You Can't Put A Face To Murder

[Bounce]

You Can't Put A Face To Murder

rationale of a serial killah
...murdah's just therapy
thru the sites of a waring sol'jah
...murdah's only policy
last thoughts of a jilted lover
...murdah's gona rescue me
in the voice of a gangsta killah
...murdah comes easy

The Psychopath

lurking in dark places, patiently waiting to pounce
working to part faces, patiently baiting the mouse
jerkin a tart shameless angrily painting her blouse
while drain'n her health w/a knife fuck to the mouth
deep in the flesh buried hatchets fashion the mold
fast to unload seeds on a quest to blast in the cold
bask in bold colors after tearing her ass a new hole
literally sticking my dick where a breast used to go
fist fucking her sick w/ the severed arm of her beau
beating my drum to full moons then eating her whole
eager to hold her pretty head up for show as a trophy
and mount her covered in blood nailing miss sophie
police discovered her uncovered in mud... mostly!
body parts scattered, her remains battered & bare
if you stacked up the carnage I left half of her there
drank of her blood & drug half of her back to my lair

" rationale of a serial killah
...murdah's just therapy "


The Soldier

mangled men dangle from braided ends
..brazen under fire, muzzled deeply within
ruins of an old tower counting to ten
..gaining control of my breath
while poised to deliver a sermon of death
..calculating & to a certain extent
live for my orders & march w/a murderous intent
..so if the order's to kill
it's blood that'll spill, & when I finger a trigger
..another sand nigger'll feel
my dedication to Country, my God & this steel
..march onward Christian soldier
shoulder a rifle and learn to combat w/ skill
..caught in the cross hairs
of this good'ole boy out paying the rent
..cuz freedom ain't free
so I'm repaying my debt, tenfold every hour
..men fold in a shower
of lead, fired from a tower high over head
..turning turbans to red
low on ammo I call in to strike the position
..w/ guided munitions
that explode and burst into screams
..from the soon to be dead
my occupation is war, born & bred
..to put boots on the shore
to Baghdad & his wife w/a knock at your door
..cuz that's American.. Hard to the core!

" thru the sites of a waring sol'jah
...murdah's only policy "


The Jilted Lover

tears stream down the face of this gentle man
a gentlemen well dressed, with a dental plan
the jilted man's heart broke by sweet Suzanne
banned by love before he was wedded by band
loaded on shots he stumbles pistol in hand
pissed at the world he fumbles pissing his pants
slouched in an alley where kids come to dance
thinking only of her and their shattered romance
a thousand faces later he sees her in dress
out w/ her girls letting off stress, so he guessed
until he caught a second glimpse of her chest
implants? followed by planted hands on her ass
this a new lover or just some man out to harass?
he staggers thru shadows while stuck in the past
lips pressed to a flask gun loaded ready to blast
he sneaks up behind only to brandish the chrome
pistol whips dude as she screams "leave him alone"
he fires three shots.. two to kill love...
...AND ONE TO HIS DOME

Suzanne falls to the ground in blood stained dress
sentenced to eternal rest, by love gone a mess

" last thoughts of a jilted lover
...murdah's gona rescue me "


The Gangster

ok, so the way this shit starts out is kind of fucked
another shoot out.. an exchange of double ought buck
for the change in my pocket.. maybe the rims on my truck
humble by nature but in a rumble you're shit out of luck
three shots from that blazer so I duck low and untuck
the package I keep neatly stashed in the dash, w/a clunk
the barrel sounds as I exit for cover to fire up some punks
low crawl to take a clear shot on the drivers side w/a chunk
the kind to slug a mutha fucka mean muggin from 30 yards
raised in dirty yards, predisposed to do dirt, fucken w/ dirty bars
only led to burning with hurt. So it's slugs to the dome
painting a closed casket collage w/ the flesh off your bones
shell verses shell, but I ain't exchanging them moans
because it's Hell verses HELLFIRE when I engage for my own!
I put two in the driver then I got the drop on his clone
cut the fucker in half and watched his fragments get blown
splattered and leaked on the leather, sidewalk and chrome
gun powder blues, shake the spot before they spot you

" in the voice of a gangsta killah
...murdah comes easy "

rationale of a serial killah
...murdah's just therapy
thru the sites of a waring sol'jah
...murdah's only policy
last thoughts of a jilted lover
...murdah's gona rescue me
in the voice of a gangsta killah
...murdah comes easy

You can't put a face to murder... until you're facing murder...

[Nique.]

Cool stuff, Bounce. The flow was definitely on point. I like the concept 'you can't put a face to murder' while going through the variations of murder that we see everyday, but never really notice how complex and different they are. it's kind of sick that we're capable to go different routes with such a unfortunate action that occurs on the daily. i was really feeling the psychopath and gangster one. i dont know...the content and imagery itself was so profound that it connected with me more than the others. overall this was a good piece. good stuff.

[Paramik]

Yea That Psychopath one was really familiar and grotesque.
Showed a lot of emotion and imagery.

[Spekz.]

Bounce, its good to be reading your stuff again..its extremely inspirational...im usually use to your high vocabulary,and extremely well put metaphores however this piece was brought to greatness by its amazing flow,wordplay, and storyline. My favorite part was the soldier part, it read amazing to me ..all part created a sense of realism that is so tough to create through words,but u captured it perfectly.

i always enjoy reading your pieces...good drop.

