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the fuck is you
rappers say fuck the police, that's why the streets are brittle
you'll never see a warden in RB, & I don't mean a chief official
girls don't ever wanna see him, this faggot's pretty dense
they only wanna cam rondizz when they're listenin to 50 Cent
you think your making progress cuz you mistake the messages
when the crowds screamin MORE RON!!!
..they're just describing your intelligence
your career's looking good? hell no..you'll never score riches
if you're a model for greatness it must be for before pictures
you're not a religeous person, not now & not in the past tense
if you ever say Mormon,
you're just describing your sexual preference in a Jamaican accent
2009 & a new seasons beginning, and we're all glad it's up
but giving Ron an increased line limit!?..
as if waste management in '08 wasn't bad enough!
you act like a baller, talking slang like you're something now
bitch please when you say yoyo,
..you're just referin to your lifes ups and downs
I'll snuff this clown, peep your FL battles falling is rough
ya you did your best,
but ya momma lied.. that isn't always enough
Last edited by wrath of dios; February 4th, 2009 at 06:07 PM
check yo i looked on the cutsheet n didnt think it said my name and i havnt ben on but ill get my verse up
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The knicks suck i got a pic of wen garnet dunked on james
bums aint talking bout ur money when they say “chump change”
I herd u were rentin rooms I was scopin n hopein on it
But I checked wen I got the loot….looks like the roaches got it
Ur rap talent is like car part thief, ill explain a little better
U blow like an exhaust pipe n ur career “took a header “
God works in mysterious ways ya I kno ur a hype believer
In 5 minutes a man made u from a tight end to a wide receiver
U say ur a big gangsta ya u roll wit the richest clicks
kid took masonary in highschool and still couldn’t flip a brick
real men look to double there funds collect it and invest
dios buys porn n naps between wacks he calls it his inter-rest
new york verse the bean im bout to rattle this foes core
but beatin u aint history unlike the champ series in 04
ur a herb everyone in lethal lyricist knows this kids a disgrace
ill puff a “big l” n leve his “bloodshed” while he “diggin in the crates”
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Dios
rappers say fuck the police, that's why the streets are brittle
you'll never see a warden in RB, & I don't mean a chief official
Wordplay didn't work, n if you DID make it work, it's played anyway..
girls don't ever wanna see him, this faggot's pretty dense
they only wanna cam rondizz when they're listenin to 50 Cent
Kind of forced, but kind of cool.. it'd work better in audio, but this was still decent..
you think your making progress cuz you mistake the messages
when the crowds screamin MORE RON!!!
..they're just describing your intelligence
LMAO, this was nice.. nice funny nameplay..
your career's looking good? hell no..you'll never score riches
if you're a model for greatness it must be for before pictures
Meh..
you're not a religeous person, not now & not in the past tense
if you ever say Mormon,
you're just describing your sexual preference in a Jamaican accent
Blah, iffy..
2009 & a new seasons beginning, and we're all glad it's up
but giving Ron an increased line limit!?..
as if waste management in '08 wasn't bad enough!
LOL, pretty good, pretty good, but you shoulda found a way to not have stretched it so much..
you act like a baller, talking slang like you're something now
bitch please when you say yoyo,
..you're just referin to your lifes ups and downs
Nah..
I'll snuff this clown, peep your FL battles falling is rough
ya you did your best,
but ya momma lied.. that isn't always enough
Decent, not for a finisher tho.. overall this wasn't a very good verse.. I understand you slacked tho, but you really shouldn't in a league cuz you never know.. all in all you had one GOOD bar n a couple decent ones..
Rondizz
The knicks suck i got a pic of wen garnet dunked on james
bums aint talking bout ur money when they say “chump change”
Nah..
I herd u were rentin rooms I was scopin n hopein on it
But I checked wen I got the loot….looks like the roaches got it
Decent, but the 1st line wasn't.. work on setups..
Ur rap talent is like car part thief, ill explain a little better
U blow like an exhaust pipe n ur career “took a header “
Nah.. n "blow like an exhaust pipe"?? come on dude, this is LLL..
God works in mysterious ways ya I kno ur a hype believer
In 5 minutes a man made u from a tight end to a wide receiver
Decent concept, but not executed right.. seems forced..
