WEEK 05 CHAMP MATCH ART (5-0) VS MIRACLE (4-1) (Art Wins)

[Art.]

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Regular Battle
Verses due NO DUE DATES*
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES*

Must check-in 24/48 hours for NO DUE DATES to take effect
*be reasonable

10-lines MAX Regular Battle
16-lines MAX Contendership and Championship Battle


You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.

@Art.
@miracle

[miracle]

14?

[Art.]

40!… 14 lol g/l

[miracle]

When battling losers I don’t try hard, treat them like light spars
It’s to give the skill laissez-faire shot, while he takes that approach writing bars
My hits will crumble this bitch, someone call for a nurse
Cuz when I start swinging I’m dropping him over n over again like a zunto verse
I don’t mean to gloat, but one punch will collapse ya throat
He won’t be able to handle disabuse, & need to do that to get a vote
I’m sick when I speak. with punches that are to fast geek
If I drop some wack shit ill get banned for biting you last week
Don’t get caught without that chrome boy, cuz I’ll shoot up ya block
Art better raise that armories gonna die, from every gun I got in stock
This poor bastard will get hacked to pieces.. fuck using the shotty
u think It's hard making ends meet, wait til police find your body
I will slump this chump.. till ya brains start spewing all day
you’ll be lay doubt missing, voters will think I used a colostomy wordplay
I’ll drown this bitch n ditch the corpse.. w/ stab wounds to the liver
He’ll bleed out in Awatere grave, floating dead in that river

[Art.]

So Dilly took the fall for this stupid guy, couldnt handle bars are u surprised?
u should've rotted inside instead of Dave Mira, I just hope u die from suicide
& dude between u & me? ya wifes a freak who likes to screw the team
I'm bangin her on the desktop, while ur jerkin it at ya computer screen
u had covid, we get it, GOOD! cryin everyday about work like a bitch would
I was wishing u wouldnt ventilator, & hoped you'd suffocate before ya could
If were keeping score I'm a little confused, ur mad no one listens to to you
See i always thought u were straight 5, til i saw u bitch about winning by 2
This is a body, black bagged, get mopped. ur garbage & wont ever get props
your verses are such trash, i bet you zunto recycles them in his next drops
U tried modding front lines to gain respect, but the penalties 4 losin today is death
thought you'd be able to fix the league NFL, but your worse than a replacement reff
u insisted we tag team! why bruh? then i realized where this faggots mind was
because i never pegged you as a bitch, but its clear every night your wife does
u run from threats & compositions, but dog, ducking vets is not the mission
Its why u love to Pic battles, the image shows ur just hidin from competition

Good Luck Brodie.

[Fresh]

When battling losers I don’t try hard, treat them like light spars
It’s to give the skill laissez-faire shot, while he takes that approach writing bars
fire, damn
My hits will crumble this bitch, someone call for a nurse
Cuz when I start swinging I’m dropping him over n over again like a zunto verse
lmfao dope
I don’t mean to gloat, but one punch will collapse ya throat
He won’t be able to handle disabuse, & need to do that to get a vote
dope
I’m sick when I speak. with punches that are to fast geek
If I drop some wack shit ill get banned for biting you last week
not a fan
Don’t get caught without that chrome boy, cuz I’ll shoot up ya block
Art better raise that armories gonna die, from every gun I got in stock
didn't like this as is
This poor bastard will get hacked to pieces.. fuck using the shotty
u think It's hard making ends meet, wait til police find your body
lmao nice
I will slump this chump.. till ya brains start spewing all day
you’ll be lay doubt missing, voters will think I used a colostomy wordplay
lay doubt starting to get used up but i liked this one though
I’ll drown this bitch n ditch the corpse.. w/ stab wounds to the liver
He’ll bleed out in Awatere grave, floating dead in that river
not a fan