[Cody Nash]

crazy flow as always bounce. glad i'm back in this at the same time you are, i've always enjoyed reading your stuff man. learned a lot from you. I love the comparison of killers in this. four different killers, four different faces ..and god knows there's many more than this. you put it out there that there's many different types of killers ..some were good men, as the jilted lover was, some do it because they fight for something as the soldier did, some do it to represent and defend their honor as the gangster, and some do it for the sport! you definitely came original again as always, and this definitely is HoF easily in my eyes, but you of course knew that before you posted. great read, thanks man.


would appreciate feedback/tips if needed on this ..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...nd-341152.html

[Bounce]

Thanks everyone, I'm just trying to get back into the RB writing thing, I stay writing but it's about time I start posting for RB again. Glad to see everyone in here, this was just a simple jot down of ideas on a concept that I will further develop into future drops. The band is working it into song format, the contrast of verses is coming across cool in audio so far. Hopefully we can knock it out in time for a dry run on Saturday night.

[Diversed]

I liked this bounce, I see your back int the gore type ish agin, this piece contained anlot of raw emoton, some of the rhymes I felt could've been substitued for more progressive ones, but this was fine. Great usage of words they really help capture the moment.

[NiNjah Red]

jerkin a tart shameless angrily painting her blouse
while drain'n her health w/a knife fuck to the mouth


HAHA, was feelin this barsfast to unload seeds on a quest to blast in the cold
bask in bold colors after tearing her ass a new hole


mwaaahahaha, dayuym

psycho ish


am felin this verse, but'll have to get back to it to finish, coz at the moment ima bit psycho myself, and the dark humour within mettaphors is just killing me, and probaly your out to make a more serious point, but i'm laughing all the way,. HA


I'm'a check this out some more when i gain a kudos of sanity
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[Engivale]

well done piece... the rhyming is, as usual with your pieces, the biggest thing here, at times the lines can seem a little awkward, like using the term 'beau' for the girl's lover at that one point kinda threw me off but it made the part even more demented... Kind of funny I would read this after last time I was drunk ranting I was saying a lot of your shit ends up like this, and I suppose most of the time I read your work it seems to be very dark... I'm not so sure I've ever read anything very uplifting or philosophical from you, but hell, enough of us do that and I guess it's not your style, or you don't like putting our the personal vibes... Cuz honestly, in your writing, I never feel very connected to you as a person, it's always this fluidly-worded anger that just seems to be almost redundant in topic material, though it always comes out so well when paced out loud that it's very difficult not to appreciate the talent for wording that you possess...

A good read, my criticisms are more in general than of the piece, I would certainly like to see you put your personal life out there a little more often so I could understand the plight of bounce, so to speak, but your style is and will remain cool.

RTF when u get time, dude. And sign into SS, we could use ya.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ss-340957.html

[Bounce]

well done piece... the rhyming is, as usual with your pieces, the biggest thing here, at times the lines can seem a little awkward, like using the term 'beau' for the girl's lover at that one point kinda threw me off but it made the part even more demented... Kind of funny I would read this after last time I was drunk ranting I was saying a lot of your shit ends up like this, and I suppose most of the time I read your work it seems to be very dark... I'm not so sure I've ever read anything very uplifting or philosophical from you, but hell, enough of us do that and I guess it's not your style, or you don't like putting our the personal vibes... Cuz honestly, in your writing, I never feel very connected to you as a person, it's always this fluidly-worded anger that just seems to be almost redundant in topic material, though it always comes out so well when paced out loud that it's very difficult not to appreciate the talent for wording that you possess...

A good read, my criticisms are more in general than of the piece, I would certainly like to see you put your personal life out there a little more often so I could understand the plight of bounce, so to speak, but your style is and will remain cool.

RTF when u get time, dude. And sign into SS, we could use ya.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ss-340957.html

I see what you mean, so you must be a fairly new to my work, because I only took on this "audio verse only " attitude a few years ago. RB forced me to change up the content of my posts here, as a writer those few things you might of read of mine, do not in any way reflect what I do as a writer. Those are just quick keys for battles and shit, knowing what these kids want to read and vote on. If I got personal/deep/abstract/or non fictional, it would go over 95 percent of the boards head, and I am sure you have seen much of your own work fall into that category around here. Plus I'm an emcee, so it helps to only post audio verses, since that is the only time I have to hone up those skills. I'm going to link you to a few early pieces of mine that might give you a better understanding of me and what not. Glad you stopped by, it will be cool sharing some of that stuff with you if you have not already read it. I have tons of shit posted on here.

A fathers love is a real look into who I am.. it's in the PS forum somewhere

[ELEETE]

one of the best writers on this site
i always enjoy reading your work man your style is so smooth and everything is so detalied and well told we need to collab somethime man this was another amazing piecve from you

[LedgenZ]

This piece was very deep – in a dark, psychopathic, almost inhuman type of way. Huh the visuals and imagery…well hmmm they were great….almost cinematic…yeah cinematic.
They had sort of a “SIN CITY/300” meets “American Pysco/Texas Chainsaw Massacre”…blah blah blah sort of visual to them, at least that’s how I pictured it. Anyways the rhyme scheme was obviously dope and….everything….was, was laid out relatively nicely – as always. Complex and entertaining; I can’t complain great drop.

p.s. -- Great Title, it really sums it up...oh and RTF

pZ

[RaPiN_LaTiN]

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