Thx for reading guys. First off im not a battler , i rap about political issues , life , the government, world peace , things like that. And i need some help , sometimes i get stuck when writing....this is what i have so far
When I try harder
My goals just move farther and farther away
I still reach for'em..
untill my grave imma keep goin
knowin my place within this rat race
and its wit god homie
im now fully conscious
you cannot control me
im tired of the nonsense
your governemnt is phony
and im payin taxes?
i think you owe me..
and explanation why Americas Failing us
Thats what i have so far....how do guys feel about my lyrics. Are the clear, understandble, simple enough or maybe too simple? lemme know plz any critique is greatly appreciated. Ty