RW WK2: TheShaman vs daveDILLY (Open for feedback)

[Bag Mandela]

Wk2: Gay Bars Battle

Bars due Thursday 24th

Public voting closes Saturday 26th

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Overall public vote = 1 vote

MV’s vote = 1 vote

Bags vote = 1 vote

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This themed round requires that you disrespect your opponent from a homosexual point of view. As a basic example:



You cheated with my boyfriend, he said your cock is puny, half of mine,

When he jerked you off he had to use the illuminati sign




Some of you may feel uncomfortable, some of you may relish the challenge & some of you have been on a spree of writing like mighty morphin faggot rangers for years so this should come naturally to you.

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Posting explanations / references below your bars is strongly recommended.

Rebuttals, late drops & no shows are an instant loss.

(1 x 24hr extension per person for the whole event)

@TheShaman @daveDILLY

[daveDILLY]

lmao yall trippen
gay bars?

[TheShaman]

Dave, I'm too deep for you. Unbelievable like Biggie. And DP's the bassline.
Just embrace your fate: Amor Fati. Like Nietzsche said in The Gay Science.
And feel the steel on your cheek when you face this MF like it's Doom.
Your whole shattered to pieces when you get the Dick like it's Ahab's harpoon.

When I fuck this guy, I must be bi, cuz I like being inside a pussy.
It ain't black and white like I Love Lucy when I put a finger to his lips like a silent movie.
I'm a ghost from his past like Pat Stay talking bout Aye Verb's babysitter.
They call him Dave, but IRL he gets Dicks like his name is Richard.

I said Dave Dilly...... He's spilling oil like he's tryna save Willy.
But his asshole still looks like "Mickey Rourke's character Marve in Sin City"
In other words, he's feminine like Marcel Proust with his silver moon.
So after they tea bag him and fill him with milk he get's the little spoon.

[Bag Mandela]

Lol wrote an excess of bars and all were either funny or dope, props Shaman. Gonna leave this open for feedback til the next rounds ready to go.

[Jack Hallows]

Shaman needs to be stopped at all costs lmao. this is some super villain level shit

[Virbius]

Haha, big fan of what Shaman did here. His reference game is always interesting, kind of a signature aspect of his style, and the way he tied the niche Nietzsche reference into the theme didn’t disappoint. The ‘must be bi’ line was fire, lines like that one work well in juxtaposition to the more high brow Proust references etc. Little spoon bar was particularly creative too. Good job.

[MV]

Shaman needs to be stopped at all costs lmao. this is some super villain level shit

i second this. lol this verse is diabolically gay. plenty of quotable here. "shatter your whole" lmao giving him the little spoon AFTEr the t-bag. Shaman's concepts are always pretty dope