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Phalanx
Cody Nash
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Yo, there's no controversy in deadin' Phal...be it an overdose or a little child
he's the only man with a Michael Jackson nose who also LOOKS like a fuckin' pedophile
like Mike's kid did his dad, I'll bury The Golden One...this hobo's bridgeworthy, or scarier
man I can't decide if I'll give him a blanket, or do him like Blanket over the barrier
postin' more than one pic is work for him, & my hands won't wait til his fists drop
I think it's funny he predicted the outcome by postin' him sleepin' from on his job
even from there he can't down me, with raps as shit as them port-a-pottys
...and after I throw him over that edge, I see a few places I'll store the body
red collar worker? let's profile him...could prolly tell you what flag he's flyin'
put that building to his 6 like it's January n' he just wore horns to the capitol riots
I thought "construction worker" too ya'll, but I'm in healthcare - he's NOT clever
they put those reflector jackets on his type so the fireman catch his fall better
Originally Posted by Cody Nash
Never heard of you...
but I saw the accomps..and had to see what this man's bout
So I checked yo background...and like this pic..not much that stands out
So the idea of a comeback? Is something you should stop
As far as yo wrist?
Grab a cleaver, give it a good chop..It leaking is something we wood watch.
And I hope your lenses get coated in the blood from that open vein
So I can start swinging at that stained glass like the hunchback of notre dame
Speaking of quasimodo..the resemblance is awfully close bro..its uncanny as fuck
Would slice ya throat but w/ shoulders up to his ears..I'd need a chainsaw to manage the cut
Not sure about the neckbeard...maybe Disney is this coward's theme..
But it kind of looks like yo ear hair is Rapunzel reenacting the tower scene
Ill let the bullets ricochet in his rib cage Im harming this kid..
I might get the fucking chair after I fucking put this arm to his rib
Last edited by Phalanx; October 30th, 2021 at 11:55 AM Reason: Fixing typo w/ permission.
Alright
Good battle guys but I gotta go wit Phalanx here. Nash I liked the Pedophile line and the Store your Body one. But Phalanx you had the wood watch, the stain glass, and the Chain saw one so MVGT Phalanx in a close one.
Yo, there's no controversy in deadin' Phal...be it an overdose or a little child
he's the only man with a Michael Jackson nose who also LOOKS like a fuckin' pedophile
even from there he can't down me, with raps as shit as them port-a-pottys
...and after I throw him over that edge, I see a few places I'll store the body
vs
but I saw the accomps..and had to see what this man's bout
So I checked yo background...and like this pic..not much that stands out
agreed his pic didnt stand out, but neither did you verse. unfortunately u didnt havemuch to work with. i got cody nash taking this in a close one. didnt feel either battler was creative with the material provided in the pics
v/ cody nash
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Yo, there's no controversy in deadin' Phal...be it an overdose or a little child
he's the only man with a Michael Jackson nose who also LOOKS like a fuckin' pedophile
light jokes
like Mike's kid did his dad, I'll bury The Golden One...this hobo's bridgeworthy, or scarier
man I can't decide if I'll give him a blanket, or do him like Blanket over the barrier
weak punch. more like a statement.
postin' more than one pic is work for him, & my hands won't wait til his fists drop
I think it's funny he predicted the outcome by postin' him sleepin' from on his job
naw no punch here
even from there he can't down me, with raps as shit as them port-a-pottys
...and after I throw him over that edge, I see a few places I'll store the body
lol ok pretty weak but u used the pic here. fake decent.
red collar worker? let's profile him...could prolly tell you what flag he's flyin'
put that building to his 6 like it's January n' he just wore horns to the capitol riots
naw this was all over the place. could of been fire.
I thought "construction worker" too ya'll, but I'm in healthcare - he's NOT clever
they put those reflector jackets on his type so the fireman catch his fall better
naw lol this was didnt hit
vs
Never heard of you...
but I saw the accomps..and had to see what this man's bout
So I checked yo background...and like this pic..not much that stands out
aight lite jab
So the idea of a comeback? Is something you should stop
As far as yo wrist?
Grab a cleaver, give it a good chop..It leaking is something we wood watch.
naw all over the place
And I hope your lenses get coated in the blood from that open vein
So I can start swinging at that stained glass like the hunchback of notre dame
aight another jab
Speaking of quasimodo..the resemblance is awfully close bro..its uncanny as fuck
Would slice ya throat but w/ shoulders up to his ears..I'd need a chainsaw to manage the cut
ehh close land but could of landed hard
Not sure about the neckbeard...maybe Disney is this coward's theme..