vs

So Dilly took the fall for this stupid guy, couldnt handle bars are u surprised?
u should've rotted inside instead of Dave Mira, I just hope u die from suicide
dope
& dude between u & me? ya wifes a freak who likes to screw the team
I'm bangin her on the desktop, while ur jerkin it at ya computer screen
this was ok
u had covid, we get it, GOOD! cryin everyday about work like a bitch would
I was wishing u wouldnt ventilator, & hoped you'd suffocate before ya could
digging it
If were keeping score I'm a little confused, ur mad no one listens to to you
See i always thought u were straight 5, til i saw u bitch about winning by 2
not a fan
This is a body, black bagged, get mopped. ur garbage & wont ever get props
your verses are such trash, i bet you zunto recycles them in his next drops
not feeling it
U tried modding front lines to gain respect, but the penalties 4 losin today is death
thought you'd be able to fix the league NFL, but your worse than a replacement reff
kind of a reach imo
u insisted we tag team! why bruh? then i realized where this faggots mind was
because i never pegged you as a bitch, but its clear every night your wife does
lmao
u run from threats & compositions, but dog, ducking vets is not the mission
Its why u love to Pic battles, the image shows ur just hidin from competition
didn't like this

i have this 5-4 for miracle and thought his punches hit harder overall. cool battle though. good shit to both

v/ miracle

[Amen]

When battling losers I don’t try hard, treat them like light spars
It’s to give the skill laissez-faire shot, while he takes that approach writing bars
- Liked the play on words but based off what the word actually means, not much of an insult really. Ok so he takes the approach of letting his punches take course? There’s no real insult factor here.
My hits will crumble this bitch, someone call for a nurse
Cuz when I start swinging I’m dropping him over n over again like a zunto verse
- Pretty basic concept here, no real creativity and the simile was kind of lazy, IMO.
I don’t mean to gloat, but one punch will collapse ya throat
He won’t be able to handle disabuse, & need to do that to get a vote
- Bar # 2 referencing your fist, hits, punches in the setup. Like the punch tho, simple but effective.
I’m sick when I speak. with punches that are to fast geek
If I drop some wack shit ill get banned for biting you last week
- Bar # 3 referencing your fist, punches or hits man, very redundant to me. Punch was way to basic of a concept/angle.
Don’t get caught without that chrome boy, cuz I’ll shoot up ya block
Art better raise that armories gonna die, from every gun I got in stock
- Arm or He’s? Nah man… that’s a crazy reach. Appreciate the creativity attempt, tho. Execution also fell kind of flat and came off rather statement’ish.
This poor bastard will get hacked to pieces.. fuck using the shotty
u think It's hard making ends meet, wait til police find your body
- Pretty basic concept and execution.
I will slump this chump.. till ya brains start spewing all day
you’ll be lay doubt missing, voters will think I used a colostomy wordplay
- Cool idea, execution was lazy.
I’ll drown this bitch n ditch the corpse.. w/ stab wounds to the liver
He’ll bleed out in Awatere grave, floating dead in that river
- Don’t like this much.

So Dilly took the fall for this stupid guy, couldnt handle bars are u surprised?
u should've rotted inside instead of Dave Mira, I just hope u die from suicide
- Concept fire - think you could’ve did more with the execution as far as harshness and more direct.
& dude between u & me? ya wifes a freak who likes to screw the team
I'm bangin her on the desktop, while ur jerkin it at ya computer screen
- Old concept but nice flip, simple but effective direct shot.
u had covid, we get it, GOOD! cryin everyday about work like a bitch would
I was wishing u wouldnt ventilator, & hoped you'd suffocate before ya could
- Vent till later works, execution lacked but still effective, I thought.
If were keeping score I'm a little confused, ur mad no one listens to to you
See i always thought u were straight 5, til i saw u bitch about winning by 2
- I don’t really get this?
This is a body, black bagged, get mopped. ur garbage & wont ever get props
your verses are such trash, i bet you zunto recycles them in his next drops
- Ehhhh trash/recycle concepts are asinine lol. They are always used in this context and it never makes much sense to me.
U tried modding front lines to gain respect, but the penalties 4 losin today is death
thought you'd be able to fix the league NFL, but your worse than a replacement reff
- I like this, simple but effective direct shot.
u insisted we tag team! why bruh? then i realized where this faggots mind was
because i never pegged you as a bitch, but its clear every night your wife does
- Fire.
u run from threats & compositions, but dog, ducking vets is not the mission
Its why u love to Pic battles, the image shows ur just hidin from competition
- Doesn’t make much sense to me?

