Week 7: alyse vs Sandman

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

LLL SEASON 13

Only check ins and verses are to be posted in your battle, do not post anything else.

verses due thursday 11:59 est

Regular Season - Semi Finals:
Minimum Lines = 10 Lines
Maximum Lines = 20 Lines

[Alyse Miller]

...12

[Alyse Miller]

its obvious you get beat every trip ya skills fuckin weak..
ur straight ass so ill go out on a limb,Which gets handed to you every week
think ur a lady killer? dog ya flow game lacks spit...
skills dont fall off trees, just your family that comes from it
cant bag hoes an you suck couldn capture a W wit a flick...
sand bitch? <-- as close to him ever bein caught next to a chick
the Mag was true, plus i dont even think u'll even show...
ill tear open ware he think talent comes from, wit my foot out his ass below
fuckin cunt mouth, ur the biggest milf slut flirt...
he dont deserve a caring heart, he rather have it sown on a shirt
ur battler? nah ya concepts too old u'll be winded & fatigued
his style black & blue, which he's left after every week in this league

[.Relentless.]

ill fuck you with your own verse, body your ass like a vet
Alyse metts with her legs up, danm that pussy is streatched
you know you want some sand in it, but this dick youll never have
you have a better chance at the beach getting your lips pinched by some crabs
fucking slut, yeah i heard about you, youll fuck any emcee that askes
trailer trash hoe, yeah alyse has been around these forums and back
and its a fact, I uesto think you was cool untill you thought i wouldnt show,
ill miss a battle as soon as you quit fucking every guy, and start keep your legs closed
forget it, its not going to happen, lets be honast.. you can call this a truth circle
Tell everyone how bad you suck at rap that you turn the fucking words purple
sucking the life you of that verse, like yours depended on it,this bitch retarted?
Youll never be one of the guys Alyse, so quit shopping in the mens department

[Alyse Miller]

Sorry GOW it was days so i thought ill up this since it was at the way bottom.

[bags...]

No major quotables here for me I guess I could scrounge one up for each but I'm not gonna... both need to focus on creativity and making ur punches connect. Sandman u were slightly better then last week but still need alot of work. Like I get she's a chick so sure the slut angle is an obvious go to but if ur gonna do it make it funny saying close ur legs etc is expected that's why u gotta put a fresh flip on it.alyse I can tell u have the general idea and groundwork of battling understood but now u need to work on deeper concepts and more complex wordplay

V alyse

[Mr. Roberts]

Imo sandman had a better verse because there was more punches. but his wording needs help, major help. most of alyse verse just wasnt hittin at all, her punches wernt verry personal and didnt really connect, it was more like she was just throwing shit out there. i think that sandman had better direct punches except for the last bar with the typos.... check your shit before you post... even tho sandman has bad wordplay and he used that played streached concept i think that he just edged this one with more punches...


V sand

[JDoe]

its obvious you get beat every trip ya skills fuckin weak..
ur straight ass so ill go out on a limb,Which gets handed to you every week
ha ok
think ur a lady killer? dog ya flow game lacks spit...
skills dont fall off trees, just your family that comes from it
smooth
cant bag hoes an you suck couldn capture a W wit a flick...
sand bitch? <-- as close to him ever bein caught next to a chick
meh
the Mag was true, plus i dont even think u'll even show...
ill tear open ware he think talent comes from, wit my foot out his ass below
fuckin cunt mouth, ur the biggest milf slut flirt...
he dont deserve a caring heart, he rather have it sown on a shirt
ur battler? nah ya concepts too old u'll be winded & fatigued
his style black & blue, which he's left after every week in this league
*bland concept ok punches

vs.

ill fuck you with your own verse, body your ass like a vet
Alyse metts with her legs up, danm that pussy is streatched
ok
you know you want some sand in it, but this dick youll never have
you have a better chance at the beach getting your lips pinched by some crabs
*aah alrite, reference is semi
fucking slut, yeah i heard about you, youll fuck any emcee that askes
trailer trash hoe, yeah alyse has been around these forums and back
..dnt rhyme at all
and its a fact, I uesto think you was cool untill you thought i wouldnt show,
ill miss a battle as soon as you quit fucking every guy, and start keep your legs closed
...
forget it, its not going to happen, lets be honast.. you can call this a truth circle
Tell everyone how bad you suck at rap that you turn the fucking words purple
sucking the life you of that verse, like yours depended on it,this bitch retarted?
Youll never be one of the guys Alyse, so quit shopping in the mens department
okay--

*This battle wasnt all that good...but From the stand point of me laughing i will go with Alyse...her concepts were bland but his were none existent almost...I saw the punch before you ended

V/Alyse

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

need more votes people

[Prince S.Tana]

cant bag hoes an you suck couldn capture a W wit a flick...
sand bitch? <-- as close to him ever bein caught next to a chick
the Mag was true, plus i dont even think u'll even show...
ill tear open ware he think talent comes from, wit my foot out his ass below

vs.

you know you want some sand in it, but this dick youll never have
you have a better chance at the beach getting your lips pinched by some crabs


sandman you opened decent but it sunk towards the end. Alyse you were dipped in out good lines here in there, but you oveall got the in. vote: Alyse