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    Put together for a mixtape

    Okay so yeah really bored decided to retaliate to a song put out on me lemme know if i should hop in the booth

    the thots i have are so vivid/
    cuz its so elusive and translucent/
    i dont use it for the money/
    i do it for the music the infusion it gives me/
    is so electrifying its defying the laws of physics/
    and basic rhythum,
    that we give em/
    the contraband and contreversy of my magnism/
    so many fans so many enemies its like a prison/
    and im livin in a hell mournin for the dead/
    while im mournin for the livin/
    cuz we live in a place thats-so-unforgivin/
    wish you woulda listened to me then/
    cuz then we wouldn't be in this position/
    mattskimatik on a mission/
    to be my career ending competion/
    but he places no competion/
    cuz i sqwash your oposition/
    tho i do like fuckin wit your optimism.

    now you gotta listen, so you can understand/
    that i really didn't want this/
    i only wish we coulda got along/
    but you had gone along and made a diss/
    so i had to wait for you to finish this/
    and eventually make you my bitch/
    ain't that the way it works mista skimatik/
    now i got him frantic, yeah he's gonna panic/
    with all this shit goin on-how can he manage/
    im the dealer so imma treat you like an addict/
    skimatik cant hack it in this rap shit/
    so he turns to drugs for his lost attachment/
    once again hes puffin like an asthmatic/
    twitchin and glitchin stompin like a mad rabbit/
    im goin rabid spittin rapid cause ive had it/
    now do the math kid,
    you knew that this was bound to happen/

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    Re: Put together for a mixtape

    ur flow wuz a lil hard 2 follow at times but all in all okay...

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    Re: Put together for a mixtape

    ehh, it wasn't too good homie, it started off ok and ended decently but everything in between was filler. and the lines seemed short and uneven, do you know how to count bars? but we all have to start somewhere just keep writing and elevating, and nah I wouldnt take this to the booth, keep at it though.

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    Re: Put together for a mixtape

    ^^count bars as in count syllables?


    flow was on and off, topic was eh, and it just seemed too basic...need more complexity, like metas and multis...but keep at it homie...fuck what they say, record that shit..lol...

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    Re: Put together for a mixtape

    heres my 5 to 7


    get the chopper out and ill split you in 8 ways
    and while we on the subject ask me how i split 8k
    6 for me 2 for you and that is the only way
    paper by the pound, bars by the verse
    disrespect too much and you'll wind up in a hearse




    this is my first day on this site... whoops
    and i mean no disrespect at all im just going what i thought sounded good at the time
    the hook is cooked

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    Re: Put together for a mixtape

    Your flow was kindaa hard to Take in cuz your rhyme structure was a bit off
    keeep workin on ya flowww

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