Close battle, Mir’s verse was fairly redundant tho, almost half of his verse setups all reference the same concept, his fist, his punches or his hits lol… To me that’s a lazy form of writing or articulation. Some cool ideas but basic executions. I think Art had the more direct verse and really wrote at Mir rather than taking the generic concept route. Appreciate a more direct verse than having to read random concepts. With that being said, I have Art Edging this battle with a more direct verse. And excuse the critical critique but you guys are veterans and feel I needed to be extra critical in my decision in order to pick a winner here.

Art with the edge.

[Smog]

Miracle


Opener- cool WP light hit
Zunto verse- ok I like how u use current RB shit a lot tho
Disabuse- cool I liked it
Banned- didn’t really like it
Armories- works but executed soft
Ends meet- nice I liked it
Lay doubt- kinda played now but pretty relevant with flip cool all in all
Closer- lazy flip.


Art

Opener- dope
Desktop- cool
Ventilator- dope I liked it
Win by 2- I’ve done it before. Played to me
Zunto recycle- ehh didn’t like it much
NFL- I liked this. Dope
Pegged u as a bitch- dope
Closer cool too


Well miracle had great ideas just lazy on the execution imo. Art was way more consistent here landed more hits overall, plus executed his concepts better. Good read but I got Art with the win here.


ART

[Wuxia]

When battling losers I don’t try hard, treat them like light spars
It’s to give the skill laissez-faire shot, while he takes that approach writing bars - Nice open.
My hits will crumble this bitch, someone call for a nurse
Cuz when I start swinging I’m dropping him over n over again like a zunto verse - Dope.
This poor bastard will get hacked to pieces.. fuck using the shotty
u think It's hard making ends meet, wait til police find your body - Great.


So Dilly took the fall for this stupid guy, couldnt handle bars are u surprised?
u should've rotted inside instead of Dave Mira, I just hope u die from suicide - FIre. Double nameflips. Double wordplays. Dope personal. Sheesh.
& dude between u & me? ya wifes a freak who likes to screw the team
I'm bangin her on the desktop, while ur jerkin it at ya computer screen -Dope.
If were keeping score I'm a little confused, ur mad no one listens to to you
See i always thought u were straight 5, til i saw u bitch about winning by 2 -Lmao.
u insisted we tag team! why bruh? then i realized where this faggots mind was
because i never pegged you as a bitch, but its clear every night your wife does -Roflz.

I have Art 4-3. There was a few wordplays that I've seen from Miracle which have been done before over the years, but that wasn't the problem for me, there really wasn't any difference in the concepts he used for the wordplay itself. For example, the Awatare grave, in this instance, unlike disabuse, the wordplay wasn't redundant, it was fresh and creative, but the concept itself is what hurt the bar, because I have seen that concept so many times, so many different variants, only with the wordplay substituted for another. Art's opener and the pegged you for a bitch punch were both LOTBs for me. And Miracle had that fire opener too, along with the zunto punch, which were both LOTBs. Art just ended up having one more quotable. The LOTBS canceled each other out.

v-Art

[Mac]

When battling losers I don’t try hard, treat them like light spars
It’s to give the skill laissez-faire shot, while he takes that approach writing bars
this sounds cool but conceptually speaking this is a bit of a miss. but +1 for execution

My hits will crumble this bitch, someone call for a nurse
Cuz when I start swinging I’m dropping him over n over again like a zunto verse
nice lmaoo

I don’t mean to gloat, but one punch will collapse ya throat
He won’t be able to handle disabuse, & need to do that to get a vote
cool straightforward

I’m sick when I speak. with punches that are to fast geek
If I drop some wack shit ill get banned for biting you last week
really ? lol too basic & you know it

Don’t get caught without that chrome boy, cuz I’ll shoot up ya block
Art better raise that armories gonna die, from every gun I got in stock
wp is dope, execution at the end is a bit iffy. but I'm going to count this

This poor bastard will get hacked to pieces.. fuck using the shotty
u think It's hard making ends meet, wait til police find your body
Dope

I will slump this chump.. till ya brains start spewing all day
you’ll be lay doubt missing, voters will think I used a colostomy wordplay
NOT COLOSTOMY AGAIN please

I’ll drown this bitch n ditch the corpse.. w/ stab wounds to the liver
He’ll bleed out in Awatere grave, floating dead in that river
throwaway-ish?

