Wk 12 - King Dee Bee 4-2 -VS- Fresh 1-0 - Fresh Wins

[Phalanx]

Punches due Thursday
Voting ends on Sunday

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@King Dee Bee @Fresh

[Fresh]

u could make a bad situation worse.. if I were you, I’d be retreating
If I add insult to injury, it’s because you were ugly before this beating

[King Dee Bee]

You calling Me Ugly? Have you seen your..... nevermind

You're a fruit and we all know it was easy to pick you as the next target,
Its guaranteed imma PROduce no matter how Fresh mark it.

[Slayerr.]

Fresh I liked this not sure why it’s quite simple but comes off as clever. Cleanly worded and executed

King - I like your concept I really do. I just think “I’m going to produce” isn’t a hard hitter and more of a brag even though I rate linking it with fresh mark it I just felt it lacked sting

V/fresh

[Blas]

fresh- simple, effect, it's ok
king- did not enjoy

v/ fresh

[Mac]

I'm not sure what King meant with his bar, but either way it was pretty forced imo. I think you could have used another angle at him. it needs to be more aggresssiveee. Fresh was solid and gave me a chuckle, it also had potential to be more harsssh but it did the job.

v Fresh

[Phalanx]

Vote Fresh

This battle was a little underwhelming, but that's because I hold you both in high regard as writers. Fresh had a clean jab. No real complaints, just limited sting. King had a couple of knocks. Fresh market has been done, w/ produce tie ins. That and the Imma produce portion felt forced and put a weird stumble in the bar. Whole bar felt rushed.

[Blue Bayou]

This battle was sooo bad

Vote fresh

[Phalanx]

Fresh wins 5-0.