@Killer Stylez
10 due friday
Lenny
Killer Stylez
@Killer Stylez
10 due friday
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Ill kick it first, I aint scared, but fuck why you need til Friday? Gotta write on bar a day?
yo.... LETS GO!
So here we go, the bell rings, its round one, this clowns done/
Your bars don’t hit, your spit is shit, that’s why you got brown gums/
I down bums and drop lames like a crippling disease/
Aim the strap, splatter your back, I squeeze my trigger with ease/
Dropped you to your knees, now you begging for your life/
Fuck, I’m ruthless, kill you in front of your kids and your wife/
This a gun fight, why’d you bring a knife? Are you that dumb then?/
I knew you name was Lenny, but didnt know you was the retard from “Of Mice and Men”/
Fuck your wack raps, I’m slicin’ them, and could win the battle lyin down/
You done fucked around, and got poisoned, like you ate the food in China Town!
If y’all could vote on a few battles that would be great
Thanks
-Staff
I already have
No Show?
Vs is due today @Lenox
I guess he gets another duck
@Killer Stylez
This a gun fight, why’d you bring a knife? Are you that dumb then?/
I knew you name was Lenny, but didnt know you was the retard from “Of Mice and Men”/
Fuck your wack raps, I’m slicin’ them, and could win the battle lyin down/
You done fucked around, and got poisoned, like you ate the food in China Town!
these two bars here were cool this what a text battle bar should formulate as. You had the Lenny Nameplay reference which had humor. The Chinatown metaphore was cool. Rest of the verse came off kinda basic and original reminded me of a live battle rap with just original 90s type of bars basic rhyme schemes no creativity. Have all your bars in text battling look like these two and you will be a problem.
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