U say ur a big gangsta ya u roll wit the richest clicks
kid took masonary in highschool and still couldn’t flip a brick
Played concept..
real men look to double there funds collect it and invest
dios buys porn n naps between wacks he calls it his inter-rest
Pfft, nah dude, this is a forced attempt at wordplay..
new york verse the bean im bout to rattle this foes core
but beatin u aint history unlike the champ series in 04
No, good try..
ur a herb everyone in lethal lyricist knows this kids a disgrace
ill puff a “big l” n leve his “bloodshed” while he “diggin in the crates”
No, n lose the quotations.. overall this was a poor showing in my opinion, sorry.. but hey, atleast you can only improve right??
Punches: Rios
Wordplay: Rios
Personals: Rios
Structure: Rondizz
Creativity: Rios
Consistency: Rios
Flow & Multies: Tieish
\\//ote: Rios De Hip Hop.. this battle was garbage for LLL tho....
Oh wow, come on ya'll this is LLL...
I refuse to give a breakdown on this battle as it wouldn't help either o you understand exactly whats wrong-- it wasn't horrible, but neither verse would even be THAT great in FL is all that needs to be said..
Best Lines>>>>
you think your making progress cuz you mistake the messages
when the crowds screamin MORE RON!!!
..they're just describing your intelligence
^^okay, good one..
you act like a baller, talking slang like you're something now
bitch please when you say yoyo,
..you're just referin to your lifes ups and downs
^^poorly set up but the yoyo thing was okay.
V.s.
U say ur a big gangsta ya u roll wit the richest clicks
kid took masonary in highschool and still couldn’t flip a brick
^^your best execution imo but not nearly enough for LLL
So yeah, step it up ya'll or the winner will most likely be knocked out next week, but I gotta V/ Dios for better concepts
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dios -
rappers say fuck the police, that's why the streets are brittle
you'll never see a warden in RB, & I don't mean a chief official
-meh
girls don't ever wanna see him, this faggot's pretty dense
they only wanna cam rondizz when they're listenin to 50 Cent
-nahh
you think your making progress cuz you mistake the messages
when the crowds screamin MORE RON!!!
..they're just describing your intelligence
-okay nice nameplay
your career's looking good? hell no..you'll never score riches
if you're a model for greatness it must be for before pictures
-ehh
you're not a religeous person, not now & not in the past tense
if you ever say Mormon,
you're just describing your sexual preference in a Jamaican accent
-okay
2009 & a new seasons beginning, and we're all glad it's up
but giving Ron an increased line limit!?..
as if waste management in '08 wasn't bad enough!
-haha nice
you act like a baller, talking slang like you're something now
bitch please when you say yoyo,
..you're just referin to your lifes ups and downs
-naah, played.
I'll snuff this clown, peep your FL battles falling is rough
ya you did your best,
but ya momma lied.. that isn't always enough
-ehh
Ron -
The knicks suck i got a pic of wen garnet dunked on james
bums aint talking bout ur money when they say “chump change”
-work on wording
I herd u were rentin rooms I was scopin n hopein on it
But I checked wen I got the loot….looks like the roaches got it
-eh
Ur rap talent is like car part thief, ill explain a little better
U blow like an exhaust pipe n ur career “took a header “
-played
God works in mysterious ways ya I kno ur a hype believer
In 5 minutes a man made u from a tight end to a wide receiver
-could have been dope. work on better wording an set ups.
U say ur a big gangsta ya u roll wit the richest clicks
kid took masonary in highschool and still couldn’t flip a brick
-played.
real men look to double there funds collect it and invest
dios buys porn n naps between wacks he calls it his inter-rest
-naah
new york verse the bean im bout to rattle this foes core
but beatin u aint history unlike the champ series in 04
-ehh
ur a herb everyone in lethal lyricist knows this kids a disgrace
ill puff a “big l” n leve his “bloodshed” while he “diggin in the crates”
-nah
Overall - Ron, you either played or your bars had potential but you didnt execute them well. Dios, your verse wasn’t anything to marvel about but the 2 good bars you droped were enough to pull this one out.
Vote - Dios
you're not a religeous person, not now & not in the past tense
if you ever say Mormon,
you're just describing your sexual preference in a Jamaican accent
you think your making progress cuz you mistake the messages
when the crowds screamin MORE RON!!!
..they're just describing your intelligence
vs
God works in mysterious ways ya I kno ur a hype believer
In 5 minutes a man made u from a tight end to a wide receiver
yea, the quotes might not show it, but this was pretty onesided. dios was pretty consistent and his personals were dope and rondizz just seems like he needs a lil more elevation in his wording and his concepts before he should be in LLL. keep at it tho bro...
vote - dios
you think your making progress cuz you mistake the messages
when the crowds screamin MORE RON!!!
