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mmmmmm kate
shit deleted my verse lolz damn dis site b confusin lolz all juz key something lol dont whore me
faggot.
I’m mean to be splittin’, your wack- im sure your gonna come bitten
And bitch you can eat my dust…that’s all your punches seem to be hittin’
Fuck the writtens, I smash and I crush, I pound, smack and bruise
So…let’s just say it aint ironic that your name colours are…black and blue
You wack and ya spew, you aint close dun, you come fucking rugged
And if anyone gave a dam about you, not even a stream would get flooded
You gotta love it, you’re a social reject - true ,Your pissed n’ a jerk b
No one even likes you - get stuffed bitch…just like a Christmas turkey!
On me the name play‘ll get played fast, like when my sprays blast
But its true, you’ll never get a profit coz you’re the one to get played last
Profit claiming his ass is new, hi wanna battle?
Obviously his old name got merked so hes back on a new saddle,
I know they say when you fall off you gotta climb back on
But you must of fell off a cliff or sumin cause your flow is long gone,
Im zero to two which is sub par thus far
Its why im battling you, cause your mind is one boob short of a full bra,
What you doing here anyway, did you lose your way
He must have thought this was a game cause all his lines been played
It would be PROFITABLE for you to read the LLL and grow wings guy/
Ya'll could drink a gallon of redbull.... and still you aint be fly/
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mmmmmm kate
You wack and ya spew, you aint close dun, you come fucking rugged
And if anyone gave a dam about you, not even a stream would get flooded
You gotta love it, you’re a social reject - true ,Your pissed n’ a jerk b
No one even likes you - get stuffed bitch…just like a Christmas turkey!
VS
NOTHING
profit you came pretty good your concepts are nice and your wording is pretty good other guy work on better punches and wording thats what let you down go read the LLL and that will give you an idea of good wordplay and wording
V.Profit
MoistPuss'Smoother than smooth
You know. You know. Cause when you know, you know. You Know.
The mind without a brain\i/
da fuck at this dude having my name in his title?
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wordie...dopizzle...nice closer
Profit your bars came mad streched and I was only kinda feelin the multis. The Xmas turkey punch was played, and I don't know what 2 tell ya. Castilo I'm not sure if you fucked up on your structure or its really supposed to be all over the place with /s .. this battle was nothin special but you came harder .. lol nice opener.
v/c
QueenStyle
I know they say when you fall off you gotta climb back on
But you must of fell off a cliff or sumin cause your flow is long gone,
vs
nothing really
this battle was weak, both need to elevate and read LLL battles for ideas on wat a punch is and how u can word it, both did meh, profit had a few multies, but no punches that were really hard, both had shit that was play'd out years ago, and that had a very simplistic rhyme scheme, but i have casito getting this with an attempt at fresher and harder hitting concepts.............v/ casito
wtf at queenstlye and Mystikal's vote having not having any logic in their decisions
I’m mean to be splittin’, your wack- im sure your gonna come bitten
And bitch you can eat my dust…that’s all your punches seem to be hittin’
no, I see what your sayin but nah
Fuck the writtens, I smash and I crush, I pound, smack and bruise
So…let’s just say it aint ironic that your name colours are…black and blue
NO
You wack and ya spew, you aint close dun, you come fucking rugged
And if anyone gave a dam about you, not even a stream would get flooded
good
You gotta love it, you’re a social reject - true ,Your pissed n’ a jerk b
No one even likes you - get stuffed bitch…just like a Christmas turkey!
meh, needed a little wit to it
On me the name play‘ll get played fast, like when my sprays blast
But its true, you’ll never get a profit coz you’re the one to get played last
nah
vs
Obviously his old name got merked so hes back on a new saddle,
I know they say when you fall off you gotta climb back on
But you must of fell off a cliff or sumin cause your flow is long gone,
Im zero to two which is sub par thus far
Its why im battling you, cause your mind is one boob short of a full bra,
What you doing here anyway, did you lose your way
He must have thought this was a game cause all his lines been played
It would be PROFITABLE for you to read the LLL and grow wings guy/
Ya'll could drink a gallon of redbull.... and still you aint be fly/
I don't know how to breakdown your verse cuz I can't tell when your rhyming so....
ALL SHIT, I CAN'T EVEN TELL WHEN YOU WERE RHYMING, GAY STRUCTURE, PLAYED SHIT, WEAK ASS SHIT
I can't vote but it would be for Profit for being more creative, having a better structure, not coming played like Casito and simply dropping harder punches.
honest feed, no hate to nobody
i liked C's opening lines:
"Profit claiming his ass is new, hi wanna battle?
Obviously his old name got merked so hes back on a new saddle,"
but the rest was utter shyte....
Profit def took this one easy and with this line he just stepped on the enemy...
"You wack and ya spew, you aint close dun, you come fucking rugged
And if anyone gave a dam about you, not even a stream would get flooded"
that shit was just funny
anyways: v/profit
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uppin 4 votes......
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mmmmmm kate
lmao at this illogical voting. up [2]
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