I feel like chokin' a bitch....... real talk!!!!!!

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lmfao

[Dekken]

lol, u jus gotta write more and focus a lil more too, otherwise it wasent bad.....

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[Tejas.]

Its supposed to be funny, not emotional or serious. As far as a few bars here and there being stretched or not flowing right, I agree it wasn't my best... but if you were able to notice that your looking too deep into the rhyme. I didn't put much thought into the rhyme scheme. Its supposed to be funny and pretty simple and straight to the point.

why is choking a 'bitch' funny?

[®andom]

pwnd.