..they're just describing your intelligence
vs
nothing
weak battle....
v/dios
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rappers say fuck the police, that's why the streets are brittle
you'll never see a warden in RB, & I don't mean a chief official
don't really see where you were going with this bruh...
girls don't ever wanna see him, this faggot's pretty dense
they only wanna cam rondizz when they're listenin to 50 Cent
ok.
you think your making progress cuz you mistake the messages
when the crowds screamin MORE RON!!!
..they're just describing your intelligence
lmfao... dope
your career's looking good? hell no..you'll never score riches
if you're a model for greatness it must be for before pictures
aiight.
you're not a religeous person, not now & not in the past tense
if you ever say Mormon,
you're just describing your sexual preference in a Jamaican accent
lol...
2009 & a new seasons beginning, and we're all glad it's up
but giving Ron an increased line limit!?..
as if waste management in '08 wasn't bad enough!
aiight, heh...
you act like a baller, talking slang like you're something now
bitch please when you say yoyo,
..you're just referin to your lifes ups and downs
aiight, coo.
I'll snuff this clown, peep your FL battles falling is rough
ya you did your best,
but ya momma lied.. that isn't always enough
kay...
vs
The knicks suck i got a pic of wen garnet dunked on james
bums aint talking bout ur money when they say “chump change”
eh...
I herd u were rentin rooms I was scopin n hopein on it
But I checked wen I got the loot….looks like the roaches got it
eh...
Ur rap talent is like car part thief, ill explain a little better
U blow like an exhaust pipe n ur career “took a header “
eh, aiight...
God works in mysterious ways ya I kno ur a hype believer
In 5 minutes a man made u from a tight end to a wide receiver
eh..
U say ur a big gangsta ya u roll wit the richest clicks
kid took masonary in highschool and still couldn’t flip a brick
MEH...
real men look to double there funds collect it and invest
dios buys porn n naps between wacks he calls it his inter-rest
eh...
new york verse the bean im bout to rattle this foes core
but beatin u aint history unlike the champ series in 04
ok...
ur a herb everyone in lethal lyricist knows this kids a disgrace
ill puff a “big l” n leve his “bloodshed” while he “diggin in the crates”
nah...
weeaak battle...
vote Dio
rappers say fuck the police, that's why the streets are brittle
you'll never see a warden in RB, & I don't mean a chief official
nah holmez
girls don't ever wanna see him, this faggot's pretty dense
they only wanna cam rondizz when they're listenin to 50 Cent
coulda been worded better
you think your making progress cuz you mistake the messages
when the crowds screamin MORE RON!!!
..they're just describing your intelligence
nameplay was sick
your career's looking good? hell no..you'll never score riches
if you're a model for greatness it must be for before pictures
lol. i like that for some reason
you're not a religeous person, not now & not in the past tense
if you ever say Mormon,
you're just describing your sexual preference in a Jamaican accent
decent
2009 & a new seasons beginning, and we're all glad it's up
but giving Ron an increased line limit!?..
as if waste management in '08 wasn't bad enough!
meh
you act like a baller, talking slang like you're something now
bitch please when you say yoyo,
..you're just referin to your lifes ups and downs
nah
I'll snuff this clown, peep your FL battles falling is rough
ya you did your best,
but ya momma lied.. that isn't always enough
not feelin this for a closer
Vs.
The knicks suck i got a pic of wen garnet dunked on james
bums aint talking bout ur money when they say “chump change”
weak
I herd u were rentin rooms I was scopin n hopein on it
But I checked wen I got the loot….looks like the roaches got it
..don't kno...if u werded this better it woulda been better
Ur rap talent is like car part thief, ill explain a little better
U blow like an exhaust pipe n ur career “took a header “
nah
God works in mysterious ways ya I kno ur a hype believer
In 5 minutes a man made u from a tight end to a wide receiver
kinda played but decent
U say ur a big gangsta ya u roll wit the richest clicks
kid took masonary in highschool and still couldn’t flip a brick
very played
real men look to double there funds collect it and invest
dios buys porn n naps between wacks he calls it his inter-rest
not feelin it
new york verse the bean im bout to rattle this foes core
but beatin u aint history unlike the champ series in 04
don't get it
ur a herb everyone in lethal lyricist knows this kids a disgrace
ill puff a “big l” n leve his “bloodshed” while he “diggin in the crates”
nah
whoever wins this beter elevate if ur gonna win ya next battle. both verses were weak but Dios got this slightly. simply just made more sense..
Vote- Dios
Dios wins with plenty of votes
Dios 1-0
Rondizz 0-1
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