A Little Literal Value
[Notice the choice of clichés used... it's a tie into the literal approach]
[Hint: Look for metaphors as well... Yes I do talk about my ass... Do you see it?]
My shit's banana's, a little nuts.. makes for me to be a bitter fuck
Why ask for my two cents, dear? When your bound to get a buck
You kinda suck & my prowess doesn't leave you to twice guess..
That my wit comes about a dime a dozen.. so by now it's priceless
Yet, I stress, that I'm right on the money, a longtime spittin icon..
I'm not bitchin Exxon, bout my black ass or the dark gold I'm sittin on
I'm wishin God, for a cheap pilot so I can avoid these geek's riot
Are they bar none the greatest? Only if it started payin to keep quiet
So shut up, just try it but if it's a race for debit, your comin last, bet it
Cause if I had a nickel, I'd be taking your cash & skippin over credit
I said it.. waitin on the economy to croak.. get as lively as a fat joke
Then I can finally invest in clichés.. to leave half of you flat broke
Call me, Warren Buffet, Jr.
Yeah, I know it's only 10 lines..
But
Clichés get tedious to find after a while
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