$pitacular 0-0 vs. Relli_Mak 0-1

[SmokaJoka]

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[Relli_Mak]

check

[$pitacular]

check. 14

[$pitacular]

yeah I'm back.. with no practice. homie fuck it lets get at this


I can break the best on my first verse. look, I've done it before
just write Welcome on your chest, n' lay down in front of the door
nowadays, everything I spit leaves bitches scarred n' broken
but I owe you.. cuz I was never hard until your momma started strokin
n' as far as ya girl goes, shit.. I got you watchin her celly tight
I had to laugh... Relli Mak? dog wtf you can't even Relli Write
let's keep it candid. homie my style is known: abuse a rival
and tell me, why would highlight my advantage in your user title?
even if you landed ya best shot, stupid bitch I wouldn't budge
cuz I'ma grown Grizzly... and looks like you still wish you were a Cub
I might switch to the knife. I never jab, homie I swing or I hurl
n' I never snitched in my life, but yes, I did finger your girl
my lightning-quick punches hit, and like thunder you crash
n' the only way you'd drop hot shit is holding your hand under my ass
fuckin youngster.. you get ate up.. mostly cuz I'm wiser
you were on a roll at first... as a matter of fact it was keiser
I got love for RB.. it's RM I could care less about. prick I whore
don't put words in my mouth, and please stop putting dick in yours

pzzzzzzzzz

[Relli_Mak]

Just got home from work, so I'll have to drop tomorrow..approve that or fuck it, but Smoka..plz, let me drop tomorrow..cuz I want this match!

[SmokaJoka]

up and over

btw...if $pit agrees with giving you an extension then fine...if not then this will be closed as soon as I see an answer from him

[Relli_Mak]

This guy..smh..

U fuckn old, only was hot during da Ice Ages, so now watch Mak win
Cuz Mike Jones said it best, you were known 2 be nice..way "Back then.."
Blah..all of RB has tried every diss 2 my name, n u failed da worst..played
My punches'll apply pressure 2 ya dome, I'm positive(+) u'll need First Aid
Ur well known here, goin down in history w/ sum of RB all on ur John, right?
Bitch plz, ur the only Legend that even ordinary ppl consider beyond trite..
Heard ur a father w/ a little girl, that's nice..but listen up to wuts said, G..
She may not seen it b4 this battle, but afta she'll c dat ur were dead-beat
This shit is a Thriller to me..dumb fucks like you are what really make dis site
U and ur crew name reminds me of Micheal Jackson, ya'll both fakin bein bright
I know I'm not favored, prolly still lose to RB politics..I'll jus try my luck n see
Cuz maybe votes'll come my way if I make a breakthrough......ya fuckin' teeth
Money talks, n u obviously broke bitch..time 4 u to check out n jus stop it
U'll neva cash in on what u $pit, even da symbol n ya name can't help u earn profit

[Jcorm]

I can break the best on my first verse. look, I've done it before
just write Welcome on your chest, n' lay down in front of the door
meh.....
nowadays, everything I spit leaves bitches scarred n' broken
but I owe you.. cuz I was never hard until your momma started strokin
wasn't feelin it
n' as far as ya girl goes, shit.. I got you watchin her celly tight
I had to laugh... Relli Mak? dog wtf you can't even Relli Write
i guess......
let's keep it candid. homie my style is known: abuse a rival
and tell me, why would highlight my advantage in your user title?
k
even if you landed ya best shot, stupid bitch I wouldn't budge
cuz I'ma grown Grizzly... and looks like you still wish you were a Cub
nah
I might switch to the knife. I never jab, homie I swing or I hurl
n' I never snitched in my life, but yes, I did finger your girl
no
my lightning-quick punches hit, and like thunder you crash
n' the only way you'd drop hot shit is holding your hand under my ass
played
fuckin youngster.. you get ate up.. mostly cuz I'm wiser
you were on a roll at first... as a matter of fact it was keiser
don't get it
I got love for RB.. it's RM I could care less about. prick I whore
don't put words in my mouth, and please stop putting dick in yours
no

Was this really even spit? He came so much better last week. This wasn't a very good verse.

