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$pit
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I built my rep on dopeness. look.. it takes more than practice to face me
n' the pictures clear.. you don't need 1080i to see the wackness in HD
Creative as fuck. I'll admit, didn't even catch the "HD" reference the first time through.
you can hate me.. doesn't matter.. you still have to fight for survival
I'd call you a fat fuck, but ya have to get laid to qualify for the title
Kinda funny.
once you read this.. there's no sense in even asking who the beast is
this ain't a rough draft.. it's a fucking hurricane smashing you to pieces
Typical violent punch. Average for you.
the fuck you selling hotdogs for? c'mon man.. I'm already nausious
n' judging by your size, I see your business's been taking heavy losses
Ehh... not feelin this too much.
I'm showin who the boss is.. n' dog the Vendor name is hardly ill
faggot we all know your Deon... any grading scale regarding skill
A basic hit at best.
on the real.. nobody likes you. so homo stop with the fake grinnin
bitch your circle of friends, is just you standing in place spinnin
Humorous. Made me chuckle.
I stay winnin... hoe watch me... kick ya cornhole I'm stomping
I'ma hand you a L so big, you can use it to score goals in hockey
I think part of the concept is SUPER played, but the final result is pretty creative.
of course I'm cocky.. outta ALL the legends homie I'm the don
I'm in my prime... n' you're not even half of a megatron
Ehh... simple.
when it's on, you can't match me.. my fire'll heat you up dude
even if you met my standard... he'd probley just beat you up too
Pssh... funny.
this is a fuckin slam dunk for me. I was itchin for this shit to begin
you're known around the net. cuz that's the closest you ever get to the rim
Idk if it's played, but idc, cuz I haven't seen it. Pretty good.
n' thanks for standin up to me fatty. now the sun'll never blind me
I owe you one.. but that's ok cuz now your record'll remind me
But, I have seen shit like this... Even your wording can't save you on this one
Good shit, definitely not legendary, but definitely above average and most other verses I read so far. A couple lines of pure filler, but the rest was good. Your wording is your strong point for sure.
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HotDogVendorMan
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I'm clownin this guy, cuz every word $pit says is piled wit lies
& I cant 'express how painful this is gonna be ..when I'm cuttin you a THOUSAND times
Didn't see the diss here, maybe I'm missing something
Ur a fuckin cheater yo, so how can this little kid afford to flex?
Honestly $pit, ur the Roger Clemens in the Mitchell Report of text
Nice reference here, but it seems like it's missing something
This faggot was fakin, see all the lines thats average he'd take it
& now your scrawny little legacy a splint & cast right after I break it
Decent, set-up was completely irrelevant to the punch though.
U figured last seasons in the bag, but things did NOT go well
$pits cheesy meltdown cud've easily been added to the menu @ taco bell
Funny.
I'll pop no shells. take a flamethrower n wont stop til the soot tint..
leaves your face full of boils not even a HotDog would cook in
Lol @ "soot tint". Looks funny. Anyways, wasn't feelin this one.
so u should quit. the love of a woman can cure tha slow throb
and speakin of ya lady..u Mr Deeds like my laundry 'n blow job
I think the wording is a bit off near the end, but the wordplay was good.
i told the hoe stop. cuz my fuckin standards couldnt dip
besides...my lines gotta hi quality that couldve landed u a better lookin bitch
Too basic
& Ur kids a future whore, so I bet she'll enjoy takes in the rear
She's watchin Nickelodeon, aspiring to be the next Jamie-Lynn Spears
Eh?
This bitch screamed 'Legendary' REAL LOUD, like I should fear clowns
Ur a fuckin shadow of ur former self ..& even THAT's running scared now
Not bad, but not impressive either.
Pussy ur small as a grain, n U thought u were as hard as they came
Pftft with ur new level of respect, a visit would require a harness & crane
Seen something similar to this, decent punch though.
Coz all ur little flips flopped, and ur little medley wasnt felt kid
call it wreckless abandonment..how u gave up ur style for everyone elses
Made me think for a second, but I got it. Pretty good hit.
This is the first verse I've seen from you, and I can tell you know what you're doing. Your wording is pretty good, but some of the actual concepts were just lacking. Basically, there was a lot of filler, but your lines that stood out were nice.
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I built my rep on dopeness. look.. it takes more than practice to face me
n' the pictures clear.. you don't need 1080i to see the wackness in HD
on the real.. nobody likes you. so homo stop with the fake grinnin
bitch your circle of friends, is just you standing in place spinnin
when it's on, you can't match me.. my fire'll heat you up dude
even if you met my standard... he'd probley just beat you up too
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U figured last seasons in the bag, but things did NOT go well
$pits cheesy meltdown cud've easily been added to the menu @ taco bell
Coz all ur little flips flopped, and ur little medley wasnt felt kid
call it wreckless abandonment..how u gave up ur style for everyone elses
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VOTE: $PIT
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