Maid Under Satans Law -Finally Finished The Verse

[sILLable]

dope shit....loved your imagery for sure...your rhyme scheme is tight.stretched a little but nothing bad..it was short is really the only critique i have...great concept..your vocab is ill,your metaphors were tight and your multis (which are my personal favorite) were on point.solid read.you should drop in OM more often for real..hit up my piece titled Holiday cheer when you get a chance..links in my sig..thnks girl..~1~

[Bruklor]

Thank you for editing it LJ, it made this a lot easier to read, and ended up giving it more flow...