U fuckn old, only was hot during da Ice Ages, so now watch Mak win
Cuz Mike Jones said it best, you were known 2 be nice..way "Back then.."
meh......i guess
Blah..all of RB has tried every diss 2 my name, n u failed da worst..played
My punches'll apply pressure 2 ya dome, I'm positive(+) u'll need First Aid
nah
Ur well known here, goin down in history w/ sum of RB all on ur John, right?
Bitch plz, ur the only Legend that even ordinary ppl consider beyond trite..
k
Heard ur a father w/ a little girl, that's nice..but listen up to wuts said, G..
She may not seen it b4 this battle, but afta she'll c dat ur were dead-beat
wasn't feelin this
This shit is a Thriller to me..dumb fucks like you are what really make dis site
U and ur crew name reminds me of Micheal Jackson, ya'll both fakin bein bright
i guess
I know I'm not favored, prolly still lose to RB politics..I'll jus try my luck n see
Cuz maybe votes'll come my way if I make a breakthrough......ya fuckin' teeth
k....somewhat
Money talks, n u obviously broke bitch..time 4 u to check out n jus stop it
U'll neva cash in on what u $pit, even da symbol n ya name can't help u earn profit
k

This wasn't ur best rell, it was straight thoug, u didn't have too many off target punches.......

maybe it's just me but i jus didn't think this was a good battle........

regardless relli takes this with a couple more harder hits

v/ Rell

[Cody Nash]

I can break the best on my first verse. look, I've done it before
just write Welcome on your chest, n' lay down in front of the door
heh.. alright
nowadays, everything I spit leaves bitches scarred n' broken
but I owe you.. cuz I was never hard until your momma started strokin
decent
n' as far as ya girl goes, shit.. I got you watchin her celly tight
I had to laugh... Relli Mak? dog wtf you can't even Relli Write
eh... bit forced.
let's keep it candid. homie my style is known: abuse a rival
and tell me, why would highlight my advantage in your user title?
okay, cool...
even if you landed ya best shot, stupid bitch I wouldn't budge
cuz I'ma grown Grizzly... and looks like you still wish you were a Cub
eh... hardly.
I might switch to the knife. I never jab, homie I swing or I hurl
n' I never snitched in my life, but yes, I did finger your girl
eh...
my lightning-quick punches hit, and like thunder you crash
n' the only way you'd drop hot shit is holding your hand under my ass
i've seen this more than once. i think worded this exact way.
fuckin youngster.. you get ate up.. mostly cuz I'm wiser
you were on a roll at first... as a matter of fact it was keiser
lol, alright.
I got love for RB.. it's RM I could care less about. prick I whore
don't put words in my mouth, and please stop putting dick in yours
okay.


vs


U fuckn old, only was hot during da Ice Ages, so now watch Mak win
Cuz Mike Jones said it best, you were known 2 be nice..way "Back then.."
eh...
Blah..all of RB has tried every diss 2 my name, n u failed da worst..played
My punches'll apply pressure 2 ya dome, I'm positive(+) u'll need First Aid
eh, again...
Ur well known here, goin down in history w/ sum of RB all on ur John, right?
Bitch plz, ur the only Legend that even ordinary ppl consider beyond trite..
okay.
Heard ur a father w/ a little girl, that's nice..but listen up to wuts said, G..
She may not seen it b4 this battle, but afta she'll c dat ur were dead-beat
meh.. not really
This shit is a Thriller to me..dumb fucks like you are what really make dis site
U and ur crew name reminds me of Micheal Jackson, ya'll both fakin bein bright
pretty much all MJ shit is played... this is no different. the wording may be fresh but..
I know I'm not favored, prolly still lose to RB politics..I'll jus try my luck n see
Cuz maybe votes'll come my way if I make a breakthrough......ya fuckin' teeth
no.. played.
Money talks, n u obviously broke bitch..time 4 u to check out n jus stop it
U'll neva cash in on what u $pit, even da symbol n ya name can't help u earn
no.. didn't even rhyme.



meh.. weak battle, $pit came terrible for his standards and relli just came shitty..




vote $pitacular

[Relli_Mak]

Before you say something don't rhyme Cry, make sure u copy n paste every "fuckin" word. Smh @ this cat.

[Big Question]

I can break the best on my first verse. look, I've done it before
just write Welcome on your chest, n' lay down in front of the door
AIIGHT, FRESH
nowadays, everything I spit leaves bitches scarred n' broken
but I owe you.. cuz I was never hard until your momma started strokin
NOT REALLY
n' as far as ya girl goes, shit.. I got you watchin her celly tight
I had to laugh... Relli Mak? dog wtf you can't even Relli Write
HEH, OK
let's keep it candid. homie my style is known: abuse a rival
and tell me, why would highlight my advantage in your user title?
AIIGHT
even if you landed ya best shot, stupid bitch I wouldn't budge
cuz I'ma grown Grizzly... and looks like you still wish you were a Cub
EH
I might switch to the knife. I never jab, homie I swing or I hurl
n' I never snitched in my life, but yes, I did finger your girl
NO
my lightning-quick punches hit, and like thunder you crash
n' the only way you'd drop hot shit is holding your hand under my ass
NOT REALLY
fuckin youngster.. you get ate up.. mostly cuz I'm wiser
you were on a roll at first... as a matter of fact it was keiser
EH
I got love for RB.. it's RM I could care less about. prick I whore
don't put words in my mouth, and please stop putting dick in yours
NO

