    last upp.....uppin 5........
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    18-0 Crew Record, 06-07 Best Crew.

  4. #19
    The Otha White Drug B1ZK3T's Avatar
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    Overall I vote Tom...Better consistancy, imagery, and decent vocab...Pretty much on-topic since there was alot of leeway in the subject...If anything I'd say both should elevate on the following, Point5 more so than Tom: Vocab, Multies, Concepts, Wording, and a twinge more of Creativity...V/Thomas

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