But it kind of looks like yo ear hair is Rapunzel reenacting the tower scene
lol
Ill let the bullets ricochet in his rib cage Im harming this kid..
I might get the fucking chair after I fucking put this arm to his rib
naw weak
No real punches here. lacked creativity form both sides. some decent concepts brewing but overall lite battle. GOing to vote for the one who used the pic most and had the LOTB.
v. phalanx
Cody Nash:
very cartoonish and comical, it was what i like about rap you didnt take it serious and just had fun.. the punches werent horrible the were a bit under par for whats out there but some were def landing like the fact you cant decide if he is even a looser or just a LOOSER either way that type of ish is hot.. structure was loosley fitted and the relation to the pic was off the chain.. lots of personals which i loved.. gl
Phalanx:
dude this was a killer structure flow vocab and general punches you have perfected but you was lacking any personals so its like yeh you hitting the topic as far as the picture goes but not really hitting the person.. i still found to be very funny and colourful but in the end the personals are all that let you down.. cool piece all and all though..
dope:
So I can start swinging at that stained glass like the hunchback of notre dame
dope to hehe:
But it kind of looks like yo ear hair is Rapunzel reenacting the tower scene
vote = cody nash
i think if this was just two stories you come across in the streets i would be over p's like damn and read again but the fact its a text battle you gotta have certain elements and codys had what p's lacked gl guys
Yo, there's no controversy in deadin' Phal...be it an overdose or a little child
he's the only man with a Michael Jackson nose who also LOOKS like a fuckin' pedophile
ehhh, his nose does look like MJ’s but itms worded poorly
like Mike's kid did his dad, I'll bury The Golden One...this hobo's bridgeworthy, or scarier
man I can't decide if I'll give him a blanket, or do him like Blanket over the barrier
again, weird wording but decent
postin' more than one pic is work for him, & my hands won't wait til his fists drop
I think it's funny he predicted the outcome by postin' him sleepin' from on his job
nahhhh
even from there he can't down me, with raps as shit as them port-a-pottys
...and after I throw him over that edge, I see a few places I'll store the body
not great, but it’s relevant to the pic and flows solid
red collar worker? let's profile him...could prolly tell you what flag he's flyin'
put that building to his 6 like it's January n' he just wore horns to the capitol riots
thassa reach
I thought "construction worker" too ya'll, but I'm in healthcare - he's NOT clever
they put those reflector jackets on his type so the fireman catch his fall better
ehhh, kinda corny
VS
Never heard of you...
but I saw the accomps..and had to see what this man's bout
So I checked yo background...and like this pic..not much that stands out
hella basic but flows well
So the idea of a comeback? Is something you should stop
As far as yo wrist?
Grab a cleaver, give it a good chop..It leaking is something we wood watch.
not a punchline
And I hope your lenses get coated in the blood from that open vein
So I can start swinging at that stained glass like the hunchback of notre dame
best line of the battle
Speaking of quasimodo..the resemblance is awfully close bro..its uncanny as fuck
Would slice ya throat but w/ shoulders up to his ears..I'd need a chainsaw to manage the cut
nahhh
Not sure about the neckbeard...maybe Disney is this coward's theme..
But it kind of looks like yo ear hair is Rapunzel reenacting the tower scene
lol goofy but funny
Ill let the bullets ricochet in his rib cage Im harming this kid..
I might get the fucking chair after I fucking put this arm to his rib
not great but you did enough to get the w
Phalanx wins for better flow, punches, and humor. Cody Nash was straight but needs to work on his wording and concepts.
Vote- Phalanx
3-2 Phal
Even battle to me
Both had great flows & Punchlines
I like Cody vs more
Vote-Cody
Cody- opener was blah
blanket line was decent but could of been harder
Store the body line was ur best
Last two bars were blah
Pham- opener was light
Wood watch was ok, cud of hit harder
The rest was alright, I feel like u cud of came harder even tho there isn’t a lot in pic..
vote phal.. just connected lol better for me .. smoother light jabs
postin' more than one pic is work for him, & my hands won't wait til his fists drop
I think it's funny he predicted the outcome by postin' him sleepin' from on his job
Vs
Not sure about the neckbeard...maybe Disney is this coward's theme..
But it kind of looks like yo ear hair is Rapunzel reenacting the tower scene
My expectations were slightly higher from the battle given the names involved. Both verses flowed well and full of decent jabs and good concepts but not many real haymakers. Overall this battle is pretty tight but I think phalanx had one less bad that missed for me.
V/phal
@Cody Nash 13 Months Later...
Phalanx wins 5-3.
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