vs

U fuckn old, only was hot during da Ice Ages, so now watch Mak win
Cuz Mike Jones said it best, you were known 2 be nice..way "Back then.."
EH
Blah..all of RB has tried every diss 2 my name, n u failed da worst..played
My punches'll apply pressure 2 ya dome, I'm positive(+) u'll need First Aid
EH
Ur well known here, goin down in history w/ sum of RB all on ur John, right?
Bitch plz, ur the only Legend that even ordinary ppl consider beyond trite..
EH. TRITE?
Heard ur a father w/ a little girl, that's nice..but listen up to wuts said, G..
She may not seen it b4 this battle, but afta she'll c dat ur were dead-beat
OH OK, DECENT IDEA.DIDNT PULL IT OFF THO
This shit is a Thriller to me..dumb fucks like you are what really make dis site
U and ur crew name reminds me of Micheal Jackson, ya'll both fakin bein bright
NOPE
I know I'm not favored, prolly still lose to RB politics..I'll jus try my luck n see
Cuz maybe votes'll come my way if I make a breakthrough......ya fuckin' teeth
NO
Money talks, n u obviously broke bitch..time 4 u to check out n jus stop it
U'll neva cash in on what u $pit, even da symbol n ya name can't help u earn profit
OMG NO



SPIT CAME WEAK, BUT HE STILL PULLED IT OFF, REALLY RELI YOU NEED TO IMPROVE SOMEWHAT YET MATE, WASNT FEELING NOTHING IN YA VERSE

V/SPIT

[Vaskez]

feedback or vote, take it as ya want

I can break the best on my first verse. look, I've done it before
just write Welcome on your chest, n' lay down in front of the door
^^no diss
nowadays, everything I spit leaves bitches scarred n' broken
but I owe you.. cuz I was never hard until your momma started strokin
^^kinda meeeh
n' as far as ya girl goes, shit.. I got you watchin her celly tight
I had to laugh... Relli Mak? dog wtf you can't even Relli Write
^^aight
let's keep it candid. homie my style is known: abuse a rival
and tell me, why would highlight my advantage in your user title?
^^kinda uninspired, ok
even if you landed ya best shot, stupid bitch I wouldn't budge
cuz I'ma grown Grizzly... and looks like you still wish you were a Cub
^^ok
I might switch to the knife. I never jab, homie I swing or I hurl
n' I never snitched in my life, but yes, I did finger your girl
^^mmm pretty weak
my lightning-quick punches hit, and like thunder you crash
n' the only way you'd drop hot shit is holding your hand under my ass
^^kinda fresh way to flip it, but mad old concept
fuckin youngster.. you get ate up.. mostly cuz I'm wiser
you were on a roll at first... as a matter of fact it was keiser
^^aight
I got love for RB.. it's RM I could care less about. prick I whore
don't put words in my mouth, and please stop putting dick in yours
^^mad played, a lil flip doesn't help

vs.


U fuckn old, only was hot during da Ice Ages, so now watch Mak win
Cuz Mike Jones said it best, you were known 2 be nice..way "Back then.."
^^basic
Blah..all of RB has tried every diss 2 my name, n u failed da worst..played
My punches'll apply pressure 2 ya dome, I'm positive(+) u'll need First Aid
^^terrible attempt at wordplay, weakly worded diss
Ur well known here, goin down in history w/ sum of RB all on ur John, right?
Bitch plz, ur the only Legend that even ordinary ppl consider beyond trite..
^^nah, not true, plus no wit
Heard ur a father w/ a little girl, that's nice..but listen up to wuts said, G..
She may not seen it b4 this battle, but afta she'll c dat ur were dead-beat
^^too basic, originality or wit
This shit is a Thriller to me..dumb fucks like you are what really make dis site
U and ur crew name reminds me of Micheal Jackson, ya'll both fakin bein bright
^^hmm, better
I know I'm not favored, prolly still lose to RB politics..I'll jus try my luck n see
Cuz maybe votes'll come my way if I make a breakthrough......ya fuckin' teeth
^^ok, bit basic
Money talks, n u obviously broke bitch..time 4 u to check out n jus stop it
U'll neva cash in on what u $pit, even da symbol n ya name can't help u earn profit
^^mad mad very amazingly unprecedentedly played, (and badly worded), heh

well Mak had 2 ok lines and Spit had a few too, nothing even above average from either, what the hell? I dont even wanna vote on this, lol, could go either way

[SmokaJoka]

Votes 3-2

-4 for no links

Relli Mak: -2
$pitacular: -1

Closed


$pitacular 1-0
Relli_Mak 0-2