vs

So Dilly took the fall for this stupid guy, couldnt handle bars are u surprised?
u should've rotted inside instead of Dave Mira, I just hope u die from suicide
dope delicious

& dude between u & me? ya wifes a freak who likes to screw the team
I'm bangin her on the desktop, while ur jerkin it at ya computer screen
lol nice

u had covid, we get it, GOOD! cryin everyday about work like a bitch would
I was wishing u wouldnt ventilator, & hoped you'd suffocate before ya could
refreshing! cool

If were keeping score I'm a little confused, ur mad no one listens to to you
See i always thought u were straight 5, til i saw u bitch about winning by 2
Personal. cool

This is a body, black bagged, get mopped. ur garbage & wont ever get props
your verses are such trash, i bet you zunto recycles them in his next drops
not feeling

U tried modding front lines to gain respect, but the penalties 4 losin today is death
thought you'd be able to fix the league NFL, but your worse than a replacement reff
not feelign this one either

u insisted we tag team! why bruh? then i realized where this faggots mind was
because i never pegged you as a bitch, but its clear every night your wife does
nice

u run from threats & compositions, but dog, ducking vets is not the mission
Its why u love to Pic battles, the image shows ur just hidin from competition
okk closer

4.5v6 Art here. Dope ass battle. very consistent. some misses but at least it didnt hurt to read them. highlights are droppign like zunto verse, ends meet, armories. Dave mira, ventilator, and desktop

V/Art

[MV]

miracle
When battling losers I don’t try hard, treat them like light spars
It’s to give the skill laissez-faire shot, while he takes that approach writing bars
fire wp+light jab tho
My hits will crumble this bitch, someone call for a nurse
Cuz when I start swinging I’m dropping him over n over again like a zunto verse
FIRE
I don’t mean to gloat, but one punch will collapse ya throat
He won’t be able to handle disabuse, & need to do that to get a vote
this was ok
I’m sick when I speak. with punches that are to fast geek
If I drop some wack shit ill get banned for biting you last week
lol
Don’t get caught without that chrome boy, cuz I’ll shoot up ya block
Art better raise that armories gonna die, from every gun I got in stock
cool gunbar/wp light jab
This poor bastard will get hacked to pieces.. fuck using the shotty
u think It's hard making ends meet, wait til police find your body
this was a nice flip on making ends meet. played concept but perfect wording
I will slump this chump.. till ya brains start spewing all day
you’ll be lay doubt missing, voters will think I used a colostomy wordplay
this was ok
I’ll drown this bitch n ditch the corpse.. w/ stab wounds to the liver
He’ll bleed out in Awatere grave, floating dead in that river
that would be a cool wp but i i didnt really like the punch

vs


Art

So Dilly took the fall for this stupid guy, couldnt handle bars are u surprised?
u should've rotted inside instead of Dave Mira, I just hope u die from suicide
this was nice solid opener.
& dude between u & me? ya wifes a freak who likes to screw the team
I'm bangin her on the desktop, while ur jerkin it at ya computer screen
this is light. I've seen the concept before but its ok. it would have been really good with a tie in to miracle.
u had covid, we get it, GOOD! cryin everyday about work like a bitch would
I was wishing u wouldnt ventilator, & hoped you'd suffocate before ya could
fire
If were keeping score I'm a little confused, ur mad no one listens to to you
See i always thought u were straight 5, til i saw u bitch about winning by 2
ok
This is a body, black bagged, get mopped. ur garbage & wont ever get props
your verses are such trash, i bet you zunto recycles them in his next drops
light
U tried modding front lines to gain respect, but the penalties 4 losin today is death
thought you'd be able to fix the league NFL, but your worse than a replacement reff
i didnt really care for this one
u insisted we tag team! why bruh? then i realized where this faggots mind was
because i never pegged you as a bitch, but its clear every night your wife does
pfftt lmao
u run from threats & compositions, but dog, ducking vets is not the mission
Its why u love to Pic battles, the image shows ur just hidin from competition
ok closer


I have Art taking this one with a bit higher average across his bars. The Ventilator bar was especially vicious and in my opinion pushed Art forward to the win.

v/Art

[Art.]

Art Wins 5-1

Art 6-0
Miracle 4-2