RTTFC: RD1: Bag Mandela vs FAQeyeReddit (BAG WINS)

[miracle]

ROAD TO THE FL CHAMPION
3 BARS
DUE 7 DAYS
FIRST TO 4 WINS

@FaQEyeReddit @Bag Mandela

[Bag Mandela]

Safe

You're on Let's Beef, tryna control the game but still ya not a killer,
You keep using LB & RB n don't have ya finger on the trigger,
I'm outside of ya home faq, Rifle n scope strapped,
I'll cross-eye off my list when the sight where his nose at,
Parents crying it's so sad but they'll finally know that
Death is a paradox when Faq's lying with no cap

[FaQEyeReddit]

Bags!! You fucking wanker of course I got you round 1 ahhh shit ok ..

Ima make you PACK IT UP, pressure gone get bag stretched..
Tap the button and blast techs, shots open bags on the side like a tsa bag check…
This battle ima let it ring, bags OPENING DOORS fo’ me supposedly..
but watch how fast I’m going in on bags, like a fat kid bringing in the groceries..
You can’t escape these bars im too sharp..
You’re years behind these bars like robben island this your new start!..

[miracle]

Bags gets my vote.. first two were good.. I thought the first bar could of been crafted to hit harder but it was still cool, just could of been doper
FAQ first off let me start off by saying I liked the delivery of ur bars here.. u got it smoother reading… but now with less wording u need to hit harder.. like the rip thru bags/fat kid… ok line nothing wrong with it but it could of been harder n more creative .. its like one of the first things I think of when I hear the name bag.. try to go a little deeper than that if u know what I’m saying… also my problem with ur first bar was how many times u said ‘bag’.. it ruined it for me… maybe if u didn’t end with bags again in the bag check… whenever a words is repeated that many times it kills it for me.. u could of ended with like tsa check point or like ‘open bags on the side like a tsa agent… anything but bag again .. ur verse wasn’t bad just needs more heat… which bag’s brought more of

Vote bag

[Lady Poet]

This is tough choice both start off nicely smooth
both overall well done
I felt like bag overall deeper compare to FaQ

Vote-Bag

[daveDILLY]

bag had the stronger lines
faqeye was cool it just didnt hit wit me like bag did
bag just was harder wit the swings
winner bagman

[Slayerr.]

Bags opener was sick, second bar was nearly sick but I tripped reading it, reread it and tripped again so little bit too wordy for me and the closer was okay. FAQ your opener was nice but fell off after that
V/bag

[MV]

You're on Let's Beef, tryna control the game but still ya not a killer,
You keep using LB & RB n don't have ya finger on the trigger,
i fuck with this one
I'm outside of ya home faq, Rifle n scope strapped,
I'll cross-eye off my list when the sight where his nose at,
fire
Parents crying it's so sad but they'll finally know that
Death is a paradox when Faq's lying with no cap
this was dope


vs


Ima make you PACK IT UP, pressure gone get bag stretched..
Tap the button and blast techs, shots open bags on the side like a tsa bag check…
this was okay. i gigged you for using bag multiple times and not incorporating it into the rhyme scheme everytime.
This battle ima let it ring, bags OPENING DOORS fo’ me supposedly..
but watch how fast I’m going in on bags, like a fat kid bringing in the groceries..
this was dope
You can’t escape these bars im too sharp..
You’re years behind these bars like robben island this your new start!..
this bar is deceptively good. Robben Island being the place slavers used to gather and "restart" their trip to the Americas but it isnt attacking Bag in a significant way.



V/Bag...i have BM taking this one comfortably with Faq showing a lot of improvement in his bars, your concepts are always pretty dope its just a matter of making them attack properly

[miracle]

Bag Wins