3 bars
Due 8 days after setup
House rules
First to 4 wins.. 3-0=KO
@miracle @Unfukwitable
miracle
Unfukwitable
3 bars
Due 8 days after setup
House rules
First to 4 wins.. 3-0=KO
@miracle @Unfukwitable
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His bitch got em Under a love spell & Writin letters while her throat’s gettin smeared;
U grab the Penn & Teller how yall love is magical while she makin loads disappear
Dual Pistols I’ll ‘Pull a fast one’ & give u a gravesite when squeezin cease ya breathing,
I’m Bringin ‘smoke and mir ah’ be hidden in plain sight… cus Seeing is believing!
U acting like this wild cat but but it’s no one stampin you
Put this Meerkat in the field I’ll make sure he leaves as a stuffed animal.!
I’ll spray ya whole crew up. two 9s leave bodies in the street like thriller
The morgue’ll start building a case n police’ll have no luck doing that for ur killer
Nothing u drop Is eye catching, it’s wack n deserves boo’s
From what me n the sightseeing, we need to get some better views
Cops left looking for ya body. dump it in a lake somewhere gated..
He’ll be in that aquaphor a long time, they’ll pull his corpse out hydrated
Un
Saw the Penn & Teller wordplay n groaned in disappointment cos its been done to death but the punch turned out to be pretty funny.
Next bar had good wordplay.
Closer was alright, not often you see taxidermy bars.
Mira
Bodies in the street like thriller is a nice set up & punch was OK.
On fire with the set ups, "it's wack m deserves boos" is joke. Sightseeing/better views worked OK.
Closed strong, its stating the obvious he'll be hydrated if pulled from a lake but the aquaphor wordplay was fresh.
Close overall, wordplay & punches were pretty even but Un having the more tailored approach I got him edging it.
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