WK4
Punches due: Wednesday 10th September
Voting ends: Saturday 13th September
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@Wordz AhGod. @Baron Mynd
WK4
Punches due: Wednesday 10th September
Voting ends: Saturday 13th September
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
@Wordz AhGod. @Baron Mynd
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Originally Posted by Pharaohs Army
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In.
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Ready when you are
WORD P e r f e c t !
RESERVOIR GODS
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dropping here later.
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lmao went online for sex advice when ur tiny asian dick aint reach the poon
but ur biggest headache was the 8 year stretch of excuses she made not sleep with you
WORD P e r f e c t !
RESERVOIR GODS
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I'm happy you made it bro.
no weapons, just hands, pussy.. cos I don't like that glare in ur eye
gods fists r polar opposites, the left'll lift em up while the right'll just bear in mind.
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baron, simple personal, enjoyed it
wordz, idk what this was, way too convoluted and the tie ins didn't give it any extra sting
v/ baron
grab the blade, or do I bomb him first? I’m committing homi’s, WORSE:
if he’s on his way to work? I’m shooting ativan.. his death will REALLY calm my nerves
V/ Baron Mynd
Baron, It's madness that this is actually Wordz. Who would use the same alias to post that on Reddit is a mystery; then, who would actually ask Reddit for relationship advice is even deeper of a mystery. The bar itself was straight to the point and personal, no wp or name flip to speak of. But it wasn't needed.
Wordz. Basic, the name flip here doesn't connect or really even make sense. Think you could of done a lot more with the Bear in mind/Baron Mynd flip. Also, you knew that he was coming personal in this one. It feels like you just typed up something generic, even though Baron recently wrote a whole chronicle full of personal ammo you could of dug into. Barons Life Story
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BM - solid punch flowed well as good personal hit.
Wordz - felt like the bear in mind missed as the end of your punch, good concept, good flow for the bar just missing the impact
Vote bm
Never did care for Mondo Thugz...
Not what I expected in this battle
Baron came direct and personal pretty straight to the point and cut throat but there was nothing more to it really just straight in. Wordz came with a different approach completely and tried the name flip but baron and bare in doesn’t work at all - maybe in some hill billy part of America it could work but I think for most of the population it would be a reach. Despite that though it was still a well constructed bar and written well.
V/baron more direct and more of a hit
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